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Stained – Chapters 20 and 21
“Then, suddenly, the door slammed open. At first the three men thought it had been the wind, but no…in walked a kid. It was a very young kid. So young and shapeless in fact, that we couldn’t quite tell at first whether it was a boy or a girl-”
This time the interruption of the story was caused by a beer mat hitting Earl on the head.
“Fuck you, Earl! I was twenty and I DID NOT look like a boy!” Bette, who had come to fetch her drink, yelled laughingly.
“She’s right, Earl, that’s a lot of artistic freedom, even for you. She didn’t look anything like a little boy. In fact, she was drop dead gorgeous.”
“Aw, thanks Simcha,” Bette smiled.
“It’s true,” Jake chimed in. “We were all so taken aback that it took us about three minutes just to close our mouths.”
“Yeah, I remember that,” Bette grinned.
“Drop dead gorgeous brunette, scared little boy, what’s the difference, really? I’m trying to tell a story, dammit!” whined Earl, hands thrown up in desperation.
Chapter 21
It had been a hot summer’s day and the evening brought little reprieve. The two old men sitting at the counter of the quiet little bar did the one thing you could do on an evening like this: sip on a cold beer.
The young bartender was busying himself with cleaning glasses and other such less than urgent tasks. He didn’t mind the slow night and neither did his two regular customers. Actually, pretty much every night was a slow night for them.
The young man was just about to ask his customers if they cared for another round, when the door suddenly flung open. The three men carelessly glanced in its direction, ready to turn back to their beers once the source of disruption had been identified. And then they froze.
In walked the most beautiful woman any of them had ever seen. Three jaws dropped and three pairs of eyes glued themselves to the new arrival.
The woman had beautiful brown curls that danced around her perfect face with each deliberate step she took. She wore a stunning red dress, the image of which burned itself onto the gaping men’s retinas. Her lips were painted the same bright red color as her dress and her eyes were made dark, both by cosmetics and something within.
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(43 votes, average: 3.44 out of 5)
Awwwww so sad, but still beautiful. I actually had the image of Bette as a hooker in my head. O.O And man do I fail. I was wondering, “What kind of name is Simcha?” And now I know, and knowing is half the battle. G.I. JOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOE!
Really like your story, and especially this chapter. Thanks.
Okay, I don’t know what was better…your author’s notes at the beginning or this fabulous story. You definitely have a way with words and I enjoyed both very much. Thank you for sharing your thought provoking story, as well as your rather interesting caffeine induced rant.
This story is GREAT!
No more Coke for you…….;)
Baby, start hitting that cokebottle, because if this is what comes out of your keyboard then… My god! So… incredibly… I cant even find words for it… wonderfull is an understatement!
That was so beautiful. Not friends just someone to hang around with That was sad. That is call friendship. Yet they called each other misfits. I like the word and the meaning in this chapter. We all have misfits in our life thanksGod thanks
Wow, it is nice to meet others who helped Bette through tought times. I would love to have non-friends (but really friends) like those men. Now Tina is meeting these very special men in Bette’s life.
Wow this is awesome and love it!!!!!!!!!
whoa, harsh lives…great stuff…
Luv the story…More please.
Definitely a sweet story! Succeeded in getting my obsessive mind off B&T for a while… That speaks volumes! ;)
Love their story. Love your story-telling skills. It’s all so captivating. Reached a point at which I thought I might actually, unbelievably, be more interested in their story than in B&T.
maybe you should try 7up… lol… love this story… please continue
this was nice i hope it continues a bit in the bar b4 B & T head off 4 some nookey.
That was absolutely enthralling!! Thank you!