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“What? Weren’t we talking about art?”
“We’re talking about my passion. There is nothing in this world that I feel greater passion for than you.”
Tina waited for Bette to continue, but when no more
words were forthcoming, she scooted up against Bette’s body and gave
her lips a soft gentle kiss.
“I love you Bette.”
“You do more than that. Tina, you make me believe in
good things. Can you imagine how… how big that is? How much you’ve
given me… I love you too… Sometimes I can’t…”
This time when Tina silenced Bette with a
breath-stealing kiss, Bette welcomed the distraction wholeheartedly.
******
“Hey Bette, remember you said you wanted to talk about more ‘intellectual’ things? I have an idea.”
Bette looked closely at Tina and was relieved that she didn’t seem to be offended anymore. “What is it baby?”
“Let’s talk about the movie! Let’s criticize it and stuff.”
“Critique it, you mean?”
“Yeah! I’ll start.”
Bette leaned against one armrest and regarded Tina,
who appeared to be gathering her thoughts. I love this woman, she idly
mused.
“Okay. I think the movie wasn’t so great. The
dialogue is dated, and the theme is obscure. Well, it’s still relevant
in some pockets of occurrences, but ‘man against nature’ is an old
refrain that the filmmakers didn’t even try to update! Maybe it was
relevant when the movie was first made, but now there are more
contemporary challenges and concerns that the filmmakers could’ve
inserted or integrated.”
“Uh…” Bette couldn’t believe what she was hearing.
Not only was Tina arguing intelligently, but she was actually
convincing Bette that the movie she had just enjoyed was nothing but
*****.
“But it’s a remake, Tina. Of course they’d stick to the original.”
“I just think that if they were going to spend
millions of dollars remaking something, they would’ve made it more…
important.”
“Wow.”
“Yeah? You like my intellectual talk?” Tina teased.
“Oh yeah.” Bette scooted as close to Tina as
possible. When that wasn’t enough, she ended up straddling Tina’s lap.
“Go ahead, honey, you’re turning me on.”
“Look who’s turning it to *****?” Tina laughed. Then
she made Bette gasp by quickly leaning forward and licking Bette from
the collarbone to the back of her ear in one slow swipe.
“Oh my God…” Bette moaned.
“Talking’s overrated anyway. I think hands-on
demonstrations are more stimulating… Or hands-on stimulations are
more demonstrating? Which is the correct one Bette?”
“Don’t care.” Bette rumbled deep in her throat and tangled her fingers in Tina’s hair. “Just show me.”
Tina kissed Bette but she kept her hands on Bette’s
hips. When Bette wriggled impatiently, Tina broke off and started
chuckling. Bette frowned in confusion.
“Tina, look it’s a remake of King Kong! What did you
expect?” Bette, thinking that Tina wanted to talk some more, prompted
with a world-weary sigh.
“I don’t know, Planet of the Apes? Well, that remake sucked too.”
“Really? I haven’t seen it.”
“Oh? I’ll rent it out next weekend and we can have
another one of these intellectual conversations.” Tina smiled widely.
Bette made a face. Tina laughed again.
“Come on, Tina. you’ve made your point. Now kiss me please…”
Tina gave in. In a few minutes, she had Bette
thinking that how absolutely ***** amazing Professor Kennard was in
giving oral examinations.
The End
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funny and cute, but also sexy. Very nicely done.
haha, that’s so interesting. great try.
I nearly fell out of my chair laughing at Bette’s realization that Tina called the movie crap. Something tells me that this wouldn’t have taken place just a couple of weeks after they first met, but rather a few months. Bette seems less dorky and anxious than she did in “I Fall Behind.” Maybe the cause of that will be revealed in another stand-alone. This was definitely cute and hot as usual with these 2 ladies.
yeah! was over the moon seeing your post=) is this gonna be a sequel?..love the bette you’ve created..
Fabulous…your writing is absolutely fabulous!!! It’s smart, witty, fun, loving, sexy, smooth, and totally real. Truly, I love reading whatever you write. Thanks…now bring on the next stand alone, or another story…either way, I will be right here reading!
Does the fact that I had to go through 2 successive power failures to finish reading this tell you how much I enjoyed it. Reboot and rereboot. I’m with Tina. I’ll take Fay Wray and the furry doll anyday.
it’s utterly cute and funny, love your style and your writing, keep bringing more stand-alones…your post made me actually really happy :)
love the banters! i mean “I think hands-on demonstrations are more stimulating… Or hands-on stimulations are more demonstrating?” – just brilliant. you are awesome.
I love your characters. Nerdy neruotic Bette is funny and cute. I like how tina balances her out. More stories please!!!
cute
Thanks for posting, great at stand alone or chapters…I’ll take anything, your easy to read, great real life dialogue and banter..!!!!
I love the way you portray B&T in your stories. I will also read anything you write. Please do so soon!
intellectual sex…now that is fun!!! Thanks and bring us more soon
I love your stories, you write them so well
I like this start, more please!
They are so funny and so cute. Hope you bring more fun of Bette and Tina. Ok thanks!
7 girl – absolutely loved it. your dialogue was making me laugh. loved your writing. thanks.fergz – right behind you
Yay, back so quickly!!! Excellent, loved the ‘oral exam’ comment. Keep the story going please…..
OHHHH NOOOO! The end again? WHY? (And I’m asking in a totaly intellectual way!)
very cute! keep writing. I’ll be reading.
That was great and funny.
You’re Fun and Funny! Loved this. Thank you so very much for writing. My favorite line … “…. You’re all sarcastic and… scary. Please come back to bed, Tina. Please?”
really cute, and fun, I like these stand alones, they should be done more often. thanx!!!!!
LOL..~ awesome!
That was great….I like the way you first made me underestimate Tina and the you gave her a great comeback!!! I know it was a stand alone, but please….just a little follow-up about Tinas oral skills :o))
Really enjoyed that,nice to see your back!!! was that a once off or will we be seeing more!!
Yay! So cute and sweet and lovely…and sexy! Can otally identify with being turned on by intellectual discussions…I wish I could have those lectures from B&T!! Loved it. Can’t wait to read your other posts.