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Stick With U: Chapter 8 (Part 2)
– do you still love your father? – Carmen asked and Shane smiled before start to laugh
– well, long story short…I hate the motherfucker, and he’s not my father…my father in this case would be my grandpa, he…he’s just the sperm donor or some bullshit like that but uh-uh no way that man is my father – Shane lowered her head and they stayed like that for a couple of seconds without say anything -…do you wanna go for a walk? – Shane suggested, Carmen smiled sweetly and nodded
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Carmen opened the front door of her house but didn’t step inside, instead she placed her hand on her neck and turned to face Shane, she looked at those beautiful hazel eyes that since the first moment they locked stares, she knew…it was Shane, Carmen bit her bottom lip before talk in a sexy throaty voice
– do you wanna come inside, I don’t know have a drink?-
– I’d love to – Shane answered in her very husky voice and lowered her gaze from Carmen’s eyes to Carmen’s lips. Carmen noticed this but decided to play hard, they walked inside the house a nice comfy house and made their way to the kitchen
– So…you wanna a beer, jack or Smirnoff? – Carmen asked opening the fridge
– What do you want? – Shane asked standing behind Carmen really close to her, Shane’s front slightly pressed against Carmen’s back, Shane place her right hand on Carmen’s that was holding the fridge door open and the left one she placed it on Carmen’s flat stomach, and rested her head on Carmen’s shoulder breathing on her neck, Carmen shivered under Shane’s breath and bit her bottom lip, she was done of playing hard, she turned around facing Shane and wrapped her arms on Shane’s neck while Shane wrapped hers on Carmen’s waist, Carmen closed a lil bit more of the space between them so their noses were touching
– I want…you – Carmen said before close the space between their mouths, the kiss began slowly and started to get fervently when Shane’s tongue started to explore Carmen’s mouth and Carmen did the same, and the battle for control started, Shane roamed her hands all along Carmen’s back, while Carmen cupped Shane’s face trying to deepener the kiss but it was just humanly impossibly, so in frustration she slammed Shane on the kitchen walk pinning her wrist above her head, Shane lowered herself eventually sliding from Carmen’s hold and wrapped her arms around her waist lifting her up trying to get to feel her more
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lovin it!!! Great to see Shane open up to Carm, and Too Hot is one of my fav scenes…Damn I woulda smacked Al and Jen upside the head :D
yeah bout that i wanted to apologize bout it in the author’s note but i forgot it…when i write its usually me sitting on the pc with my ipod, and most of the times i’ve no idea what im going to write i mean i know the plot that im using and i know where the story is going to go but i don’t plan the chapters just sit and write…and that alice and jen scene just came up, after i read it it bugged me hahaha, but i didn’t change it, but again it really bugged me =)…
Argh! Why did they have to come and ruin it?? Lol.. great chapter..
haha you can believe alice doin that! haha
nice update…
lol!!! could alice and jenny have a worse timing???? lolanyway god to see shane comfortable with carmen……things should get even better.pps!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the game got interupted by alice n jenny. sucha pity, wld love to read on about what happened next. haha.. great update!