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Stick With U: Chapter 8 (Part 2)
– oh yeah – Shane whispered back, they start kissing each other and Carmen immediately placed her hands on her head, as the kiss became hotter, Carmen began to rock forward and backward and grinding against Shane, Shane was moving to Carmen’s rhythm not knowing where to place her hands and when Carmen bent backward, Shane fell into a moment of weakness (or clarity) and grabbed Carmen’s ass
– Mmmhmm – Carmen tried to broke the kiss but Shane didn’t let her by sucking Carmen’s bottom lip – mmhm – Carmen tried again this time removing Shane’s hands from her ass – wow! – Carmen said lifting Shane hands and pushing her down – lay down…bitch! – Carmen said bending down but in her way she found up with Shane’s right hand making her way to her breast, Carmen grabbed Shane wrist and pinned her hand above her head before it reached her destination
– did I say you can touch me? –
– No – Shane answered trying to lifting herself a little but Carmen didn’t allowed her
– and why? – Carmen asked stroking Shane’s flat stomach
– Because I lost – Shane was turned on by Carmen’s control
– That’s right and…?- Carmen stroking where each time more low Shane chuckled but didn’t answered the question – what I didn’t hear you –
– Because you won –
– That’s right I won – Carmen said and kissed Shane fervently, Carmen was starting her way down Shane when they heard someone clearing her throat by the door the freeze at the moment and slowly looked at the door just to see 2 women standing in there
– Well…that was…- Alice said smirking
– Too hot – jenny complete the sentence also smirking
– Here are your 20 bucks Al – jenny said giving Alice a bill
– I told you…Shane wouldn’t last anything without placing her hands on ones of Carmen attributes – Alice took the bill from jenny’s hand both of them were still smirking
– What…- Carmen began
– The fucking hell – Shane continued
– are you doing here!? – They both ended
– well uhm…we were curious…I mean its not like every day you can see Shane on a real date – Alice shrugged
– You couldn’t just talk? – Carmen asked still on top of Shane
– Well, I wanted to do the girly chat you know…and I came in here and I found jenny who was about to leave, and she also wanted the girly chat you know, movies, date’s details, maybe some ice cream or take out or drinks according the date’s details, so we waited for you, we were on the backyard and we heard some noises, we came in and we just couldn’t interrupt the whole game thing… and by the way Carmen im totally going to steal your game to spice a lil more my sexual life with Dane – Alice winked at the both girls on the bed with frustration looks
– Ok, I think, I should go – Shane stood up and kissed Carmen who was kneeled on the bed softly on the lips, she walked out of the room passing her friends
– What? Shane! Don’t kiss goodbye for us? – Alice asked pouting – what? – She asked when she looked to the “thanks a lot” look on Carmen face
TBC
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lovin it!!! Great to see Shane open up to Carm, and Too Hot is one of my fav scenes…Damn I woulda smacked Al and Jen upside the head :D
yeah bout that i wanted to apologize bout it in the author’s note but i forgot it…when i write its usually me sitting on the pc with my ipod, and most of the times i’ve no idea what im going to write i mean i know the plot that im using and i know where the story is going to go but i don’t plan the chapters just sit and write…and that alice and jen scene just came up, after i read it it bugged me hahaha, but i didn’t change it, but again it really bugged me =)…
Argh! Why did they have to come and ruin it?? Lol.. great chapter..
haha you can believe alice doin that! haha
nice update…
lol!!! could alice and jenny have a worse timing???? lolanyway god to see shane comfortable with carmen……things should get even better.pps!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the game got interupted by alice n jenny. sucha pity, wld love to read on about what happened next. haha.. great update!