Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.
Stick With U: Chapter 8 (Part 2)
– wait, wait – Carmen asked without taking her mouth away from Shane’s
– What’s wrong? – Shane asked in concern pulling apart and staring into Carmen’s eyes without let her go from the hold on her waist, Carmen cupped Shane’s face and kissed her one more time just to reassuring her that nothing was wrong
– let’s go to the bedroom – Carmen smirked taking a tuft from Shane’s eyes – I…want you – she kissed her – to play a game – kiss again – with me – Shane laughed in surprised but nodded with a smirk before follow Carmen into her bedroom, Carmen took Shane’s hand and pushed her gently so she’ll sit down on the edge of the bed Carmen took Shane’s other hand and helped herself to straddle Shane’s lap, she took a glance to Shane who was smiling under her bent back on her hands for support
– so..?- Shane spoke while she leant forwards so her mouth was just inches away from Carmen’s
– oh right…this game is called…too hot – Carmen smirked, and Shane raised her brows in curiosity – and…this is how we play, we start kissing- Carmen said and closed the space between their lips – and we can’t stop kissing – she added without separating her lips from Shane’s, Carmen slide her tongue on Shane’s mouth and Shane couldn’t wait anymore so she slide her hands thru Carmen’s leg unto Carmen’s ass – but we also can touch…no touching – she said taking Shane’s hands Shane chuckled in Carmen’s mouth, – so then if you touch me then you lose – Carmen finally pulled apart so she could look into Shane’s eyes – and let me get to do whatever I want to you – Carmen smirked
– And what happen if you touch me? – Shane asked kissing Carmen
– Then I lose – Carmen whispered in a temptress way the lose part – and you get to do whatever you want to me – Carmen smirked, Shane smiled and kissed Carmen – so…are you ready? – Carmen asked whispering
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.



lovin it!!! Great to see Shane open up to Carm, and Too Hot is one of my fav scenes…Damn I woulda smacked Al and Jen upside the head :D
yeah bout that i wanted to apologize bout it in the author’s note but i forgot it…when i write its usually me sitting on the pc with my ipod, and most of the times i’ve no idea what im going to write i mean i know the plot that im using and i know where the story is going to go but i don’t plan the chapters just sit and write…and that alice and jen scene just came up, after i read it it bugged me hahaha, but i didn’t change it, but again it really bugged me =)…
Argh! Why did they have to come and ruin it?? Lol.. great chapter..
haha you can believe alice doin that! haha
nice update…
lol!!! could alice and jenny have a worse timing???? lolanyway god to see shane comfortable with carmen……things should get even better.pps!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the game got interupted by alice n jenny. sucha pity, wld love to read on about what happened next. haha.. great update!