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    Subtleties * Chapter 11

    Story written on December 17, 2010 by scaf.
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    “What are we doing?”

    "Nothing, it’s just…"

    "Just what?"

    Tina slid off Bette’s lap when she felt the brunette attempt to stand.

    "Bette?"

    "This is fast, don’t you think?"  Bette paced in front of the sexually frustrated blonde, "I mean, how long have we known each other?  Not long.  And you’ve never been with a woman; what if you decide this isn’t what you want?"

    Tina looked up from the couch.  Bette was upset and scared and was desperately trying to hold on to the last bit of control she felt she had.  The blonde could see through all of that, it’s what endeared her to the gallery owner.  Bette was an amazing romantic, but the romantic in her was in a constant tug of war with the sensible and controlling nature she naturally possessed.

    "This is what I want, Bette.  You are what I want.  How many times do I have to tell you before you believe it?"

    "But how do you know, Tina?  How can you be sure?"

    "I just am.  And for the record, if you really want me to be honest, no one is ever totally sure.  There isn’t a sure thing Bette.  I can’t promise perfection but I can promise you that there is no where else I’d rather be.  No one else I’d rather be with.  I know your scared, so am I, but what good would it do to just walk away?  Why does the fear win?"

    "But…"

    "But what?"

    Bette shook her head, unable to say the words.

    "Come here," Tina held her hand out and motioned for Bette to come to her.  As the brunette closed the distance, Tina maintained eye contact.  The minute Bette was close enough, Tina spoke,

    "I know your relationship was fucked, Bette.  I know you’re scared of getting hurt but it’s too late.  You invited me into your life and now I’m here.  And there’s honestly no where else for me.  Tonight was just beautiful – You created that.  You’ve made me feel things I have never felt.  Believe it or not, I am just as terrified as you, but there’s no turning back.  We are on this road, Bette.  You and me.  This is not about me wanting to fuck you.  And it’s not about me trying to rush things, because I honestly believe that when you find something that is right, you should do whatever you can to hold onto it.  It’s about…"

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    1. Well…”Bette cocked her head to one side and smiled”…yeap the proper response is what Tina did! Whooooooo-wheeeee…I think this is the first time I’ve heard of TK taking control during their first time…clever, hot, erotic twist to FF. Kudos!!

    4. Hot, hot, hot! To answer your question, no I wouldn’t want to slow it down one second if I was Tina. Actually, I think I would have assaulted her a long time ago. Maybe even in the library ;D Thanks for posting that amazing chapter, can’t wait for the next!!

    6. Wow, that was awesome. Surely we will get to see Bette returning the passion to Tina. Her first time being made love to by Bette will be mind blowing for her. Cn hardly wait for round 2. Awesome chapter. Thanks for bringing it to us.

    18. So sweet and sexy. Love in-charge Tina. I didn’t realize until the end that I was holding my breath, as well. Definitely brought that one off the back burner and to a roaring boil!

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