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Subtleties * Chapter 11
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"You feel so good," Tina moaned so loudly she wondered if her neighbors could hear.
"Bed," Bette gasped.
"We have all night for the bed. I want to take you now."
Tina tried to stand but failed to balance. As they fell to the floor, Bette found herself pinned beneath the hungry blonde,
"Tell me what you want," Tina ordered
Bette bit her bottom lip and smiled, "This is your first time with a woman. This should be about you."
"But it is about me. I want to take you." Tina leaned forward, engaging Bette in a breathless kiss. "I want you to understand how much I want this. You." Tina rubbed her body lengthwise against Bette as she gently slipped off the bewildered brunette. Tina kneeled back and unbuttoned Bette’s jeans, pulling them off in a slow teasing manner.
Bette was intoxicated by Tina’s sense of lustful control. No one had ever looked at her like that – ever. Bette had made love with a number of women throughout her life, but no one had ever elicited such a carnal and immediate response from her body. She could feel the wetness pool between her legs as she pulled herself up to lean back on her elbows, watching as Tina rid herself of the rest of her own clothing.
Tina looked down at Bette and smiled. Bette Porter was the most stunning creature, male or female, she had ever seen.
"What are you thinking?" Bette whispered.
"I’m not sure where to start," Tina replied honestly. "But I do think you were right about the bed. Here, let me help you up."
Bette took Tina’s hand, but after pulling herself to a stand, she quickly wrapped her arms around the blonde, lifting her and carried her to the bedroom. Laying her down, Bette covered Tina’s body with her own,
"Jesus, Tee. Let me take care of you."
"Worried I won’t be any good?"
"Bette pulled back, stunned, "God no, that’s not"
"Sshhhhhh," Tina held her finger to Bette’s lips, watching in awe as the brunette took the blonde’s finger in her mouth, sucking gently.
"I’m teasing you."
"Are you?" Bette arched her brow
"Hmmm Mmmm. Tina sucked in a breath as Bette continued her ministrations. Tina removed her finger from Bette’s mouth and traced a wet line down the brunette’s chest, "I’m a quick study," Tina nipped at Bette’s lips, " And I did quite a bit of research earlier in the day."
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Well…”Bette cocked her head to one side and smiled”…yeap the proper response is what Tina did! Whooooooo-wheeeee…I think this is the first time I’ve heard of TK taking control during their first time…clever, hot, erotic twist to FF. Kudos!!
Excellent! Thanks for posting!
FUCKKKKKKKKK… this is so good… and now its bette’s turn… pps
Hot, hot, hot! To answer your question, no I wouldn’t want to slow it down one second if I was Tina. Actually, I think I would have assaulted her a long time ago. Maybe even in the library ;D Thanks for posting that amazing chapter, can’t wait for the next!!
WOW!!! This sizzles! They sizzle! This Tina is breathtaking. Bette has met her match.
Wow, that was awesome. Surely we will get to see Bette returning the passion to Tina. Her first time being made love to by Bette will be mind blowing for her. Cn hardly wait for round 2. Awesome chapter. Thanks for bringing it to us.
Way to go Tina! Bette’s turn now… PPS
That was amazingly hot. Way to go Tina, now it’s Bette’s turn.
Phew! This Tina is steaming hot! Timid and alpha at the same time! Explosive combination…
what a wonderful first time! I’m glad Tina took control.
Bravo Tina!Amazing chapter,thank you.
WOW this is hot and Tina is so Alpha lol but now its Bette turn and show Tina the Alpha Bette is here lol. Please post more, thanks!
Well, that warmed things up – thank you, Tina!!! And thank you for letting Tina take over!
I think it’s time for round 2! Awesome post scaf thank you :)
Oh wow that was so good. Thanks for the present
nice…really enjoyed tina’s taking control…can’t wait to see power of bette
Oh wow! That was just absolutely hot! Thank you awesome chapter.
So sweet and sexy. Love in-charge Tina. I didn’t realize until the end that I was holding my breath, as well. Definitely brought that one off the back burner and to a roaring boil!