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    Subtleties * Chapter 9

    Story written on December 9, 2010 by scaf.
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    Jesus, It’s cold…

    "Thinking of you." 

    "Oh yeah?"

    "Yeah.  Come with me.  I want to show you something," Bette held her hand out to Tina and pulled her toward the back of the gallery,

    "Have you been here all night?"

    "Maybe," Bette smiled.  "Part of the reason I left yesterday was because I really wanted to finish this by tonight."

    "Finish what, the show?  Where are you taking me?"

    "Close your eyes." 

    Bette slid the doors open and ushered an unassuming Tina into the back room of the gallery.  All night Bette had busied herself finalizing the hanging of the show and the results were nothing short of amazing.  Tricia Lee was known throughout Europe for her glass sculptures and Bette’s gallery would be hosting her first show stateside.

    "Open your eyes," Bette commanded.  Tina complied and her breath caught in her throat,

    "Oh my…Bette" 

    Bette watched as the blonde’s face lit up in awe.  The reaction had been worth the sleepless night Bette had spent here in the gallery, hanging the last of the glass mobiles.  Over 4o mobiles hung from the ceiling, glass spheres of multiple shapes, sizes, and colors hung effortlessly, swaying ever so gently as the central air hummed.  The room was dim, with the lighting meticulously focused on some of the more colorful spheres – the result was mesmerizing.  Bette reluctantly pulled her gaze from Tina’s childlike glow and followed Tina’s stare.  The blonde shook her head and stammered,

    "This is…I can’t believe you did this…this is amazing. It’s beautiful.  It’s…."

    "The only way I could think of to show you how truly grateful I was for yesterday."  Bette finished.

    Tina looked at Bette and smiled

    "Before you say I didn’t have to, I did.  I wanted you to be the first person to see it.  I wanted to share this with you.  And only you."

    "I don’t know what to say, Bette.  I’ve seen her work before but this…the way you hung the mobiles, the way their lit, it’s…"

    "Almost as beautiful as you.  God, Tina, the look on your face when you opened your eyes."  Bette swallowed the lump in her throat.

    Tina raised her glass of wine in a toast,

    "To the most amazing woman I have ever known and to a stellar sophomore effort."  As Tina clinked Bette’s glass and took a sip, she continued, "Jesus, wait until tomorrow night.  You’re going to be the talk of the town.  You’re going to have people knocking down your doors to see this."

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    6. Awww Dang!!!!, Did we hear glass sculptures breaking? That was awesome. Maybe we’ll get to read the rest next chapter. Loved Bette saying, “Not that kind of nervous.” Thanks for posting.

    10. “If I calm you, why is it that your heart is beating so fast?” OMG, that was just AMAZING!! Don’t let us here like that!!! Come on, I cant to know what happens next!! :D Thank you for posting, this story is my favorite in a long time.

    11. Wow, there is just subtle about this story. This story is just like the fine Jennifer Beals I saw on the cover of More magqazine this afternoon. It is warm, sexy,and smooth as this brandy I am enjoying. PPS

    13. Wow, that was so awesome! I really like your characters, and their unpredictability. Thanks for sharing the story – it’s so sweet. And they’re so nice to each other now! Yay! lol. Thanks so much for posting!!

    18. This certainly didn’t read as if you were finding it tough to write. It was beautiful – romantic, sweet and …. oh, there was something else, what was it? …. oh yes, HOT! Thank you!!

    21. Amazing this has me skipping in the stars. I can just imagine the mobiles all on fire with the lights. Great job I can feel the heat between the two of them. You’re amazing and thanks for sharing

    32. Everybody has uttered every comment that I could ever make! But I will try anyway. This is so AWESOME! You are a gifted writer, keep up the fabulous work! Please Post Soon!

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