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    Subtleties * Chapter 9

    Story written on December 9, 2010 by scaf.
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    Jesus, It’s cold…

    Tina walked around the room, staring at beautiful fixtures, the colors reflecting off of the artistic glass and onto her beautiful face.  Bette kept her distance, casually following Tina as she walked around the room.  The blonde turned to find the gallery owner’s gaze fixed upon her.

    "What?"

    "You know, it occurred to me that I didn’t answer your question yesterday."

    "Which question is that?"

    "Why you?"

    Tina smiled, "You don’t have to answer that."

    "Yes I do."  Bette moved forward and held Tina’s hand in hers.  They continued to amble about the room, a slow and steady stride,

    "That day we met, I was in the store because my ex wrote a book.  Jodie Lerner and I were together for a few horrible years and then it ended. I found this space and I left the lesbian interfuckingconnectiveness hell that is West Hollywood and started a new life. But Jodie, she just wouldn’t let it go.  Everything that went wrong and all of the shit she did is in the book for all to read, except she made me the wrongdoer.    She made me the liar and the cheat.  It’s horrible and full of lies and because her ex’s name is Bev and not Bette, I can’t sue. "

    "You went to Barnes and Noble to read it?  Why would you do that to yourself?"

    "Because I had to see it for myself. And no sooner did I close that fucking tome of lies my phone rings and it’s James to tell me that Helena Peabody – one of Jodie’s flings, by the way – was trying to steal Lee away.  My past and my future and this show at risk and then…Poof!"

    "Poof?"

    As Bette continued, she unclasped Tina’s hand and put some distance between them.  It was as though the effort of sharing her heart was almost too much for her.  The emotion of the moment, the truth of her feelings; it was all so soon and yet, it felt right,

    "I was upset over Jodie’s lies and terrified that Peabody would ruin this show; I was having a mini breakdown and then I looked up, saw you, and poof."  Bette cleared her throat and her eyes began to water, "I saw this amazingly beautiful blonde looking at me with pure…horror.  Everything else was gone.  All of it.  And all I could think about was how I was going to convince you that I wasn’t the beast you had just witnessed. 

    Tina, I know we hardly know each other but you, just being near you, seeing you, talking to you…you calm me.  I don’t know how else to explain it.  And this is probably coming out all wrong but…"

    "Sshhhh."  Tina closed the distance between them, "That is easily the most beautiful thing anyone has ever said to me."

    "Now that’s just sad," Bette took Tina’s face in her hands.  "Someone should be telling you how amazing you are every day."

    "I only have one question."  Tina looked down at the hand she had placed on Bette’s chest, "If I calm you, why is it that your heart is beating so fast?"

    "Because you also make me nervous."  Bette rested her forehead on Tina’s.

    "Nervous?"

    "Not that kind of nervous."  Bette closed her eyes and kissed Tina, softly at first.  Before she knew it, Tina was clinging to her, kissing her with passionate abandon.  Bette attempted to pull back to catch her breath but Tina wouldn’t release her hold,

    "Kiss me," Tina begged in a ragged whisper, "Kiss me. Kiss me.  Kiss me"

    Bette nodded and gave in to the blonde as she felt herself being pulled down onto the cool floor.

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    6. Awww Dang!!!!, Did we hear glass sculptures breaking? That was awesome. Maybe we’ll get to read the rest next chapter. Loved Bette saying, “Not that kind of nervous.” Thanks for posting.

    10. “If I calm you, why is it that your heart is beating so fast?” OMG, that was just AMAZING!! Don’t let us here like that!!! Come on, I cant to know what happens next!! :D Thank you for posting, this story is my favorite in a long time.

    11. Wow, there is just subtle about this story. This story is just like the fine Jennifer Beals I saw on the cover of More magqazine this afternoon. It is warm, sexy,and smooth as this brandy I am enjoying. PPS

    13. Wow, that was so awesome! I really like your characters, and their unpredictability. Thanks for sharing the story – it’s so sweet. And they’re so nice to each other now! Yay! lol. Thanks so much for posting!!

    18. This certainly didn’t read as if you were finding it tough to write. It was beautiful – romantic, sweet and …. oh, there was something else, what was it? …. oh yes, HOT! Thank you!!

    21. Amazing this has me skipping in the stars. I can just imagine the mobiles all on fire with the lights. Great job I can feel the heat between the two of them. You’re amazing and thanks for sharing

    32. Everybody has uttered every comment that I could ever make! But I will try anyway. This is so AWESOME! You are a gifted writer, keep up the fabulous work! Please Post Soon!

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