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Summer Vacation. Chapter 10
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“I wasn’t partying Alice” admitted Lottie, flopping down on the bar stool beside her, “just couldn’t sleep.”
“Oh …” said Alice, disappointed. Lottie laughed, realising Alice had no where to go with that!
“So?” Lottie asked, cradling the cup of steaming coffee in her hands whilst she glanced over the menu, “how come you’re here anyway?”
Alice sighed, “Lisa’s ex is picking the kids up … I have to make myself scarce …”
Lottie smiled at her, she looked kind of sad, she could be so hilariously funny and yet shockingly real. Secretly Lottie admired the way she let her true feelings show, balancing out the clown act. She sighed …
“Hey …” said Alice, “that was some sigh,” she added, unsure as to why Lottie’s whole body seemed completely devoid of energy or drive, “are you okay?” she asked, concerned … offering Lottie a sympathetic pat on the shoulder which caused her to wince out in pain,
“Sunburn …” she mumbled, “maybe I had too much sun … I dunno … I don’t feel too well this morning,”
Alice clapped her hands together, “Well … what you need is a plate of Lara’s blueberry pancakes … they fix everything!,” she claimed, waving Kit over so she could order them both some.
Lottie smiled, letting her forehead rest down on the counter for a moment, “Thanks Alice,” she sighed, closing her eyes.
“Baby … are you okay?” asked Tina, helping Angie gather her play things together as Bette cleared away the plates from their lunch.
“Sure …” said Bette, “why?”
Tina patted Angie on the head and sent her off up to her bedroom to put away her toys and gather a painting shirt to take to school.
“No reason …” she said, walking slowly up to Bette, “you just seemed a little tense about Lottie taking her, that’s all”
Bette’s face softened, watching as Tina approached her, gently slipping her arms around her waist and leaning in for a loving kiss,
“Because …” continued Tina, moving the kisses from Bette’s lips to her cheek, “you know what this means …” she added, placing kisses up the stunning line of her jaw, “we have more alone time …” she said pointedly, coming to rest at the spot beneath Bette’s ear which made her tremble when she kissed it.
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I really love this story. It is so well written. I look forward to more posts soon.
i’m torn as to whether this girl is bette’s daughter or sister. i’d think if she’s her daughter, then discussing the painting and her age would have had a different reaction from B; however, this girl has a box of things about bette…does she just want a sister/family that much? or is it her mother (or think she is)… hmmm! like that I can’t guess! pps
I 2nd cdngrl. I too will be waiting for more. I was so excited to see a post from you tonight.
Sofasitter…I am DYING here…please tell us! Those scenes with Bette and Tina were so hot…think of how much hotter they would be if we knew if Bette was Lottie’s mother or sister…actually that didn’t make much sense…but hey I’m desperate. She can’t be a cousin or anything cause you wouldn’t string us along only to find out she is Pookie’s cousin on her mother’s side.
Sofasitter, you’re killing me here! She’s either Bette’s sister or her daughter. The suspense is killing me. The love scenes between Bette and Tina were HOT!!!
LOL @ skycaptain! Pookie’s cousin! I’m dying here sofa. Please Please please post soon! I say Lottie is Bette’s sister from her mother’s side. I think that in order to save your fan’s lives from combustion another chapter will bee needed ASAP!
Loving this story. Patiently waiting for the connection between Lottie and Bette. You do like to torture don’t you? PPS
This is absolutely wonderful. The story just flows seamlessly.
tell her lottie! now-now?????? love this sofa… more,more..please
HOT!
this was great indeed, hot scenes between B&T and interesting to see the bond growing between angie and lottie…i also vote for her being bette’s half sister
Your NC-17 was Just HOT!!!! Please do not keep us waiting much longer we need to know if Lottie is Bette’s daughter or half sister. Please !!!!! PPVS
Dalloway3 I never even thought that Bette could be Lottie’s mother but it does make some sense that it could be possible. Not sure but they are related in some manner (at least I think so). Thanks for the post.
This is a really good story, I keep checking for updates. At first, I thought Lottie is Bette’s daughter, but then, Bette would have caught real quick, so I’m guess she is Bette’s sister, same father; different mom. Only reason for the different mom is there is a 20 year difference between Bette and Lottie. Then, again, I could be wrong. So far, the only connection is that Melvin is the common thread. Interesting! Thank you for sharing your story.
There was nothing wrong and everything right with this chapter for it being your first nc-17. Lottie… sister? daughter? niece? cousin? Who’s that girl? I can’t wait to find out! Nicely done, sofa.
i’m with the others… your killing me here… i don’t think lottie is bette’s daughter… her sister… oh yeah… but not her daughter… so tell us already… let them have there talk…
Now, I’m really looking forward to Lottie revealing her big secret. My own reaction to her surprises me… I really like her, but somehow I’m getting more and more bothered by her constant presence in B&T’s life. Don’t get me wrong, I know you’re getting somewhere and that this natural connection with them all was inevitable, but I guess I’m starting to feel what Tina was feeling. Being bothered by the awkwardness of the whole situation… Come on, spill it Lottie… Who the hell are you??? About the reconnection… well, what can I say… you’ve made my day! Thanks sofasitter, please post soon! Oh and by the way, can’t believe this was your first NC-17…
this story tears us apart of wanting more. you sure can maintain the suspense. it is intriguing and we just want to know all, but patience is a nice vertue, but can also be a pain in the ass. thanks for wonderful moments between b and t.
Freakin’ killing me.
Wow… A good friend of mine suggested this story, and im really going to have to thank her… Its a wonderfull jigsaw of information… Lemme put in my two cents: I think Lottie is Maximes daughter from a later marraige… Wow, you are doing an amazing job, do you know that? so gifted, entangling all the storylines together in one whole… I love it! PPS!
and YOU !!!! r so enjoying torturing us!!! Great NC17….LOVE YOUR CHARACTERS
I’m looking forward to the next chapter already….not being pushy or anything, lmao!!!!!
This is so good and love it!