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Summer Vacation. Chapter 10
Tina mouthed … ‘why not let her take her?’
“I’m sorry Lottie,” replied Bette, caving although she wasn’t exactly sure why, “you just caught me off guard,” she added, laughing gently, “I was just telling Angie about this dreadful art store I bought my paints from when I lived in New York …”
“Really?” said Lottie, “where did you live?” she asked, interested …
“The corner of Washington and Greene … right around the corner from the park …” replied Bette, feeling how odd it was that she wanted Lottie to know about that part of her life …
“Oh my god! … Penfolds?” said Lottie, laughing, “that place is grubby!”
“Yes!” exclaimed Bette, as Angie clambered up to sit on Tina’s lap, wanting in on the conversation, “I can’t believe that …” she added, remembering how nearly every penniless art student shopped there.
“That’s so funny,” Lottie added, “I go there all the time …”
Tina pulled Angie in closer to her, she still clung tight to the magical brushes,
“You want to ride with Lottie to school later?” Tina asked, whispering,
Angie nodded,
“It’d be great if you could pick up Angie” Bette said to Lottie after a moment, “thanks … I’m sure she’d like that …” she added, as Angie nodded furiously. “If you’re lucky she might show you her new brushes,” Bette added, chuckling.
“Okay,” said Lottie, “I’ll see you just before 2pm then?”
“Sure” replied Bette, “see you later”
Lottie hung up the phone and flopped back down on the bed, her head aching after a fitful night of hardly sleeping. She needed Planet coffee, and then maybe some food, and then painkillers from somewhere to soothe her throbbing head before an afternoon of screaming eight year olds.
“Jesus … you look like shit!” muttered Alice, catching Lottie as she walked into The Planet, her sunglasses tucked into the top of her jeans, “you should put those on …” she added, gesturing at the dark glasses.
“Thanks Alice,” replied Lottie dryly, giving Kit a thumbs-up sign as Kit asked her if she wanted coffee.
Alice laughed, “God … I wish I was twenty again,” she said wistfully, “partying all day … partying all night …” she added, elbowing Lottie suggestively.
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(36 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
I really love this story. It is so well written. I look forward to more posts soon.
i’m torn as to whether this girl is bette’s daughter or sister. i’d think if she’s her daughter, then discussing the painting and her age would have had a different reaction from B; however, this girl has a box of things about bette…does she just want a sister/family that much? or is it her mother (or think she is)… hmmm! like that I can’t guess! pps
I 2nd cdngrl. I too will be waiting for more. I was so excited to see a post from you tonight.
Sofasitter…I am DYING here…please tell us! Those scenes with Bette and Tina were so hot…think of how much hotter they would be if we knew if Bette was Lottie’s mother or sister…actually that didn’t make much sense…but hey I’m desperate. She can’t be a cousin or anything cause you wouldn’t string us along only to find out she is Pookie’s cousin on her mother’s side.
Sofasitter, you’re killing me here! She’s either Bette’s sister or her daughter. The suspense is killing me. The love scenes between Bette and Tina were HOT!!!
LOL @ skycaptain! Pookie’s cousin! I’m dying here sofa. Please Please please post soon! I say Lottie is Bette’s sister from her mother’s side. I think that in order to save your fan’s lives from combustion another chapter will bee needed ASAP!
Loving this story. Patiently waiting for the connection between Lottie and Bette. You do like to torture don’t you? PPS
This is absolutely wonderful. The story just flows seamlessly.
tell her lottie! now-now?????? love this sofa… more,more..please
HOT!
this was great indeed, hot scenes between B&T and interesting to see the bond growing between angie and lottie…i also vote for her being bette’s half sister
Your NC-17 was Just HOT!!!! Please do not keep us waiting much longer we need to know if Lottie is Bette’s daughter or half sister. Please !!!!! PPVS
Dalloway3 I never even thought that Bette could be Lottie’s mother but it does make some sense that it could be possible. Not sure but they are related in some manner (at least I think so). Thanks for the post.
This is a really good story, I keep checking for updates. At first, I thought Lottie is Bette’s daughter, but then, Bette would have caught real quick, so I’m guess she is Bette’s sister, same father; different mom. Only reason for the different mom is there is a 20 year difference between Bette and Lottie. Then, again, I could be wrong. So far, the only connection is that Melvin is the common thread. Interesting! Thank you for sharing your story.
There was nothing wrong and everything right with this chapter for it being your first nc-17. Lottie… sister? daughter? niece? cousin? Who’s that girl? I can’t wait to find out! Nicely done, sofa.
i’m with the others… your killing me here… i don’t think lottie is bette’s daughter… her sister… oh yeah… but not her daughter… so tell us already… let them have there talk…
Now, I’m really looking forward to Lottie revealing her big secret. My own reaction to her surprises me… I really like her, but somehow I’m getting more and more bothered by her constant presence in B&T’s life. Don’t get me wrong, I know you’re getting somewhere and that this natural connection with them all was inevitable, but I guess I’m starting to feel what Tina was feeling. Being bothered by the awkwardness of the whole situation… Come on, spill it Lottie… Who the hell are you??? About the reconnection… well, what can I say… you’ve made my day! Thanks sofasitter, please post soon! Oh and by the way, can’t believe this was your first NC-17…
this story tears us apart of wanting more. you sure can maintain the suspense. it is intriguing and we just want to know all, but patience is a nice vertue, but can also be a pain in the ass. thanks for wonderful moments between b and t.
Freakin’ killing me.
Wow… A good friend of mine suggested this story, and im really going to have to thank her… Its a wonderfull jigsaw of information… Lemme put in my two cents: I think Lottie is Maximes daughter from a later marraige… Wow, you are doing an amazing job, do you know that? so gifted, entangling all the storylines together in one whole… I love it! PPS!
and YOU !!!! r so enjoying torturing us!!! Great NC17….LOVE YOUR CHARACTERS
I’m looking forward to the next chapter already….not being pushy or anything, lmao!!!!!
This is so good and love it!