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Summer Vacation. Chapter 10
Lottie crawled into bed, cold and her body exhausted. She winced, vaguely aware of the stinging pain on her shoulders and back from the sun. She closed her eyes, too tired to undress or close the blinds, hoping to fall asleep but knowing that she wouldn’t.
Her mind was racing, so many things had happened in the last couple of days that she couldn’t wrap her head around and there was still the matter of a missed call from Jo that she hadn’t responded to.
She pictured Bette. The real life version was so different, it had personality and laughter and love … love for Tina, she’d seen that … love for Angie, and her friends. She pulled the spare pillow over her head, hoping to block out the deafening sound of her thoughts.
“Put those down,” whispered Bette as she stood leaning against the kitchen counter cradling the remains of a glass of red, watching Tina as she cleared away the dishes.
Tina turned to look at her, wiping her hands on the dishcloth. Bette’s eyes were hungry and she wore the same smile Tina had come to recognise over the years as the smile she couldn’t control if she was watching her. She felt Bette’s stare all over her, to anyone else it would have looked predatory but to her it was loving, compelling almost … it sucked her in.
She walked towards her, taking the empty glass from Bette’s grip and setting it down behind her. She took hold of the empty hand, bringing it towards her lips, kissing each finger delicately in turn. Then she took Bette’s hand and covering it with her own she placed it palm down upon her chest, directly covering her heart.
Bette let out a soft sigh, kissing Tina lightly on the lips, their noses touching,
“Tee … lets go to bed …”
Lottie sat on the edge of the bed staring out of the window at the night lit alight by the garish neon glow of LA. Sleep wasn’t happening. She pulled the box back out from under the bed, laying it down carefully on top of the sheets.
She studied the photographs there, their purpose had changed now. Whereas before she’d viewed them as her way to reach Bette, her clues, now she viewed them as belonging to Bette, because they contained her and were therefore rightfully hers.
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(36 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
I really love this story. It is so well written. I look forward to more posts soon.
i’m torn as to whether this girl is bette’s daughter or sister. i’d think if she’s her daughter, then discussing the painting and her age would have had a different reaction from B; however, this girl has a box of things about bette…does she just want a sister/family that much? or is it her mother (or think she is)… hmmm! like that I can’t guess! pps
I 2nd cdngrl. I too will be waiting for more. I was so excited to see a post from you tonight.
Sofasitter…I am DYING here…please tell us! Those scenes with Bette and Tina were so hot…think of how much hotter they would be if we knew if Bette was Lottie’s mother or sister…actually that didn’t make much sense…but hey I’m desperate. She can’t be a cousin or anything cause you wouldn’t string us along only to find out she is Pookie’s cousin on her mother’s side.
Sofasitter, you’re killing me here! She’s either Bette’s sister or her daughter. The suspense is killing me. The love scenes between Bette and Tina were HOT!!!
LOL @ skycaptain! Pookie’s cousin! I’m dying here sofa. Please Please please post soon! I say Lottie is Bette’s sister from her mother’s side. I think that in order to save your fan’s lives from combustion another chapter will bee needed ASAP!
Loving this story. Patiently waiting for the connection between Lottie and Bette. You do like to torture don’t you? PPS
This is absolutely wonderful. The story just flows seamlessly.
tell her lottie! now-now?????? love this sofa… more,more..please
HOT!
this was great indeed, hot scenes between B&T and interesting to see the bond growing between angie and lottie…i also vote for her being bette’s half sister
Your NC-17 was Just HOT!!!! Please do not keep us waiting much longer we need to know if Lottie is Bette’s daughter or half sister. Please !!!!! PPVS
Dalloway3 I never even thought that Bette could be Lottie’s mother but it does make some sense that it could be possible. Not sure but they are related in some manner (at least I think so). Thanks for the post.
This is a really good story, I keep checking for updates. At first, I thought Lottie is Bette’s daughter, but then, Bette would have caught real quick, so I’m guess she is Bette’s sister, same father; different mom. Only reason for the different mom is there is a 20 year difference between Bette and Lottie. Then, again, I could be wrong. So far, the only connection is that Melvin is the common thread. Interesting! Thank you for sharing your story.
There was nothing wrong and everything right with this chapter for it being your first nc-17. Lottie… sister? daughter? niece? cousin? Who’s that girl? I can’t wait to find out! Nicely done, sofa.
i’m with the others… your killing me here… i don’t think lottie is bette’s daughter… her sister… oh yeah… but not her daughter… so tell us already… let them have there talk…
Now, I’m really looking forward to Lottie revealing her big secret. My own reaction to her surprises me… I really like her, but somehow I’m getting more and more bothered by her constant presence in B&T’s life. Don’t get me wrong, I know you’re getting somewhere and that this natural connection with them all was inevitable, but I guess I’m starting to feel what Tina was feeling. Being bothered by the awkwardness of the whole situation… Come on, spill it Lottie… Who the hell are you??? About the reconnection… well, what can I say… you’ve made my day! Thanks sofasitter, please post soon! Oh and by the way, can’t believe this was your first NC-17…
this story tears us apart of wanting more. you sure can maintain the suspense. it is intriguing and we just want to know all, but patience is a nice vertue, but can also be a pain in the ass. thanks for wonderful moments between b and t.
Freakin’ killing me.
Wow… A good friend of mine suggested this story, and im really going to have to thank her… Its a wonderfull jigsaw of information… Lemme put in my two cents: I think Lottie is Maximes daughter from a later marraige… Wow, you are doing an amazing job, do you know that? so gifted, entangling all the storylines together in one whole… I love it! PPS!
and YOU !!!! r so enjoying torturing us!!! Great NC17….LOVE YOUR CHARACTERS
I’m looking forward to the next chapter already….not being pushy or anything, lmao!!!!!
This is so good and love it!