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Summer Vacation. Chapter 10
She rubbed the back of her neck, aware that the sun had caught her there too when she’d tied her hair back. Then Bette had brought her the sunscreen, that simple gesture … it had meant more.
Carefully she placed the pictures back in the box, grabbed her moisturiser and attempted to do some damage control.
Bette lay on the bed watching as Tina strolled between the bathroom and the bedroom preparing herself for bed.
“Hurry up!” called Bette, as Tina peed in the bathroom,
“Are you wearing my present?” Tina asked, finishing up and moving on to brush her teeth,
Bette giggled, she was indeed wearing the underwear she’d bought in New York that she’d teased Tina was really for her, a lacy violet and black number … though really she had imagined Tina in it … not her. She closed her eyes, picturing Tina as she had been just a second ago, wandering through the bedroom in front of her wearing nothing but … well … nothing, absolutely secure in her nakedness …
Tina finished up and switched off the light to the bathroom,
“Bette …?”
She sighed, Bette lay on her side of the bed, one arm behind her head, her eyes closed, softly breathing. She crept up the bed to lie beside her, pulling the sheet up over them both and resting her head on Bette’s chest. Bette gave a contented sigh.
“Baby … you’re such an animal …” sighed Tina, closing her eyes and giving in to sleep.
Lottie lay curled up on the bed, the air con turned up to the highest setting it’s noise making it easier for her to rest. She watched as the lit-up time on the clock switched to 02:11 and groaned.
In the next hour she talked herself out of ever telling Bette, thinking of the effect it would have, not only on her but on Tina and Angie too. She examined every good reason to leave and get back on a flight to New York … before realising that she just couldn’t do it.
It was like something she’d seen in Bette that day told her that Bette was missing the same things she was. She listened as a siren rolled by, the sound fading away as the clock turned past 03:14.
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(36 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
I really love this story. It is so well written. I look forward to more posts soon.
i’m torn as to whether this girl is bette’s daughter or sister. i’d think if she’s her daughter, then discussing the painting and her age would have had a different reaction from B; however, this girl has a box of things about bette…does she just want a sister/family that much? or is it her mother (or think she is)… hmmm! like that I can’t guess! pps
I 2nd cdngrl. I too will be waiting for more. I was so excited to see a post from you tonight.
Sofasitter…I am DYING here…please tell us! Those scenes with Bette and Tina were so hot…think of how much hotter they would be if we knew if Bette was Lottie’s mother or sister…actually that didn’t make much sense…but hey I’m desperate. She can’t be a cousin or anything cause you wouldn’t string us along only to find out she is Pookie’s cousin on her mother’s side.
Sofasitter, you’re killing me here! She’s either Bette’s sister or her daughter. The suspense is killing me. The love scenes between Bette and Tina were HOT!!!
LOL @ skycaptain! Pookie’s cousin! I’m dying here sofa. Please Please please post soon! I say Lottie is Bette’s sister from her mother’s side. I think that in order to save your fan’s lives from combustion another chapter will bee needed ASAP!
Loving this story. Patiently waiting for the connection between Lottie and Bette. You do like to torture don’t you? PPS
This is absolutely wonderful. The story just flows seamlessly.
tell her lottie! now-now?????? love this sofa… more,more..please
HOT!
this was great indeed, hot scenes between B&T and interesting to see the bond growing between angie and lottie…i also vote for her being bette’s half sister
Your NC-17 was Just HOT!!!! Please do not keep us waiting much longer we need to know if Lottie is Bette’s daughter or half sister. Please !!!!! PPVS
Dalloway3 I never even thought that Bette could be Lottie’s mother but it does make some sense that it could be possible. Not sure but they are related in some manner (at least I think so). Thanks for the post.
This is a really good story, I keep checking for updates. At first, I thought Lottie is Bette’s daughter, but then, Bette would have caught real quick, so I’m guess she is Bette’s sister, same father; different mom. Only reason for the different mom is there is a 20 year difference between Bette and Lottie. Then, again, I could be wrong. So far, the only connection is that Melvin is the common thread. Interesting! Thank you for sharing your story.
There was nothing wrong and everything right with this chapter for it being your first nc-17. Lottie… sister? daughter? niece? cousin? Who’s that girl? I can’t wait to find out! Nicely done, sofa.
i’m with the others… your killing me here… i don’t think lottie is bette’s daughter… her sister… oh yeah… but not her daughter… so tell us already… let them have there talk…
Now, I’m really looking forward to Lottie revealing her big secret. My own reaction to her surprises me… I really like her, but somehow I’m getting more and more bothered by her constant presence in B&T’s life. Don’t get me wrong, I know you’re getting somewhere and that this natural connection with them all was inevitable, but I guess I’m starting to feel what Tina was feeling. Being bothered by the awkwardness of the whole situation… Come on, spill it Lottie… Who the hell are you??? About the reconnection… well, what can I say… you’ve made my day! Thanks sofasitter, please post soon! Oh and by the way, can’t believe this was your first NC-17…
this story tears us apart of wanting more. you sure can maintain the suspense. it is intriguing and we just want to know all, but patience is a nice vertue, but can also be a pain in the ass. thanks for wonderful moments between b and t.
Freakin’ killing me.
Wow… A good friend of mine suggested this story, and im really going to have to thank her… Its a wonderfull jigsaw of information… Lemme put in my two cents: I think Lottie is Maximes daughter from a later marraige… Wow, you are doing an amazing job, do you know that? so gifted, entangling all the storylines together in one whole… I love it! PPS!
and YOU !!!! r so enjoying torturing us!!! Great NC17….LOVE YOUR CHARACTERS
I’m looking forward to the next chapter already….not being pushy or anything, lmao!!!!!
This is so good and love it!