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Summer Vacation. Chapter 10
“Ohmyfuckinggod … Tinnaaaaaaaaaa …” Bette cried out, grasping her arm to her mouth to subdue her screams.
She lay panting for a few seconds before reaching blindly down to pull Tina up towards her. She kissed her, tasting the trickle of sweat mixed with her own juices on Tina’s lips, as Tina moved to lie on top of her, kissing her gently back to earth.
Tina grinned, watching as Bette struggled to open her eyes and look at her, “You taste sweeter than anything …” she purred, pushing a stray curl back from Bette’s face.
Bette smiled sleepily, pulling her closer … “I love you.”
They fell back to sleep as the sun began to rise, limbs entwined, sleep coming out of a contented exhaustion. The next thing Tina heard was a soft knock at the bedroom door accompanied by her daughters sprightly voice,
“Mama … Mommy? … are you awake?” Angie asked quietly, obeying the rule of knocking before entering … especially as it was the weekend.
Tina stirred, her eyes checking their position … she lay with her body in between Bette’s legs, her head asleep on her chest, Bette’s arm resting on the back of her head …
“Baby …” she mumbled, “mmn … baby … wake up,”
She moved herself off Bette’s body reluctantly, grabbing the sheet and pulling it back up over them,
“Come on in Angel” Tina called,
Angie ran into the room, taking a running jump to land between her mothers on the bed, with a thud.
Bette opened her eyes … “What the …?”
Angie knelt beside Bette, her little face peering down into her mom’s half open eyes … grinning wildly, “Mom …” she said, bouncing the bed, “can we do presents?”
Tina laughed, leaning across to kiss Bette on the cheek, “I’ll make us coffee baby,”
They had coffee and pancakes, with oj for Angie, then Tina cleared the dishes from the barbeque the night before whilst Bette settled down on the sofa with Angie and the bags of gifts. Angie’s eyes were glowing with excitement, Bette watched her, loving how thrilled she got.
They were so alike, thought Tina, both loved the romanticism of gift giving more than the gift itself. Like Bette, Angie loved the story, the tale, and like mother like daughter they both seemed to love seeing Tina opening her gifts more than anything else.
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(36 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
I really love this story. It is so well written. I look forward to more posts soon.
i’m torn as to whether this girl is bette’s daughter or sister. i’d think if she’s her daughter, then discussing the painting and her age would have had a different reaction from B; however, this girl has a box of things about bette…does she just want a sister/family that much? or is it her mother (or think she is)… hmmm! like that I can’t guess! pps
I 2nd cdngrl. I too will be waiting for more. I was so excited to see a post from you tonight.
Sofasitter…I am DYING here…please tell us! Those scenes with Bette and Tina were so hot…think of how much hotter they would be if we knew if Bette was Lottie’s mother or sister…actually that didn’t make much sense…but hey I’m desperate. She can’t be a cousin or anything cause you wouldn’t string us along only to find out she is Pookie’s cousin on her mother’s side.
Sofasitter, you’re killing me here! She’s either Bette’s sister or her daughter. The suspense is killing me. The love scenes between Bette and Tina were HOT!!!
LOL @ skycaptain! Pookie’s cousin! I’m dying here sofa. Please Please please post soon! I say Lottie is Bette’s sister from her mother’s side. I think that in order to save your fan’s lives from combustion another chapter will bee needed ASAP!
Loving this story. Patiently waiting for the connection between Lottie and Bette. You do like to torture don’t you? PPS
This is absolutely wonderful. The story just flows seamlessly.
tell her lottie! now-now?????? love this sofa… more,more..please
HOT!
this was great indeed, hot scenes between B&T and interesting to see the bond growing between angie and lottie…i also vote for her being bette’s half sister
Your NC-17 was Just HOT!!!! Please do not keep us waiting much longer we need to know if Lottie is Bette’s daughter or half sister. Please !!!!! PPVS
Dalloway3 I never even thought that Bette could be Lottie’s mother but it does make some sense that it could be possible. Not sure but they are related in some manner (at least I think so). Thanks for the post.
This is a really good story, I keep checking for updates. At first, I thought Lottie is Bette’s daughter, but then, Bette would have caught real quick, so I’m guess she is Bette’s sister, same father; different mom. Only reason for the different mom is there is a 20 year difference between Bette and Lottie. Then, again, I could be wrong. So far, the only connection is that Melvin is the common thread. Interesting! Thank you for sharing your story.
There was nothing wrong and everything right with this chapter for it being your first nc-17. Lottie… sister? daughter? niece? cousin? Who’s that girl? I can’t wait to find out! Nicely done, sofa.
i’m with the others… your killing me here… i don’t think lottie is bette’s daughter… her sister… oh yeah… but not her daughter… so tell us already… let them have there talk…
Now, I’m really looking forward to Lottie revealing her big secret. My own reaction to her surprises me… I really like her, but somehow I’m getting more and more bothered by her constant presence in B&T’s life. Don’t get me wrong, I know you’re getting somewhere and that this natural connection with them all was inevitable, but I guess I’m starting to feel what Tina was feeling. Being bothered by the awkwardness of the whole situation… Come on, spill it Lottie… Who the hell are you??? About the reconnection… well, what can I say… you’ve made my day! Thanks sofasitter, please post soon! Oh and by the way, can’t believe this was your first NC-17…
this story tears us apart of wanting more. you sure can maintain the suspense. it is intriguing and we just want to know all, but patience is a nice vertue, but can also be a pain in the ass. thanks for wonderful moments between b and t.
Freakin’ killing me.
Wow… A good friend of mine suggested this story, and im really going to have to thank her… Its a wonderfull jigsaw of information… Lemme put in my two cents: I think Lottie is Maximes daughter from a later marraige… Wow, you are doing an amazing job, do you know that? so gifted, entangling all the storylines together in one whole… I love it! PPS!
and YOU !!!! r so enjoying torturing us!!! Great NC17….LOVE YOUR CHARACTERS
I’m looking forward to the next chapter already….not being pushy or anything, lmao!!!!!
This is so good and love it!