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Summer Vacation. Chapter 13
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“Come on …” whispered Bette as she walked them both towards the steps at the end of the pool, carrying Tina’s wet naked body in her arms, “lets get ‘ourselves’ cleaned up …”
“You wanna dance …?” asked Alice, feeling Lottie’s confusion as she finished telling her the story behind Jo not returning her calls, she told Alice about the kiss the night they went to Reflex and how she’d spent the night at Jo’s when she was upset.
Alice listened intently, intrigued to know about the things which made Lottie’s upset, the things which made her features appear so torn and distant as they did then …
“Come on …” urged Alice, dragging her towards the dance floor, “it’s time we both had a little fun!”
They danced together for a while, grinning at Carmen whenever either of them caught her eye, Alice was dancing crazy moves which made Lottie double up in hysterics. The room was buzzing and way too small to hold one of Carmen’s gigs but she loved Kit to bits and loved to do a set for her true fans at The Planet,
“Oh … my … god!” said Lottie suddenly, pulling Alice’s body hurriedly in front of her as an attempt to hide …
“What?” said Alice, turning round to look behind her before Lottie’s hand stopped her,
“Don’t look …” hissed Lottie, “Jo’s here …”
She danced closer in to Alice, stealing quick glances over her shoulder in Jo’s direction, she was dancing with a girl, much like they were, no more than a couple of metres away, they were touching, their hands were resting on each others hips in a familiar way,
“I can’t believe she’s here …” sighed Lottie, confused, “can we go?” she asked Alice,
“Sure …” replied Alice, “which one is she?” she added, before they made a move to leave, desperate to get a glimpse of the infamous teacher,
“Behind the three girls who are dancing behind you,” said Lottie, “blonde … in the grey jeans and blue shirt with her back to us … the one with the pink scarf in her hair …”
Alice danced a few more moments before indicating to Lottie that she would look, Lottie turned away, not wanting to catch Jo’s gaze,
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What does he need to talk to Bette. I’m guessing that is has to do with Lottie and Bette and her inheiring some thing from her Mother. If its picture her Mother Painted or just pictures of Bette when she was a baby with her Mother Just post soon. Waiting is hard thanks
This is so good. Very detailed and interesting. I like the way you go back and forth developing all the sub stories. PPS.
Damn this is a good story. I wonder if Melvin knew? That would be some shit! Post soon!
Wow, this is getting very interesting. So Bette’s and Lottie’s mom was an artist. I wonder what is in store for both Bette and Lottie in the things left them by their mother.
Heat, a bit of humor, intrigue… this chapter had a bit of everything. Delightful story, and I’m looking forward to more. Thanks!
Man that was alot…but I want more…they have alot to talk about.
OMG you can’t stop there. This story is so Good. PPS
Hey there I am so into this more soon huh? haven’t been driven in the past week..had a virus knock me down…remember, more soon
Please further write fast. I can hardly wait as the conversation goes on between Bette and Lotti. Around whether Bette flies to the lawyer to Virginia. And what has to say to it. PPS
Ok, this was nice and long, but I still need answers. Write faster, please (but no pressure).
This is such a touching story. Can’t wait for the following up. Thanks.
A wonderful story, you know just when to cut it off w/out giving us too much angst…I’m impatiently waiting for the next chapter….
im sooo glad you posted tonite! sweet jesus she told bette… getting really good MORE-MORE!anytime for a nc-17..lol p.p.s.
caught up on the story….and love it
God, this story is so intense, it’s kind of draining… I mean that in the best way possible… Incredible. Thank you.
Oooo this story keeps getting better and better, really great post…and you’re right, I’m not complaining about the NC-17’s LOL!! Tina should know Alice by now, so I’m a bit surprised she couldn’t fool her – it should have been Bette and Lottie telling Alice about this, but apart from that I really loves this story. So post more and very soon please :o))
Oh forgot to say….what is Jo up to, who was that girl she was dancing with and why didn’t she call sweet Lottie back??? I hope they can become a couple soon, they’re sweet and good together.
This is so good and cant wait to see more!