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Summer Vacation. Chapter 13
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“Tee …” whined Bette, eager for sleep,
“Come on baby …” urged Tina, “you could see her for dinner or something?”
“I could take her to Madeo?” suggested Bette, cheering up at the thought of her stomach and how delicious their food was,
“Nice idea,” chuckled Tina, laughing as she watched Bette visualising the menu, “but I was thinking of something a little more apt for conversation, like here … or maybe take-out at her hotel?” Tina suggested,
“I could do take-out” mumbled Bette, keen to agree on anything if it meant she could go to sleep,
Tina smirked, knowing she had wisely picked the correct moment for such a conversation, slowly she slid her body nearer to Bette’s, wrapping one arm tightly around her neck,
“Go to sleep baby …” Tina mumbled, nestling her head beneath Bette’s chin.
She lay listening as Bette drifted off into peaceful sleep … hoping above everything that ‘tomorrow’ wouldn’t be too painful for her …
“I can’t believe there’s a pancake house that stays open past midnight …” said Lottie, pleasantly surprised as she handed Alice back the menu after finishing ordering her banana waffles with maple syrup and a coffee,
Alice watched her, pleased that she was pleased. Something about her seemed different, like she wasn’t as carefree as she had been or like she had stuff weighing on her mind,
“So …” said Alice, laying down the menu and leaning in for emphasis, “you want to tell Aunty Alice all about it …” she joked,
Alice watched, a little horrified, as Lottie’s features changed, it was meant to be a joke, an attempt to cheer her up, yet all of a sudden she looked as though she was about to cry …
“Oh … er … um …” mumbled Alice, fishing in her pocket for a tissue, “sorry … I never meant to upset you …”
“It’s fine …” laughed Lottie through her tears as she reached for a napkin to dry her eyes, “It’s just …” she paused …
She really couldn’t tell Alice … Alice simply wasn’t discrete … “it’s just …” she sighed, “you have no idea how appealing that sounds Alice,” she added, laughing again nervously,
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What does he need to talk to Bette. I’m guessing that is has to do with Lottie and Bette and her inheiring some thing from her Mother. If its picture her Mother Painted or just pictures of Bette when she was a baby with her Mother Just post soon. Waiting is hard thanks
This is so good. Very detailed and interesting. I like the way you go back and forth developing all the sub stories. PPS.
Damn this is a good story. I wonder if Melvin knew? That would be some shit! Post soon!
Wow, this is getting very interesting. So Bette’s and Lottie’s mom was an artist. I wonder what is in store for both Bette and Lottie in the things left them by their mother.
Heat, a bit of humor, intrigue… this chapter had a bit of everything. Delightful story, and I’m looking forward to more. Thanks!
Man that was alot…but I want more…they have alot to talk about.
OMG you can’t stop there. This story is so Good. PPS
Hey there I am so into this more soon huh? haven’t been driven in the past week..had a virus knock me down…remember, more soon
Please further write fast. I can hardly wait as the conversation goes on between Bette and Lotti. Around whether Bette flies to the lawyer to Virginia. And what has to say to it. PPS
Ok, this was nice and long, but I still need answers. Write faster, please (but no pressure).
This is such a touching story. Can’t wait for the following up. Thanks.
A wonderful story, you know just when to cut it off w/out giving us too much angst…I’m impatiently waiting for the next chapter….
im sooo glad you posted tonite! sweet jesus she told bette… getting really good MORE-MORE!anytime for a nc-17..lol p.p.s.
caught up on the story….and love it
God, this story is so intense, it’s kind of draining… I mean that in the best way possible… Incredible. Thank you.
Oooo this story keeps getting better and better, really great post…and you’re right, I’m not complaining about the NC-17’s LOL!! Tina should know Alice by now, so I’m a bit surprised she couldn’t fool her – it should have been Bette and Lottie telling Alice about this, but apart from that I really loves this story. So post more and very soon please :o))
Oh forgot to say….what is Jo up to, who was that girl she was dancing with and why didn’t she call sweet Lottie back??? I hope they can become a couple soon, they’re sweet and good together.
This is so good and cant wait to see more!