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Summer Vacation. Chapter 13
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“Nice …” muttered Alice, as she pulled her back around, grabbling Lottie by the arm, “come on … lets go …”
They fought their way back through the steaming crowds, pausing outside the front door to gasp in the cool night air, their bodies tingling as the sweat on their skin cooled.
“Are you okay?” asked Alice, aware that something was going on with Lottie,
Lottie stayed quiet … was she okay …? it was such an unanswerable question …
She thought about it, she was living in LA. She just told a woman she’d known all of five minutes that she was her sister. Somehow she’d managed to get caught up in that same woman’s life … she was working with her partner and she was currently stood outside a bar at midnight with one of her best friends, escaping from that fact that she’d just run in to none other than her daughters teacher … who was dancing with another woman … when really that shouldn’t matter because in reality the two of them were nothing more than friends …
Lottie sighed, “Al … I don’t think I’ve ever been this far from okay in my whole life …”
Alice looked at her, her mascara was slightly smudged from the sticky wet heat and her hair clung to her as she stood pulling the shirt she wore away her overheated body allowing the air to circulate beneath. Despite all that when she smiled, even if it was a sad smile, she was really very pretty,
Alice laughed, unsure of what else to do …. “What you need … are pancakes” she said.
“Hey …” mumbled Tina, her face inches from Bette’s, she ran one finger delicately over her bruised lips, watching as Bette’s eyes closed to sleep,
“Baby …” said Tina, “babe …?”
“Mmn … hmn …” muttered Bette, fighting sleep,
“Baby … you need to talk to Lottie tomorrow …” said Tina gently, “don’t leave it any longer”
Bette’s eyes flickered open, “I do …?” she asked,
Tina gave her a persuasive look …
“I do” agreed Bette,
“Why not see her tomorrow … after work?” continued Tina, feeling that if they went to sleep without a plan then tomorrow it would be all too easy to say they didn’t have the time to sort something out …
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What does he need to talk to Bette. I’m guessing that is has to do with Lottie and Bette and her inheiring some thing from her Mother. If its picture her Mother Painted or just pictures of Bette when she was a baby with her Mother Just post soon. Waiting is hard thanks
This is so good. Very detailed and interesting. I like the way you go back and forth developing all the sub stories. PPS.
Damn this is a good story. I wonder if Melvin knew? That would be some shit! Post soon!
Wow, this is getting very interesting. So Bette’s and Lottie’s mom was an artist. I wonder what is in store for both Bette and Lottie in the things left them by their mother.
Heat, a bit of humor, intrigue… this chapter had a bit of everything. Delightful story, and I’m looking forward to more. Thanks!
Man that was alot…but I want more…they have alot to talk about.
OMG you can’t stop there. This story is so Good. PPS
Hey there I am so into this more soon huh? haven’t been driven in the past week..had a virus knock me down…remember, more soon
Please further write fast. I can hardly wait as the conversation goes on between Bette and Lotti. Around whether Bette flies to the lawyer to Virginia. And what has to say to it. PPS
Ok, this was nice and long, but I still need answers. Write faster, please (but no pressure).
This is such a touching story. Can’t wait for the following up. Thanks.
A wonderful story, you know just when to cut it off w/out giving us too much angst…I’m impatiently waiting for the next chapter….
im sooo glad you posted tonite! sweet jesus she told bette… getting really good MORE-MORE!anytime for a nc-17..lol p.p.s.
caught up on the story….and love it
God, this story is so intense, it’s kind of draining… I mean that in the best way possible… Incredible. Thank you.
Oooo this story keeps getting better and better, really great post…and you’re right, I’m not complaining about the NC-17’s LOL!! Tina should know Alice by now, so I’m a bit surprised she couldn’t fool her – it should have been Bette and Lottie telling Alice about this, but apart from that I really loves this story. So post more and very soon please :o))
Oh forgot to say….what is Jo up to, who was that girl she was dancing with and why didn’t she call sweet Lottie back??? I hope they can become a couple soon, they’re sweet and good together.
This is so good and cant wait to see more!