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Summer Vacation. Chapter 16
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Bette couldn’t help but smile, wondering what the hell kind of punishment that was supposed to be,
“Mama where’s my … … … Mom …? were you hot last night?” Angelica asked as she wandered into her mothers bedroom looking for her Nintendo DS,
Tina chuckled as Bette shot awake, “Um … yeah … um … it was warm …” Bette muttered, sitting up and covering herself with the sheet,
“What’s up honey?” Tina asked Angie,
“I can’t find my DS …” said Angelica,
“I think Alice was playing with it last night …” Bette suggested, swinging her legs over the side of the bed,
“Come on … lets go see if we can find it” said Tina, leading Angie out of their room, “nice job …” she grinned, whispering quietly into Angie’s hair,
Lottie surveyed the scene of devastation she was leaving, wondering briefly if leaving Alice still asleep in her hotel room, surrounded by empty miniatures and the remains of room service was enough for them to ask her politely to leave, she hurriedly scribbled a note to Alice, leaving it underneath her cell on the cabinet next to the bed, she drew the blinds, shutting out the summer morning so that Alice could sleep off her hangover, before she walked out and left her there …
“I thought Alice was bringing her …?” grumped Bette, downing the last dregs of her third cup of coffee as she stared out the window, glancing up and down the street in search of Alice’s little blue car, her eyes fell to rest on Lottie’s yellow Beetle, parked where it would be spending the weekend in their driveway,
“She is” replied Tina, flicking through the property pages of the morning paper as Bette paced the kitchen floor, “would you sit down … they’ll be here,”
“I knew I should have stopped them taking her out” Bette grumbled,
“Bette!” cried Tina, exasperated, “calm down …”
Bette kicked off her shoes before flopping down on the window seat next to Angie,
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Yay…another great chapter, love this story! BUT PLEASE DON’T LET LOTTIE AND ALICE HOOK UP – Lottie and Jo is much better, they just need to talk :o)) Hope Bette can help Lottie about these jerks who are running her life – nobody tells a Porter what to do!!! LOL. Oh and have a great weekend, it sounds like something exciting is happening :o))
Lottie and Alice… hopefully they’re just feeling a good friendship blossoming. Whoa, how rich *is* their mother’s family? I’m starting to wonder if Bette was never notified cos they cut their mother out after she married Melvin… hmmm. I love this story, sofa, one-pagers or not, post soon!
This is some story: always amazed where this is taking us. Just bright in designing the characters with love and emotion. Post soon because this is very addictive.
u say scary and u will find me saying….interesting!!!! NPP!!!!
also…is the families money drug related????
Another awesome chapter. Can’t wait to find out what the deal is with the family. PPS
Another GREAT chapter…p.p.s.
Ok, so, I actually feel badly for Lottie… And I will never see a fraction of what she has. As for Bette and Tina, no one needs to worry about them; I think Bette’s got enough alpha to kick anyone’s @$$, and Tina’s ferocious in her own right. Great stuff!
wow .. that turned out as one scarily long page …
Lol @ vam … I’m english! he’s just one person, and he happens to be pompous, promise to rectify it ….
I love this story – but what’s with anti-English vibe in “his pompous English ass”? It’s bad enough that Hollywood always characterises us as the “bad guy”!
Great story, and yep was a long page but great writing looking forward to what happens next.
Sofa, You can bust with more “one scarily long pages” as far as I’m concerned. this story has be so intrigued! Can you give us one more before the weekend? Please!
Poor Lottie, rich and unhappy. Those two words should never go together. Bette needs to step in a get these trustee under control instead of having them trying to control her and Lottie. Can’t wait to see what’s next.
I LOVE this story, and I LOVE how you write. I don’t want this to end and I’ve already got plans for you to continue writing whatever you need. Cause I’m totally hooked on reading!!!
Okay, i’m not gonna even start on what I think about your writing of B&T… Let’s just say that you’re doing the best job ever to actually put into words that a-fucking-mazing chemistry of theirs!!! We feel it in every single little bit you write about them… from the tiniest touch or glance to the most intense and passionate love encounter! Chemistry and togetherness… It’s all there! Oh, and I have a hunch that now that Bette is in the game, Lottie’s worries about that “no control” thing are about to see an end. To Bette no liking to be told what to do, add the fact she’s very very protective of her loved ones, and that now includes Lottie. Can’t wait to see Bette in action (with a behind the scene Tina, of course…)… Oh, and about that 4-poster bed…!!! ;)
I always look forward to this story. Can’t wait to see what Roger has in store for the sisters and how this is going to effect Tina and Angelica. Tina is so understanding and she is showing Lottie that. This is what makes Bette and Tina such a wonderful couple. They compliment each other.
Yes! Bring AlphaBette on! I can’t wait to read about the dinner and Bette taking charge and taking care of Roger…PPS!!
Excellent chapter but it was one page that never seemed to end. But that was good.PPS.
Bette and Tina could handle the Queen of England So Roger might have his had full with Bette. She is not a country Hick If her says anything to Tina his a** is grass and Bette will be the mower. Lottie is a little young but she will get so lessons fron one Ms Idont take any shit fron anyone PORTER Thanks so much for posting
great great story but there’s some big grey thing blotting out a couple of important conversations so I don’t understand what happpened…help???? soon please
Good chapter. Poor Lottie!
Angelica is adorable.
Lottie is lovely.
I love how you have Tina and Angel dealing with Bette who they both obviously adore and she them.
Enjoying the ride and looking forward to where you are taking me!