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Summer Vacation. Chapter 16
“Mom … maybe you should have another cup of coffee …” Angelica suggested calmly, her eyes never leaving her game,
Tina chuckled, before lifting up the paper to hide herself behind,
“Don’t you start …” muttered Bette,
“I’m sorry I’m late …” said Lottie, not liking the look of Bette’s stern expression as she clambered out of the cab, chucking her bag onto the sidewalk, “I … um … um … fuck!”
She fumbled in her pockets for her purse,
“Here …” said Bette, handing the cab driver some money, “I thought Alice was bringing you …?” Bette asked, “what happened …?”
“Yeah …” Lottie mumbled, “change of plan …”
Bette’s eyes slanted down and Lottie could tell she was just itching to say either ‘I told you so …’ or ask how and exactly why the plans had changed,
“Fucking hell Alice …” Bette chipped, taking Lottie’s bag from the sidewalk and throwing it into the boot of the Saab with the rest,
Lottie winced, supposing that it wasn’t exactly fair to let Alice take the blame entirely, still, Alice wasn’t there and she was the one who had to spend the next three days with Bette so she hoped that in the long run, Alice would understand,
“Are we ready then?” said Tina, attempting to be jovial for Angelica’s sake, clearly Bette was tired and Lottie was hungover and it was becoming screamingly apparent that they both had the same foul temper. She stood with her hands on Angelica’s shoulders watching the visual fireworks display, “it’s gonna be a fun trip …” Tina muttered to her daughter, sarcastically,
“Have you got everything?” Bette asked Lottie, realising that Lottie seemed to have left her sense at the hotel that morning,
“Uh huh …” Lottie nodded, feeling suddenly like a child who had disappointed, “yeah”
“You’re sure ..?”
“Yes!”
“Bette … c’mon … lets go” Tina urged, ushering Angie into the back seat,
Lottie climbed in next to her,
Bette glanced back at her in the rear view mirror as she waited for the top to go down, Lottie sat with her head leant back against the head rest and her eyes closed tight, her cheeks a pale and greenish colour,
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(45 votes, average: 3.60 out of 5)
Yay…another great chapter, love this story! BUT PLEASE DON’T LET LOTTIE AND ALICE HOOK UP – Lottie and Jo is much better, they just need to talk :o)) Hope Bette can help Lottie about these jerks who are running her life – nobody tells a Porter what to do!!! LOL. Oh and have a great weekend, it sounds like something exciting is happening :o))
Lottie and Alice… hopefully they’re just feeling a good friendship blossoming. Whoa, how rich *is* their mother’s family? I’m starting to wonder if Bette was never notified cos they cut their mother out after she married Melvin… hmmm. I love this story, sofa, one-pagers or not, post soon!
This is some story: always amazed where this is taking us. Just bright in designing the characters with love and emotion. Post soon because this is very addictive.
u say scary and u will find me saying….interesting!!!! NPP!!!!
also…is the families money drug related????
Another awesome chapter. Can’t wait to find out what the deal is with the family. PPS
Another GREAT chapter…p.p.s.
Ok, so, I actually feel badly for Lottie… And I will never see a fraction of what she has. As for Bette and Tina, no one needs to worry about them; I think Bette’s got enough alpha to kick anyone’s @$$, and Tina’s ferocious in her own right. Great stuff!
wow .. that turned out as one scarily long page …
Lol @ vam … I’m english! he’s just one person, and he happens to be pompous, promise to rectify it ….
I love this story – but what’s with anti-English vibe in “his pompous English ass”? It’s bad enough that Hollywood always characterises us as the “bad guy”!
Great story, and yep was a long page but great writing looking forward to what happens next.
Sofa, You can bust with more “one scarily long pages” as far as I’m concerned. this story has be so intrigued! Can you give us one more before the weekend? Please!
Poor Lottie, rich and unhappy. Those two words should never go together. Bette needs to step in a get these trustee under control instead of having them trying to control her and Lottie. Can’t wait to see what’s next.
I LOVE this story, and I LOVE how you write. I don’t want this to end and I’ve already got plans for you to continue writing whatever you need. Cause I’m totally hooked on reading!!!
Okay, i’m not gonna even start on what I think about your writing of B&T… Let’s just say that you’re doing the best job ever to actually put into words that a-fucking-mazing chemistry of theirs!!! We feel it in every single little bit you write about them… from the tiniest touch or glance to the most intense and passionate love encounter! Chemistry and togetherness… It’s all there! Oh, and I have a hunch that now that Bette is in the game, Lottie’s worries about that “no control” thing are about to see an end. To Bette no liking to be told what to do, add the fact she’s very very protective of her loved ones, and that now includes Lottie. Can’t wait to see Bette in action (with a behind the scene Tina, of course…)… Oh, and about that 4-poster bed…!!! ;)
I always look forward to this story. Can’t wait to see what Roger has in store for the sisters and how this is going to effect Tina and Angelica. Tina is so understanding and she is showing Lottie that. This is what makes Bette and Tina such a wonderful couple. They compliment each other.
Yes! Bring AlphaBette on! I can’t wait to read about the dinner and Bette taking charge and taking care of Roger…PPS!!
Excellent chapter but it was one page that never seemed to end. But that was good.PPS.
Bette and Tina could handle the Queen of England So Roger might have his had full with Bette. She is not a country Hick If her says anything to Tina his a** is grass and Bette will be the mower. Lottie is a little young but she will get so lessons fron one Ms Idont take any shit fron anyone PORTER Thanks so much for posting
great great story but there’s some big grey thing blotting out a couple of important conversations so I don’t understand what happpened…help???? soon please
Good chapter. Poor Lottie!
Angelica is adorable.
Lottie is lovely.
I love how you have Tina and Angel dealing with Bette who they both obviously adore and she them.
Enjoying the ride and looking forward to where you are taking me!