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Summer Vacation. Chapter 16
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Bette joined them,
“Miss Mitchell …” said the older of the two, “I am Arthur and this is John, we are your drivers,”
Lottie smiled, taking his white gloved hand and shaking it politely, “Hello … this is Bette Porter and Tina Kennard … and their daughter Angelica …” Lottie added, studying Arthur’s face closely for a reaction,
“Pleased to meet you …” Arthur addressed them both, undergoing the formal handshaking once again,
Bette shot Tina a look of interest, it seemed Richmond was a far cry from LA, Angelica wriggled, stirring herself against Bette,
“Who are they …?” Angie asked,
“They are here to pick us up,” Bette explained, carrying Angie with her as Arthur and John took the bags and cases from Lottie and Tina and ushered them outside to the waiting car,
Lottie groaned, stretched across the entire length of the drop off zone, which clearly stated that you couldn’t park there, sat a sparkling black stretched limousine. People all around were staring and Lottie felt her heart sink, remembering how this had shocked her the first time she’d come to Virginia, something she’d hoped to avoid for Bette and Tina,
“Ooh … it’s like Aunt Helena’s” Angie mentioned sleepily,
Lottie sighed, relieved, perhaps it would be okay after all, although Tina still looked mightily uncomfortable,
Angie hung her head out of the window with Bette’s digital camera as they rolled through the streets of Richmond on route to the hotel. Lottie could feel her anxiety growing, Roger wasn’t listening to her, not that he ever had before but she’d asked for a normal car and an unobtrusive welcoming committee and she’d ended up with neither, if he wasn’t listening about that then he wasn’t likely to listen about anything else,
Bette’s cell phone rang out,
“Oh hi Alice … good night last night?” Bette asked, her mood improved after several hours of sleep on the plane, she’d perked up even more when John the driver had presented them all with coffee. She glanced across at Lottie, her sunglasses back on to hide the dark circles around her eyes, Bette felt like having a bit of fun …
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Yay…another great chapter, love this story! BUT PLEASE DON’T LET LOTTIE AND ALICE HOOK UP – Lottie and Jo is much better, they just need to talk :o)) Hope Bette can help Lottie about these jerks who are running her life – nobody tells a Porter what to do!!! LOL. Oh and have a great weekend, it sounds like something exciting is happening :o))
Lottie and Alice… hopefully they’re just feeling a good friendship blossoming. Whoa, how rich *is* their mother’s family? I’m starting to wonder if Bette was never notified cos they cut their mother out after she married Melvin… hmmm. I love this story, sofa, one-pagers or not, post soon!
This is some story: always amazed where this is taking us. Just bright in designing the characters with love and emotion. Post soon because this is very addictive.
u say scary and u will find me saying….interesting!!!! NPP!!!!
also…is the families money drug related????
Another awesome chapter. Can’t wait to find out what the deal is with the family. PPS
Another GREAT chapter…p.p.s.
Ok, so, I actually feel badly for Lottie… And I will never see a fraction of what she has. As for Bette and Tina, no one needs to worry about them; I think Bette’s got enough alpha to kick anyone’s @$$, and Tina’s ferocious in her own right. Great stuff!
wow .. that turned out as one scarily long page …
Lol @ vam … I’m english! he’s just one person, and he happens to be pompous, promise to rectify it ….
I love this story – but what’s with anti-English vibe in “his pompous English ass”? It’s bad enough that Hollywood always characterises us as the “bad guy”!
Great story, and yep was a long page but great writing looking forward to what happens next.
Sofa, You can bust with more “one scarily long pages” as far as I’m concerned. this story has be so intrigued! Can you give us one more before the weekend? Please!
Poor Lottie, rich and unhappy. Those two words should never go together. Bette needs to step in a get these trustee under control instead of having them trying to control her and Lottie. Can’t wait to see what’s next.
I LOVE this story, and I LOVE how you write. I don’t want this to end and I’ve already got plans for you to continue writing whatever you need. Cause I’m totally hooked on reading!!!
Okay, i’m not gonna even start on what I think about your writing of B&T… Let’s just say that you’re doing the best job ever to actually put into words that a-fucking-mazing chemistry of theirs!!! We feel it in every single little bit you write about them… from the tiniest touch or glance to the most intense and passionate love encounter! Chemistry and togetherness… It’s all there! Oh, and I have a hunch that now that Bette is in the game, Lottie’s worries about that “no control” thing are about to see an end. To Bette no liking to be told what to do, add the fact she’s very very protective of her loved ones, and that now includes Lottie. Can’t wait to see Bette in action (with a behind the scene Tina, of course…)… Oh, and about that 4-poster bed…!!! ;)
I always look forward to this story. Can’t wait to see what Roger has in store for the sisters and how this is going to effect Tina and Angelica. Tina is so understanding and she is showing Lottie that. This is what makes Bette and Tina such a wonderful couple. They compliment each other.
Yes! Bring AlphaBette on! I can’t wait to read about the dinner and Bette taking charge and taking care of Roger…PPS!!
Excellent chapter but it was one page that never seemed to end. But that was good.PPS.
Bette and Tina could handle the Queen of England So Roger might have his had full with Bette. She is not a country Hick If her says anything to Tina his a** is grass and Bette will be the mower. Lottie is a little young but she will get so lessons fron one Ms Idont take any shit fron anyone PORTER Thanks so much for posting
great great story but there’s some big grey thing blotting out a couple of important conversations so I don’t understand what happpened…help???? soon please
Good chapter. Poor Lottie!
Angelica is adorable.
Lottie is lovely.
I love how you have Tina and Angel dealing with Bette who they both obviously adore and she them.
Enjoying the ride and looking forward to where you are taking me!