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Summer Vacation. Chapter 16
Bette sighed, “Never mind … have a good weekend Al”
“I don’t think you understand, I booked two rooms, so I need two keys,” Tina urged, annoyed when the concierge merely smiled at her again and nodded, pushing the silver key card towards her,
Lottie watched from the seats in the lobby, thinking that she should rescue her but simply not wanting to go there,
“It’s a Rodin …” Bette explain to Angelica, standing in front of the bronze bust on display in the lobby beneath a gigantic animated map of the United States capitol region, “remember when we went to the museum in Philadelphia with your grandfather?” she added,
Angelica nodded,
“Have you been to the Musée Rodin in Paris?” Lottie asked, watching Bette explain the way Rodin had used his hands to craft the bust and everything it signified,
“No …” replied Bette, “I’ve never had the chance …”
“Hey Tina …” said Lottie, joining her at the desk, “what’s the matter …?”
“This …” replied Tina, holding up one key, she turned to Lottie, “hey … where did our bags go?”
“They’ve already been taken to your room madam …” the concierge explained,
Arthur reappeared behind them, surreptitiously slipping the bell boy a tip as they parted,
“I trust you will find everything to your satisfaction Miss Mitchell” Arthur stated formally, he gave Tina a look, once up and down, ending at Tina’s feet where she wore tattered sandals exposing her bright red toe nails,
Lottie sighed, taking the key from Tina … “Thank you …”
Arthur moved to depart, “We will be back for you at seven,” he added, “Roger requests that you and your guests please join him for dinner …”
Lottie nodded, the idea of food still sitting uneasily with her, “Come on Tina …” she muttered, “Let’s go …”
They left Bette and Angelica in the lobby checking out the art, silently following the porter as her lead them towards the room, Tina kept her mouth shut, tired of expecting anyone to give her a plausible explanation for anything that was going on,
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(45 votes, average: 3.60 out of 5)
Yay…another great chapter, love this story! BUT PLEASE DON’T LET LOTTIE AND ALICE HOOK UP – Lottie and Jo is much better, they just need to talk :o)) Hope Bette can help Lottie about these jerks who are running her life – nobody tells a Porter what to do!!! LOL. Oh and have a great weekend, it sounds like something exciting is happening :o))
Lottie and Alice… hopefully they’re just feeling a good friendship blossoming. Whoa, how rich *is* their mother’s family? I’m starting to wonder if Bette was never notified cos they cut their mother out after she married Melvin… hmmm. I love this story, sofa, one-pagers or not, post soon!
This is some story: always amazed where this is taking us. Just bright in designing the characters with love and emotion. Post soon because this is very addictive.
u say scary and u will find me saying….interesting!!!! NPP!!!!
also…is the families money drug related????
Another awesome chapter. Can’t wait to find out what the deal is with the family. PPS
Another GREAT chapter…p.p.s.
Ok, so, I actually feel badly for Lottie… And I will never see a fraction of what she has. As for Bette and Tina, no one needs to worry about them; I think Bette’s got enough alpha to kick anyone’s @$$, and Tina’s ferocious in her own right. Great stuff!
wow .. that turned out as one scarily long page …
Lol @ vam … I’m english! he’s just one person, and he happens to be pompous, promise to rectify it ….
I love this story – but what’s with anti-English vibe in “his pompous English ass”? It’s bad enough that Hollywood always characterises us as the “bad guy”!
Great story, and yep was a long page but great writing looking forward to what happens next.
Sofa, You can bust with more “one scarily long pages” as far as I’m concerned. this story has be so intrigued! Can you give us one more before the weekend? Please!
Poor Lottie, rich and unhappy. Those two words should never go together. Bette needs to step in a get these trustee under control instead of having them trying to control her and Lottie. Can’t wait to see what’s next.
I LOVE this story, and I LOVE how you write. I don’t want this to end and I’ve already got plans for you to continue writing whatever you need. Cause I’m totally hooked on reading!!!
Okay, i’m not gonna even start on what I think about your writing of B&T… Let’s just say that you’re doing the best job ever to actually put into words that a-fucking-mazing chemistry of theirs!!! We feel it in every single little bit you write about them… from the tiniest touch or glance to the most intense and passionate love encounter! Chemistry and togetherness… It’s all there! Oh, and I have a hunch that now that Bette is in the game, Lottie’s worries about that “no control” thing are about to see an end. To Bette no liking to be told what to do, add the fact she’s very very protective of her loved ones, and that now includes Lottie. Can’t wait to see Bette in action (with a behind the scene Tina, of course…)… Oh, and about that 4-poster bed…!!! ;)
I always look forward to this story. Can’t wait to see what Roger has in store for the sisters and how this is going to effect Tina and Angelica. Tina is so understanding and she is showing Lottie that. This is what makes Bette and Tina such a wonderful couple. They compliment each other.
Yes! Bring AlphaBette on! I can’t wait to read about the dinner and Bette taking charge and taking care of Roger…PPS!!
Excellent chapter but it was one page that never seemed to end. But that was good.PPS.
Bette and Tina could handle the Queen of England So Roger might have his had full with Bette. She is not a country Hick If her says anything to Tina his a** is grass and Bette will be the mower. Lottie is a little young but she will get so lessons fron one Ms Idont take any shit fron anyone PORTER Thanks so much for posting
great great story but there’s some big grey thing blotting out a couple of important conversations so I don’t understand what happpened…help???? soon please
Good chapter. Poor Lottie!
Angelica is adorable.
Lottie is lovely.
I love how you have Tina and Angel dealing with Bette who they both obviously adore and she them.
Enjoying the ride and looking forward to where you are taking me!