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Summer Vacation. Chapter 23
Angie giggled, falling into Lottie, “Sorry … I guess we got carried away …”
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“Okay then! …” said Tina, commanding the attention of the hungry and thirsty mob that bowled excitedly around her living room, “there’s sandwiches and crisps and juice on the tables outside, go eat … and then we’ll do presents,”
Fifteen little people went tearing in the direction of the outside tables,
Tina flopped down onto the couch between Bette and Helena, “I’m exhausted,”
The others mumbled in agreement, barely able to move after they’d given in to the kids enthusiasm and gone a second round at the war games,
Alice groaned, rubbing the back of her neck ferociously to work out the knots, “Don’t know what you’re all complaining about …” she muttered, “I came off the worst BOTH times!”
Lottie grinned, taking over the rubbing of Alice’s shoulders as Alice sat between her legs on the floor, “That’s only because we love you …” she said, teasingly,
Helena groaned, “I don’t think I can move … Wilson, darling, fetch me a soda,”
Angie wandered back in when she was full enough to burst, laughing at her mothers and her aunts who lay sprawled out on the sofas and chairs in the living room, many with their eyes closed,
She grinned across at Lottie, one of the few who remained awake, before creeping up behind Bette and wrapping her hands across her Mom’s eyes,
Bette jumped, “What the? … Angie …”
Angie grinned, “We’re done Mom, is it time for presents?”
Bette chuckled, “Sure … go take a seat back outside and we’ll get them,”
Angie opened all her presents carefully, grinning at her friends when she opened their toys and games, she came to Helena’s gift and tore into the packaging, seeing first the picture of skates on the side of the box,
She turned to her aunt, “Skates …?”
Helena nodded,
Angie squealed, “Thanks Aunt Helena, thanks,” she turned to her mothers, knowing they too must have agreed, “thanks Mama, thanks Mom,”
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Great job on the paintball! I pictured everything so clearly! this convo with dady Melvin should be interesting! Post soon!
i love paintball games they are soo much fun even for the big kids too. i feel drama comin with melvin and he well love lottie after he thinks about and absored it. p.p.s..for your info you signed a 2 yr.contract with this fanbase,and it will not be BROKEN!
I love paint ball. It doe wash off easy. Love that Tina and Bette are together On Lottie. Melvin is a whole new ball game. thanks
I loved this chapter. The paint ball game was awesome. I can’t wait for the next one. I hope to have a gillian chapter done in the next couple of days. PPS
i am now all caught up… loved this… too bad IC doesn’t see it our way… thanks for the fun and the love between all these ladies…
Oh god I laughed so hard with the paint ball game. It made me want to go out and have my own game. Alice cracks me up with her leadership skills. It sounds like they all had fun painting each other with the different colored balls. The party and gift giving was also fun and funny. I can understand the tension that both Tina and Bette feel. Lisa is Tina’s co-worker and she is afraid for her and then there is Melvin and how will he react to Maxine having another child.
I loved the paintball. Such an enjoyable chapter. I don’t think Bette should worry so much about Melvin and Lottie. Once Melvin sees Lottie he’ll figure it out.
That paintball-inspired game was a total riot! I knew Alice would lose, she planned too hard to do anything but get a pummeling… Lottie certainly is falling in something with Jo, she’s infatuated at any rate. Lottie counting the freckles was too cute. I wonder what Melvin’s going to make of her? And I’ve been wondering when Bette would start to feel overwhelmed. And now she’s got Melvin to deal with on top of that… hopefully Tina can get her through it. Great chapter, sofa. Thanks
wonderful birthday for angie, wondering how things will pan out with Melvin,pps
Great job, as usual. And the paintball was SO FUNNY! I adore competitive Bette! :)
The paintball game is fun and Alice is so funny!