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Summer Vacation. Chapter 23
“Attack?!?!?” yelled Tina, spying green jumpsuits advancing on them, people began to dart everywhere, looking for cover behind the trees,
From the top of the hill Angie, her friends and Lottie watched on as green and blue balls of velcro went flying through the air, accompanied by cries of “Oh …” and “Ow …” and “Dammit … you got me!”
“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!” cried the boys from Kit’s team as they ran in to join the battle, covering Kit and Dana who lagged surreptitiously behind,
Coloured balls flew everywhere as Alice made feeble attempts to defend the red corner by herself, the others soon caught on, realising she was, for some reason, on her own,
“Ha!!!!!!!!” cried Bette mightily, as she pummelled Alice with blue bullets where she lay on the ground, “Surrender!!!”
“We have to help her …” said Angie, reluctantly,
They looked amongst each other, their red jumpsuits still free of any shots from the other teams,
“Okay …” said Lottie, “but lets make sure we make a good entrance,” she said, standing up, “get your guns ready”
They all stood up, drawing a mental path between themselves and the others, stood oblivious below,
“Ready?” said Lottie, “CHARGE!!!”
Five red figures descended into the chaos, firing bullets haphazardly in all directions, the others all screamed and then descended into laughter, turning their guns on the red team,
“Oh God …” said Bette, flopping down next to an exhausted Tina who’d run out of ammo a while ago,
Tina laughed, looking around at all the multicoloured bodies, “I think they had fun …” she said chuckling,
Alice emerged from the centre of the group, relieved that the bullets had finally run out,
Bette burst out laughing at the sight of her, covered from head to toe in tiny coloured balls with barely an inch left free, she covered her mouth, loving Alice’s despondent expression,
“Al …” said Tina, stifling her own laughter, “I think you lost …”
Alice looked down at herself, checking out her war wounds, she scowled, turning to her own team, “Hey!!!! … there’s red balls on here …”
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Great job on the paintball! I pictured everything so clearly! this convo with dady Melvin should be interesting! Post soon!
i love paintball games they are soo much fun even for the big kids too. i feel drama comin with melvin and he well love lottie after he thinks about and absored it. p.p.s..for your info you signed a 2 yr.contract with this fanbase,and it will not be BROKEN!
I love paint ball. It doe wash off easy. Love that Tina and Bette are together On Lottie. Melvin is a whole new ball game. thanks
I loved this chapter. The paint ball game was awesome. I can’t wait for the next one. I hope to have a gillian chapter done in the next couple of days. PPS
i am now all caught up… loved this… too bad IC doesn’t see it our way… thanks for the fun and the love between all these ladies…
Oh god I laughed so hard with the paint ball game. It made me want to go out and have my own game. Alice cracks me up with her leadership skills. It sounds like they all had fun painting each other with the different colored balls. The party and gift giving was also fun and funny. I can understand the tension that both Tina and Bette feel. Lisa is Tina’s co-worker and she is afraid for her and then there is Melvin and how will he react to Maxine having another child.
I loved the paintball. Such an enjoyable chapter. I don’t think Bette should worry so much about Melvin and Lottie. Once Melvin sees Lottie he’ll figure it out.
That paintball-inspired game was a total riot! I knew Alice would lose, she planned too hard to do anything but get a pummeling… Lottie certainly is falling in something with Jo, she’s infatuated at any rate. Lottie counting the freckles was too cute. I wonder what Melvin’s going to make of her? And I’ve been wondering when Bette would start to feel overwhelmed. And now she’s got Melvin to deal with on top of that… hopefully Tina can get her through it. Great chapter, sofa. Thanks
wonderful birthday for angie, wondering how things will pan out with Melvin,pps
Great job, as usual. And the paintball was SO FUNNY! I adore competitive Bette! :)
The paintball game is fun and Alice is so funny!