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Summer Vacation. Chapter 23
“FIRE!” yelled Wilson, before they even had a chance to turn around,
Dana squealed again, louder this time and ran, crashing into most of her team as she went,
Alice turned up the hill to look back at her team, mouthing “Such a goof!”
“Uh oh …” said Angie, spotting a small persons head dart out from behind a tree to the right of them before being pulled swiftly in again, “Greens …” she mouthed to Alice, pointing to the trees just behind her,
Alice nodded, not catching what she’d said,
Lottie glanced around, Kit’s team had scattered into the trees and Bette’s team were giggling jubilantly, basking in the success of their first ambush. From their hiding spots in the trees above, Shane’s team had full view of the blue lot in the clearing below and also Alice,
“Alice …” she hissed, crouching further to the ground, “Alice!”
Alice turned, nodding, still overcome by amusement at seeing Dana running squealing for the second time in one day, she was about to speak when she lost her footing and slid around the side of the tree she was hiding behind,
The rest of her team stifled giggles and ducked as Bette and Wilson looked up amongst the trees,
“What was that?” asked Bette, hushing her group,
Alice held her breath and tried to crawl back around the tree as the blue group approached,
Tina and the girls followed behind Bette as she stepped lightly, making a big deal out of going from tree to tree, they were about quit when Wilson spied Alice, making a break for it by running along the side of the hill,
“There she is!” he shouted, opening fire, the others joined in, without even seeing who it was they were shooting at, just a red jump suit,
Lottie looked to Angie apologetically, “I think we lost our leader …”
They both grinned as a gentle roar grew from the right of them and Shane’s team made a stampede in the direction of all the action,
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Great job on the paintball! I pictured everything so clearly! this convo with dady Melvin should be interesting! Post soon!
i love paintball games they are soo much fun even for the big kids too. i feel drama comin with melvin and he well love lottie after he thinks about and absored it. p.p.s..for your info you signed a 2 yr.contract with this fanbase,and it will not be BROKEN!
I love paint ball. It doe wash off easy. Love that Tina and Bette are together On Lottie. Melvin is a whole new ball game. thanks
I loved this chapter. The paint ball game was awesome. I can’t wait for the next one. I hope to have a gillian chapter done in the next couple of days. PPS
i am now all caught up… loved this… too bad IC doesn’t see it our way… thanks for the fun and the love between all these ladies…
Oh god I laughed so hard with the paint ball game. It made me want to go out and have my own game. Alice cracks me up with her leadership skills. It sounds like they all had fun painting each other with the different colored balls. The party and gift giving was also fun and funny. I can understand the tension that both Tina and Bette feel. Lisa is Tina’s co-worker and she is afraid for her and then there is Melvin and how will he react to Maxine having another child.
I loved the paintball. Such an enjoyable chapter. I don’t think Bette should worry so much about Melvin and Lottie. Once Melvin sees Lottie he’ll figure it out.
That paintball-inspired game was a total riot! I knew Alice would lose, she planned too hard to do anything but get a pummeling… Lottie certainly is falling in something with Jo, she’s infatuated at any rate. Lottie counting the freckles was too cute. I wonder what Melvin’s going to make of her? And I’ve been wondering when Bette would start to feel overwhelmed. And now she’s got Melvin to deal with on top of that… hopefully Tina can get her through it. Great chapter, sofa. Thanks
wonderful birthday for angie, wondering how things will pan out with Melvin,pps
Great job, as usual. And the paintball was SO FUNNY! I adore competitive Bette! :)
The paintball game is fun and Alice is so funny!