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Summer Vacation. Chapter 23
Tina stepped up to intervene, “Al, we might have to rethink things a bit, don’t you think? … after all, Kit’s a bit thin on the ground,” she added, glancing across at Kit who stood looking utterly dishevelled with three unamused little boys,
Alice caved in, “I guess …”
“Count me out too …” said Carmen, as the little girls who stood with her and Shane and Helena groaned, “What?” she said, looking to the others, “until Lara shows up there’s no one to watch Freddie …”
“Look …” said Bette sighing, she turned to the lone boy on Alice’s team, “Ed, why don’t you go with Kit and the other boys,” she noticed Lisa’s two kids standing nervously to one side, they were a lot younger than the others, “Shane, why don’t you take Lucas, and Rosie you can come with us?”
Shane nodded, wrapping her arm protectively around Lucas’ shoulder,
Alice clapped her hands, “Great … can we get going then?”
“Wait!!!!” yelled Dana, launching herself out of her car and sprinting across to join them, “wait …” she said doubled over, “I’m here …”
Angie went to hug her, winking at the four boys standing with their mouths agape, in awe of the former tennis pro, “Hey Aunt Dana,”
Dana held her tight, “Hey sweetie, … Lara’s in the car …” she said to Carmen, pointing,
Alice hopped impatiently from foot to foot, “Dana, get your suit on then … you too Carm, come on …!”
Lottie pushed her affectionately, “Would you calm down … you’re worse than the kids,”
Alice pushed her back, teasing, “Don’t have a go at me, … just cos you’re ‘tired’ …” she said, emphasising the word tired for Bette’s benefit,
Lottie scowled at her,
“Hey … kids …” mocked Bette, pulling them both towards her, “you’re on the same team, you’re supposed to be fighting other people … not each other!”
Alice frowned, “She started it …”
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“Okay …” said Angie, as they stopped just short of the red team’s base bunker, “Mom’s team are blue and they’ve gone north, Aunt Shane’s lot are green and they’re over there …” she added, pointing east, “And Aunty Kit, Aunt Dana and the boys are back in the direction we came from … and they’re yellow,”
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Great job on the paintball! I pictured everything so clearly! this convo with dady Melvin should be interesting! Post soon!
i love paintball games they are soo much fun even for the big kids too. i feel drama comin with melvin and he well love lottie after he thinks about and absored it. p.p.s..for your info you signed a 2 yr.contract with this fanbase,and it will not be BROKEN!
I love paint ball. It doe wash off easy. Love that Tina and Bette are together On Lottie. Melvin is a whole new ball game. thanks
I loved this chapter. The paint ball game was awesome. I can’t wait for the next one. I hope to have a gillian chapter done in the next couple of days. PPS
i am now all caught up… loved this… too bad IC doesn’t see it our way… thanks for the fun and the love between all these ladies…
Oh god I laughed so hard with the paint ball game. It made me want to go out and have my own game. Alice cracks me up with her leadership skills. It sounds like they all had fun painting each other with the different colored balls. The party and gift giving was also fun and funny. I can understand the tension that both Tina and Bette feel. Lisa is Tina’s co-worker and she is afraid for her and then there is Melvin and how will he react to Maxine having another child.
I loved the paintball. Such an enjoyable chapter. I don’t think Bette should worry so much about Melvin and Lottie. Once Melvin sees Lottie he’ll figure it out.
That paintball-inspired game was a total riot! I knew Alice would lose, she planned too hard to do anything but get a pummeling… Lottie certainly is falling in something with Jo, she’s infatuated at any rate. Lottie counting the freckles was too cute. I wonder what Melvin’s going to make of her? And I’ve been wondering when Bette would start to feel overwhelmed. And now she’s got Melvin to deal with on top of that… hopefully Tina can get her through it. Great chapter, sofa. Thanks
wonderful birthday for angie, wondering how things will pan out with Melvin,pps
Great job, as usual. And the paintball was SO FUNNY! I adore competitive Bette! :)
The paintball game is fun and Alice is so funny!