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    Summer Vacation. Chapter 23

     

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    “Someone’s coming!” said Lucas, tugging on the sleeve of Shane’s jumpsuit,

     

    “See …” said Shane, peeking her head out from behind their bunker, “I told you if we waited long enough they would,”

     

    She raised her finger to her lips, signalling to Helena and Carmen and Angie’s two friends Hanna and Holly, who were twins that no one could tell apart, to keep very quiet,
     

     

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    “Okay …” said Bette, pausing for a moment at the bottom of the hill just below the green base bunker, “that’s Shane’s teams base, so if we carry on around we should end up back behind Alice,”

     

     

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    Shane eased the barrel of her gun slowly up to peak over the top of the bunker which protected them, signalling to the others they should do the same, she glanced through a hole in the wood down at Bette, stood taking charge over her group,

     

    Shane chuckled, “On three … ready, … one … two … three … … …”

     

    “FIRE!” they all yelled together, raining a sea of green velcro balls down on Bette and her team,

     

    Bette cried out, startled, “RUN …!”

     

    Shane stood victorious, “You’ve been greened!!!!!”

     

     

     

     

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    “Now …” said Alice seriously, “we have to be careful, they know where we are,”

     

    Angie and her friends nodded in agreement, they were all still yet to take a bullet,

     

     

    Alice waved them on, advancing out of the hut and keeping low, they wandered deeper into the middle of the war zone, eagerly on the look out for one of the other teams,

     

    “Wait …” said Angie, pulling her Aunt back, “I think I can see Mom,”

     

     

    They all crouched low, watching from behind a cluster of trees as Bette and her team reconvened after their escape from the green teams attack,

     

     

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    Bette stood laughing as Tina leant against her, “Damnit …” she said, flicking at one of the tiny green spiky bullets that clung on tightly to her blue velcro suit, “I should have known that Shane would do something like that!”

    Comments

    1. i love paintball games they are soo much fun even for the big kids too. i feel drama comin with melvin and he well love lottie after he thinks about and absored it. p.p.s..for your info you signed a 2 yr.contract with this fanbase,and it will not be BROKEN!

    2. Oh god I laughed so hard with the paint ball game. It made me want to go out and have my own game. Alice cracks me up with her leadership skills. It sounds like they all had fun painting each other with the different colored balls. The party and gift giving was also fun and funny. I can understand the tension that both Tina and Bette feel. Lisa is Tina’s co-worker and she is afraid for her and then there is Melvin and how will he react to Maxine having another child.

    3. I loved the paintball. Such an enjoyable chapter. I don’t think Bette should worry so much about Melvin and Lottie. Once Melvin sees Lottie he’ll figure it out.

    4. That paintball-inspired game was a total riot! I knew Alice would lose, she planned too hard to do anything but get a pummeling… Lottie certainly is falling in something with Jo, she’s infatuated at any rate. Lottie counting the freckles was too cute. I wonder what Melvin’s going to make of her? And I’ve been wondering when Bette would start to feel overwhelmed. And now she’s got Melvin to deal with on top of that… hopefully Tina can get her through it. Great chapter, sofa. Thanks

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