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Summer Vacation. Chapter 23
Lottie looked around her, “Which way then?”
Angie shrugged, “Towards Mom?”
Alice nodded, pretending to crank up her gun that was loaded with red velcro balls, just like they do in the movies, “Onwards …!” she yelled, before dipping her fingers into the mud and smearing some across both cheeks,
Lottie burst out laughing, “Oh God!”
They walked straight ahead for a short while, Alice lead and Angie followed close behind with her friends whilst Lottie brought up the rear, checking behind her every now and again for any sign of the others,
It was hard to tell, there were so many trees and bunkers breaking up the landscape, with the occasional hut or shelter dotted here and there,
“Alice …!” hissed Lottie, “I think I hear something,
They all ducked into a nearby hut, Alice took up position at the window with her gun aimed at the ready, the little girls giggled at her,
“Ssh!” warned Alice,
They ducked down as Dana and a couple of the boys passed by, a way ahead of them into the trees,
“Get your guns …” said Alice,
They all moved to suitable gaps in the hut, stifling giggles at the excitement of their first attack,
“Ready …?” said Alice, “FIRE!”
Dana squealed, and they scattered, running away from the source of the red velcro bullets,
Alice turned to lean against the inside of the hut, “Score …!” she said triumphantly,
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“Do you know where you’re going?” Tina asked Bette, when they’d walked for a while and not run into anyone else, Wilson had even dropped his gun to his side, complacent in the apparent lack of anyone to fire at,
“Of course,” said Bette, “I’m heading towards Alice,”
“But I thought they were straight ahead …?” said Tina, glancing at the small map she’d been given,
Bette nodded, “They are, but if we go around the side then they wont be expecting us …”
Tina sighed and the little girls with them joined her, she’d had a momentary brain lapse when booking this activity for Angie’s birthday, forgetting how Alice and Bette’s intensely competitive battles got in the way of anyone actually having any fun,
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(30 votes, average: 3.80 out of 5)
Great job on the paintball! I pictured everything so clearly! this convo with dady Melvin should be interesting! Post soon!
i love paintball games they are soo much fun even for the big kids too. i feel drama comin with melvin and he well love lottie after he thinks about and absored it. p.p.s..for your info you signed a 2 yr.contract with this fanbase,and it will not be BROKEN!
I love paint ball. It doe wash off easy. Love that Tina and Bette are together On Lottie. Melvin is a whole new ball game. thanks
I loved this chapter. The paint ball game was awesome. I can’t wait for the next one. I hope to have a gillian chapter done in the next couple of days. PPS
i am now all caught up… loved this… too bad IC doesn’t see it our way… thanks for the fun and the love between all these ladies…
Oh god I laughed so hard with the paint ball game. It made me want to go out and have my own game. Alice cracks me up with her leadership skills. It sounds like they all had fun painting each other with the different colored balls. The party and gift giving was also fun and funny. I can understand the tension that both Tina and Bette feel. Lisa is Tina’s co-worker and she is afraid for her and then there is Melvin and how will he react to Maxine having another child.
I loved the paintball. Such an enjoyable chapter. I don’t think Bette should worry so much about Melvin and Lottie. Once Melvin sees Lottie he’ll figure it out.
That paintball-inspired game was a total riot! I knew Alice would lose, she planned too hard to do anything but get a pummeling… Lottie certainly is falling in something with Jo, she’s infatuated at any rate. Lottie counting the freckles was too cute. I wonder what Melvin’s going to make of her? And I’ve been wondering when Bette would start to feel overwhelmed. And now she’s got Melvin to deal with on top of that… hopefully Tina can get her through it. Great chapter, sofa. Thanks
wonderful birthday for angie, wondering how things will pan out with Melvin,pps
Great job, as usual. And the paintball was SO FUNNY! I adore competitive Bette! :)
The paintball game is fun and Alice is so funny!