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Summer Vacation. Chapter 25
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“Mmn” whispered Bette, “you’re warm as toast”
Tina smiled, “And you’re cold,” she said, pretending to shiver, “Did you find her?” she asked,
Bette nodded, “At Alice’s”
Tina grinned, “See I told you to go to Al’s”
Bette pulled away, Tina’s eyes were still closed and it seemed unlikely that she’d wake up further, “No …” corrected Bette, “you told me to call Alice, you didn’t say to go there …” she said, her tone relaying some annoyance,
Tina half raised one eyelid, “Same thing”
“It’s not …” Bette replied grumpily,
Tina brought her hands up between them both to rub at her sleepy eyes, “Alright …” she said, rousing herself, “what’s got to you now?”
Bette gave her a forlorn look, “How come she can talk to Alice but she wont talk to me?”
Tina sighed, “You’re asking the wrong person that Bette”
“Come on Tee … you know her better than me …” Bette cajoled, “hell, seems like everyone knows her better than me,”
Tina turned to rest her head on her hand, raising herself to look at Bette, her face dark and clouded, evidently feeling left out of the one situation she didn’t really want to be in, in the first place, “That’s not true, it’s just …” Tina paused, “Look … Alice is goofy and silly and acts like she’s closer to twenty than forty, that’s probably all it is …”
Bette nodded, “I guess …”
“Did you talk to her?” Tina asked,
Bette shrugged, “I apologised … Alice told me to go home and they’d both see us here for breakfast in the morning,”
“Well then,” said Tina, mildly surprised at Alice’s good sense, “go to sleep, we can sort it all out in the morning …” she added, her eyes closing as she spoke,
Bette watched her drifting off again, so sweet and peaceful, her hair messy and her skin pink from where she’d lain against the crinkles in the sheets, she had her face pressed up against Bette’s chest, her head nuzzled close into the warm spot beneath Bette’s chin,
Tina sighed and the rush of warm air sent tingles up and down Bette’s body,
“Tee …” whispered Bette, running her hands lightly up and down Tina’s back, “Tee …?”
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two a day. thanks for this
ok so am waiting…when’s the next one gonna b up…huh..huh??? this one was sweet, got all the basis covered. for a while there I thought that u’d have someone at Jo’s apartment. *wipes forehead* NPP!!!
Lottie and Jo really are adorable… thank the stars Bette and Lottie finally got together and found some common ground and had a *real* talk. I hope this is the start of them becoming really close. Well as close as they can be, with the age gap. …Oh to have been a fly on the wall when Melvin walked in on Miss Pieszecki… I get the giggles just thinking about that. Great chapter, sofa, thanks!
2for2 love it…im glad bette comin around with lottie..p.p.s.
I get so into your writing….I hate to scroll down and come to the end, but, alas! there is always the anticipation of more… Love how Lottie is slowly, but surely getting the family she so clearly wants, but doesn’t everyone… wonderful….
Awesome. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Something tells me Bette isn’t going to let her little sister remain in a premed program. I loved it. PPS
What a great story. FResh and delicious.
I so love this story!!!! Bette and Lottie are so alike its funny. But I am glad they are becomming close. Thank you PPS
The second coming of Bette and Tina starring Lottie and Jo as the star crossed lovers. Alice is still Alice. You know that she will always be there for you. I like how you have written Melvin and how he has mellowed. The whole extended family is what I would strife to have in my own life.
Hey, let them think whatever they want, PC. Awesome and totally sweet, as always.
I love love this story, you know that don’t you…all the characters are great including Melvin-what a surprise???? My fav is Lottie; my fav couple?…well, thats not hard but Lottie and Jo are shaping up to give em a run for their money huh??? Catch you next week.
i READ this and i loved it, and then i skipped to another story of yours–and forgot to comment. your nc17 is faaaantastic. heh;) you make me LIKE tina and bette together which is a HUGE feat my friend. good work, and keep it up. very cute…
Oh BTW, forgot to say – don’t skip the night, wanna read about Lottie/Jo :o))
Awww I love this story – loved the Bette/Lottie talk which was needed, love your Tina and looove Lottie/Jo – so fucking cute :o)) More, more, more of this story, pleeeaaaase (okay I just begged I think LOL)
Love this, love this, love this! Even better without the sniffing and all those tissues around!… “Promise me this will never stop”… such a great line…. I’m glad that Bette and Lottie finally “really” talked. I think that Bette should offer Tina her mother’s ring. It would be symbolic and right the wrong…. Anyway, thanks for this chapter, I just came back from a vacation and found it… It was a great surprise! ;)
That was wonderful!