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Summer Vacation. Chapter 25
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“What’s that?” asked Angie, pointing to the ring,
Tina pulled up a box and sat opposite them, smiling at Lottie,
“It’s a ring,” said Bette, “it belonged to your grandmother,”
“Grandma Maxine?” Angie asked, checking,
Bette nodded,
“Does Grandpa know?” Angie asked, wondering,
“Uh huh …” said Bette, nodding again, “he gave it to her”
“Come one Angie,” said Tina, holding out her hand for her daughter, “we’ll go start dinner,” she said to Bette, “Lottie, will you stay tonight?”
Lottie nodded, “Thanks”
Bette watched them leave, alone again in the attic with just her thoughts, a bunch of ancient dusty memories and Lottie, who looked like she was about to burst into tears at any second, Bette threw her arm around her shoulder and pulled her close, “It’s going to be okay you know …”
Lottie sniffed, “Is it …” she paused, “If you think telling your father was bad, you haven’t even met my father yet …”
Bette’s heart sank, “Look, whatever happens now you’re here and that can’t change,” she paused, “and I’m glad you’re here …” she added, smiling at Lottie’s teary face,
“Really?”
“Sure …” Bette paused, “for lots of reasons, number one, Alice hasn’t teased me half as much since you turned up,”
Lottie laughed, “Any others, besides me getting Alice off your back?”
Bette shrugged, “Oh I don’t know, maybe the fact that it feels like I’m getting a second chance to know the person I always wanted to know for most of my life …”
Lottie sniffed, “Yeah …” she glanced down at the paintings on her lap, “Bette … do you wish I’d just stayed away?”
Bette thought about it, Angie absolutely adored her, Tina clearly loved her, Alice had adopted her as her new best friend and Helena was already making plans to teach her how to change the world, all that was left was to decide what ‘she’ now thought about her,
Lottie stared at her, nervous about the length of her pause, then Bette smiled, “No …” she grinned, “now I just have to get to know you …”
Lottie grinned at her, “What do you want to know?”
Bette thought for a moment, so many things, nineteen years worth of things in fact, “What do you miss …?” she asked after thinking, “what’s the one thing you miss about home since you’re here?”
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two a day. thanks for this
ok so am waiting…when’s the next one gonna b up…huh..huh??? this one was sweet, got all the basis covered. for a while there I thought that u’d have someone at Jo’s apartment. *wipes forehead* NPP!!!
Lottie and Jo really are adorable… thank the stars Bette and Lottie finally got together and found some common ground and had a *real* talk. I hope this is the start of them becoming really close. Well as close as they can be, with the age gap. …Oh to have been a fly on the wall when Melvin walked in on Miss Pieszecki… I get the giggles just thinking about that. Great chapter, sofa, thanks!
2for2 love it…im glad bette comin around with lottie..p.p.s.
I get so into your writing….I hate to scroll down and come to the end, but, alas! there is always the anticipation of more… Love how Lottie is slowly, but surely getting the family she so clearly wants, but doesn’t everyone… wonderful….
Awesome. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Something tells me Bette isn’t going to let her little sister remain in a premed program. I loved it. PPS
What a great story. FResh and delicious.
I so love this story!!!! Bette and Lottie are so alike its funny. But I am glad they are becomming close. Thank you PPS
The second coming of Bette and Tina starring Lottie and Jo as the star crossed lovers. Alice is still Alice. You know that she will always be there for you. I like how you have written Melvin and how he has mellowed. The whole extended family is what I would strife to have in my own life.
Hey, let them think whatever they want, PC. Awesome and totally sweet, as always.
I love love this story, you know that don’t you…all the characters are great including Melvin-what a surprise???? My fav is Lottie; my fav couple?…well, thats not hard but Lottie and Jo are shaping up to give em a run for their money huh??? Catch you next week.
i READ this and i loved it, and then i skipped to another story of yours–and forgot to comment. your nc17 is faaaantastic. heh;) you make me LIKE tina and bette together which is a HUGE feat my friend. good work, and keep it up. very cute…
Oh BTW, forgot to say – don’t skip the night, wanna read about Lottie/Jo :o))
Awww I love this story – loved the Bette/Lottie talk which was needed, love your Tina and looove Lottie/Jo – so fucking cute :o)) More, more, more of this story, pleeeaaaase (okay I just begged I think LOL)
Love this, love this, love this! Even better without the sniffing and all those tissues around!… “Promise me this will never stop”… such a great line…. I’m glad that Bette and Lottie finally “really” talked. I think that Bette should offer Tina her mother’s ring. It would be symbolic and right the wrong…. Anyway, thanks for this chapter, I just came back from a vacation and found it… It was a great surprise! ;)
That was wonderful!