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Summer Vacation. Chapter 32
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“Lottie?” Angie asked as Lottie tucked her in,
“Yes …”
“Are you cross with me?”
Lottie sat herself on the edge of Angie’s bed, “No Ange … why would you think that?”
Angie shrugged, hiding herself a little beneath the bed clothes, “I heard you and Miss Parkes fighting about me,” came the muffled reply from beneath the sheets,
Lottie sighed, pulling back the duvet, “Ange, we weren’t fighting about you,”
“You were!” Angie shot back, “I heard you, Miss Parkes said you were being unreasonable, then you said no, she was being unreasonable because she was mad at you for not telling her I broke my arm,”
“Angie, this is why you shouldn’t listen in on adults conversations,” Lottie stated,
Angie chewed on her bottom lip nervously, “I guess,”
“Look,” said Lottie calmly, “I don’t even know why Jo and I are fighting,” she paused, watching in amusement as Angie giggled at the use of her teachers first name, “but I do know that it’s not because of you …”
Angie settled down, “Okay,”
“Definitely not because of you …” Lottie added, tickling the little girl until she agreed to submit,
“Okay, okay …” Angie squealed, “I believe you!”
When Lottie returned downstairs, Tina and Bette were curled up together under the blanket Bette had previously been sharing with Angelica. She stood at the bottom of the stairs, the sound of the tv obscuring her presence as she watched for a moment, privy to a detail not many outside of their immediate family would see.
Tina’s head leant upon Bette’s shoulder, the contrast of straw-coloured blonde curls against darker, more luxurious chocolate coloured ones. Angie was an interesting mix of them both, and not for the first time, Lottie was reminded how little biology actually mattered.
They were beginning to influence her; in a way few had done so before, their lifestyle becoming one she would like to emulate. Where before there’d been a vast expanse of nothingness to live up to when she thought about her future, Tina and Bette lay the foundations of something worth building towards, and it wasn’t about marriage or kids but about building a network through which she would always have family.
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hey, i’m first! *squeals with delight* that was great hun, super duper great. i was kinda enthralled…so much so that i have neglected my work for half an hour, re-reading your story twice. ok, so helena and alice..very subtle which made it all the more yummy…i like them together, and its good to go into that “why start, we got hurt once before, blahblah” angst that everyone goes through. people avoid shit cuz of those convos and i say ‘hooey!’ so i’m glad they’re going there! and jo and lottie…lottie should call the girl. i like that you’re going into that as well–those communication subtleties that are layered and different among women…we can all play those parts, we can all be emotionally clueless…the best is when the group jumps on lottie about that. i cracked up. i also cracked up at dana’s preggers breast fetish…hilarious…keep up the story, i furkin’ love it:) xo, pps, when you get some time off work darlin’
Very nice! I really liked that lunchtime round table discussion. Re: Jo, As hb said, Lottie needs to just pick up the phone. Al + Hels, I still like! And I wonder what trouble is coming from Mr. Lottie’s Dad. (can’t remember their last name?) Glad you had the time to post, more when you can, sofa, ta!
YAY YOU’RE BACK AND I HOPE YOUR PRESENCE WILL ONCE AGAIN BE A REGULAR ONE!!! I had forgotten about this story, however now I am truly happy to be reminded about it once again. Lottie’s dad..hmm drama to come I feel the winds changing. Jo and Lottie have gotta to make up, with both of them meeting half way, cause as I see it neither of them is wrong. NC17 with Al and H to come, (prefer NC17’s with B & T any day though). I love how Tina comes in and reprimands them from there fights and such, its cute. PPRS!!!!!
I can’t wait to see how Lottie’s father behaves. It seems like so much of her life is clothed in mystery. PPS!
Well this chapter surely had Lottie at the center of a lot of drama. Entertaining all around. Love the scene at the planet as they all ganged up on Lottie. Can’t wait to see Lottie’s dad’s reaction to her new life.
Yeah, Lottie’s avoidance lost her her chance to have some control over her situation (with her father and Jo) and now the shit is hitting the fan at the same time as her father is knocking on the door. It remains to be seen if his presence will be as traumatic as Lottie feared. Also remains to be seen if Jo or Lottie will step up to the plate (an Americanism) in regards to their issue(s). I like to use parentheses and you like asteriks. To each his (or her) own.
oooo! This should be good! I am thoroughly enjoying your story, especially the new characters you have created! One request: Can you write a scene with Sharmen? Post soon!
Hey there Sofa! Brilliant chapter. Always love the group scenes… can just imagine Dana drooling over the baby breasts! Your dialogue is so much better than what the show provides. Interested to see the fallout over the arrival of Lottie’s father… I sense drama in the works. By the way, if it’s positive reinforcement you desire, I am only too obliged to beg for chapters!!
Me too Sofa, I’ll beg, I love this story, you just suck up into being one of the family. Thanks good job, can’t wait for next chappy, please do so soon, there is weekend coming up. Md
Perfect!!!!! Great!!!!! and the cliffhanger!!!!! u better hurry up and post the follow up….
So Lottie’s dad has graced his daughter’s life. I hope that he will not freak out while in Bette and Tina’s home. When he sees Bette will he see her mother in her as he see her in Lottie? I love Alice and Helena together. Besides Bette and Tina I would like to see those two together in the upcoming season.
That was awesome!
Sofa your story and storytelling just gets better and better. I love the subtle parallels between Lottie and Bette, they are sisters afterall, right?! You have the dynamics of these characters down so well that the dialog and their interactions, their quirks (pregnant breasts?! LOL) come totally to life on the page. i hope you never get tired of giving us your version of the girls, I don’t know if I’d survive!! LOL. PPS