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Summer Vacation. Chapter 41
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Lottie paused, “I dunno, kennelling I suppose … I was thinking of asking her if she’d let me look after him,” she added, wondering if Helena would overhear and thus negate the need for her to ask,
“Look after who?” Alice piped up,
Lottie nodded to the sleeping chocolate Labrador by her feet, “Banjo,”
“Oh,”
Carmen arrived shortly after with Lara, the two of them pushing Freddie ahead in his stroller as Dana lagged behind, looking slightly beaten down and harassed by her morning,
“Morning Mommies …”Alice teased,
Dana flopped down beside her and groaned, “Don’t.”
Alice frowned, eyeing the situation carefully, it seemed to them all that pregnant women were like ticking time bombs, apt to go off unannounced any second, day or night.
“What did you do?” Shane asked in a hushed voice, leaning over to join their conversation. The three of them went unnoticed, as Lottie, Tina, Helena and Bette all shuffled to make room for Carmen, Lara and the stroller, cooing over Freddie who was dressed in another adorable outfit Carmen’s Mom had sent,
Dana shrugged, slouching in to her seat to hide behind Alice, “All I said was yes …”
Shane and Alice exchanged confused glances,
“Yes, to what?” Alice asked,
Dana paused, “She asked if I thought she was getting fatter …” she stopped then, obviously reliving the repercussions, “so I said yes …”
Shane and Alice groaned, answering simultaneously, “Dane!!”
“What?” Dana protested loudly, “what … what’s wrong with that?”
They both eyed her silently, knowing that she knew really,
“Fine …” Dana mumbled, “next time I’ll say ‘no darling, you’re blooming,’ … or some other shit like that,” she paused, “but she *is* getting fatter,” she added quietly, “I thought that would be a good thing?”
Shane shook her head and laughed, “It is … but you’re not supposed to ‘tell’ them that!”
Dana offered a half-hearted smile, “I suppose,”
Crisis averted, talk turned to the weekend, and Lottie found herself slightly perplexed and amazed by the weird and wonderful activities everyone had planned.
It seemed Shane and Carmen were otherwise engaged. After seeing Angie’s play that night they’d be spending Saturday with Carmen’s family, much to Shane’s disgust and after that, Sunday didn’t seem worth talking about, the only highlight was Carmen’s second gig on the Saturday night.
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Please don’t stop, I totally adore your story! I love that the characters have challenges but ultimately love one another and want whats best. I was crackin’ up at Angie and then Lottie catching Bette and Tina. :) LMAO! Great job!
It weird to a child to catch your parents.thanks goodness Bette didnt undress completely. Don’t stop this to much is happenion to leave us hanging
”very keen to get something posted before next week, when I’m up in the spotlight ” …Nice!… (btw, Where is the ‘spotlight’? – I’m clueless – never participated in it before.) Date?/Link?
Hey Sofa, great chapter, please do not stop I love this story and as long as write I will read no matter how long it takes u to post. Plus I spend two days reading this story from start just a few months ago and so don’t let my reading go waste by not continuing the story:)PPS
I have been a silent reader on this site for some time but, I really, really like this story. So glad to see you posting and hope that you will be able to post often. jinjur
Don’t stop this story, LOL at the bette and tina for getting caught by angie… :)
Hey all, thanks, I’m not stopping, no way … don’t get me wrong, it’s just after chronic writers block I always get super edgy/anxious before posting again … anyway … for Nanc, the link to the spotlight on the main discussions board is http://discussion.l-word.com/viewforum.php?f=73 I hope that works, it starts new each week on a Sunday :-D, I’ll reply to comments properly next post … and it won’t be weeks and weeks I promise! Sofa x
Sofa, I’m really glad your back with this story, I’v really missed it. I love reading about how the whole family interacts and can’t wait for Lotties’ party. Thank you. Md
What a pleasant surprise to find this chapter tonight! I still love this story Sofa and I’ll keep reading if you keep writing! B&T caught out by Angie…LMAO!
You know that I love this story. I can never get enough of it. I can picture Bette and Tina enjoying a little time to themselves and relaxing after the little excersie session. I can also see Angie’s reaction after catching her moms in the relaxation mode after the exercise session.
great to have u back Sofa. Looking forward to lots and lots of CONSTANT updates. lol with TONS AND TONS OF NC17’S!!!! B & T THAT IS!!!
I love the way you weave together an emotional maturity, psychological insight and beautiful love making. This is my favorite paragraph.”Bette cleared the plates from the table, leaving Tina to sit and think, the summer time was like a role reversal for them, with Tina the one working the most hours and Bette mostly off during the day, it gave them time to switch roles and remember that sitting so firmly in ideas of who they were based on jobs and money was the thing that almost killed them in the first place.”
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the b-day bash!
*runs by yelling ‘sofa is a hottttie!’ whoowhoo!*
Please don’t stop. I like your story. I always wait for another chapter.
Yeah, don’t stop. I LOVE your story. It’s really great and I would love to hear how it’s going on with the girls…
oh plz u have to post the NEXT chapter soon!!!! That was seriously funny that Bette and Tina were caught at it!!!
hey baby, i told you liked this chapter, and you didn’t dissapoint with the rest:) hahahaha, tina and bette got caught…thats funny. i hope it never happens to me…well anyway, i’m just saying, locks are good! and thankx for being realistic about the one issue we’re all always avoiding–these people are parents and i know that i often write their kids ‘away at a babysitter’ which makes me laugh that no one ever calls me a fool for doing it. anyhoo, great chapter, i’m thrilled you posted, and yeah…hehe…you’re the cutest. xo
HAHAHA! Bette & Tina caught red-handed by their own daughter. Funny and embarrassing as hell! Welcome back, sofa!!! I’m glad you’ve come around that dreaded Writer’s Block. And I don’t see myself getting tired of reading updates on this story anytime soon. I hope you’ll get on a roll again but if not, don’t worry and pressure yourself. We’re patient, we’ll just wait for your next post whenever it comes. Thank you!!! ;>
So happy to see you back, sofa! Very glad to hear you’re not thinking of stopping ’cause this just gets better every chapter. Love Angie’s gross reaction and look forward to Lottie’s birthday bash. Enjoy the spotlight and I may drop by for that hot chocolate…mmmm.
That was great, love B&T so hot!