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Summer Vacation. Chapter 41
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Lottie chuckled, “I’m not sure Carmen’s idea of good music is Avril Lavigne and Hilary Duff …”
Shane rolled her eyes, “Actually, you’d be surprised what constitutes ‘good’ music in Carm’s book,” she muttered, earning her a swift thump on the arm by Carmen,
“How was the gig?” Lottie asked, a little sad that they’d not been able to go, part of being in LA meant taking advantage of the night life and music scene and when you happened to know one of LA’s top DJ’s personally it was a shame to have to pass that up,
“Great,” Carmen smiled, “if you’re free on Saturday you should come, everyone else is …”
Lottie grinned again, glancing around the table, she beamed with enthusiasm then caught Bette’s eye, “Everyone … are you going?”
Bette snorted into Tina’s side, “No …” she chuckled, “no, you don’t have to worry, we wont be there to cramp your style …”
Lottie blushed, “I didn’t mean …”
Alice threw her arm around Lottie’s shoulders and drew her in close, “Just ignore her,” she stated, glaring at Bette, “we’ll have a great time, it’s just you and Jo, me, Dane and Shane,”
Lottie nodded, “Ok,”
“I’d better run,” Bette mumbled to Tina, she turned her head to whisper close against Tina’s ear and their eyes spoke, so quietly that Lottie was sure no one at the table noticed the interaction but her,
Tina nodded and pulled away, shifting her chair to let Bette leave,
“Don’t forget I need a ride to the school later?” Lottie meekly called after Bette, the sentence making her feel like a ten year old,
Bette turned back and nodded, “I won’t,” she glanced at her watch, allowing herself a generous hour to get across town, pick up the print and drop it off at the framers before driving all the way back again, “see you here at 2.30pm?”
Lottie nodded as Bette left, “Sure,”
“When do you get your car back?” Alice asked, stirring the pot,
“Whenever Bette quits hiding my keys,” Lottie grumbled, she said it quietly with her eyes downcast, knowing that if and when she did look up both Tina and Helena would be glaring at her disapprovingly for not believing that all Bette was doing was trying to look out for her, after which their stares would turn on Alice for being the one to egg her on, “I know …. I know …” Lottie mumbled, saving them all the trouble, “she’s only doing it because she cares!”
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Please don’t stop, I totally adore your story! I love that the characters have challenges but ultimately love one another and want whats best. I was crackin’ up at Angie and then Lottie catching Bette and Tina. :) LMAO! Great job!
It weird to a child to catch your parents.thanks goodness Bette didnt undress completely. Don’t stop this to much is happenion to leave us hanging
”very keen to get something posted before next week, when I’m up in the spotlight ” …Nice!… (btw, Where is the ‘spotlight’? – I’m clueless – never participated in it before.) Date?/Link?
Hey Sofa, great chapter, please do not stop I love this story and as long as write I will read no matter how long it takes u to post. Plus I spend two days reading this story from start just a few months ago and so don’t let my reading go waste by not continuing the story:)PPS
I have been a silent reader on this site for some time but, I really, really like this story. So glad to see you posting and hope that you will be able to post often. jinjur
Don’t stop this story, LOL at the bette and tina for getting caught by angie… :)
Hey all, thanks, I’m not stopping, no way … don’t get me wrong, it’s just after chronic writers block I always get super edgy/anxious before posting again … anyway … for Nanc, the link to the spotlight on the main discussions board is http://discussion.l-word.com/viewforum.php?f=73 I hope that works, it starts new each week on a Sunday :-D, I’ll reply to comments properly next post … and it won’t be weeks and weeks I promise! Sofa x
Sofa, I’m really glad your back with this story, I’v really missed it. I love reading about how the whole family interacts and can’t wait for Lotties’ party. Thank you. Md
What a pleasant surprise to find this chapter tonight! I still love this story Sofa and I’ll keep reading if you keep writing! B&T caught out by Angie…LMAO!
You know that I love this story. I can never get enough of it. I can picture Bette and Tina enjoying a little time to themselves and relaxing after the little excersie session. I can also see Angie’s reaction after catching her moms in the relaxation mode after the exercise session.
great to have u back Sofa. Looking forward to lots and lots of CONSTANT updates. lol with TONS AND TONS OF NC17’S!!!! B & T THAT IS!!!
I love the way you weave together an emotional maturity, psychological insight and beautiful love making. This is my favorite paragraph.”Bette cleared the plates from the table, leaving Tina to sit and think, the summer time was like a role reversal for them, with Tina the one working the most hours and Bette mostly off during the day, it gave them time to switch roles and remember that sitting so firmly in ideas of who they were based on jobs and money was the thing that almost killed them in the first place.”
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the b-day bash!
*runs by yelling ‘sofa is a hottttie!’ whoowhoo!*
Please don’t stop. I like your story. I always wait for another chapter.
Yeah, don’t stop. I LOVE your story. It’s really great and I would love to hear how it’s going on with the girls…
oh plz u have to post the NEXT chapter soon!!!! That was seriously funny that Bette and Tina were caught at it!!!
hey baby, i told you liked this chapter, and you didn’t dissapoint with the rest:) hahahaha, tina and bette got caught…thats funny. i hope it never happens to me…well anyway, i’m just saying, locks are good! and thankx for being realistic about the one issue we’re all always avoiding–these people are parents and i know that i often write their kids ‘away at a babysitter’ which makes me laugh that no one ever calls me a fool for doing it. anyhoo, great chapter, i’m thrilled you posted, and yeah…hehe…you’re the cutest. xo
HAHAHA! Bette & Tina caught red-handed by their own daughter. Funny and embarrassing as hell! Welcome back, sofa!!! I’m glad you’ve come around that dreaded Writer’s Block. And I don’t see myself getting tired of reading updates on this story anytime soon. I hope you’ll get on a roll again but if not, don’t worry and pressure yourself. We’re patient, we’ll just wait for your next post whenever it comes. Thank you!!! ;>
So happy to see you back, sofa! Very glad to hear you’re not thinking of stopping ’cause this just gets better every chapter. Love Angie’s gross reaction and look forward to Lottie’s birthday bash. Enjoy the spotlight and I may drop by for that hot chocolate…mmmm.
That was great, love B&T so hot!