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Summer Vacation. Chapter 41
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Lottie stopped at the edge of the sidewalk, “You do?”
Bette started up her run again with the car in sight, “Yes,”
Lottie had to laugh, the kitchen when they got there looked like a tornado ran through it, in her rush to meet Lottie Bette had thrown her one and only signature dish in the oven and left the rest to clear up on her return,
Bette glared at her as she peeked in the oven to take a look, “Don’t say anything,”
Lottie held up her hands in protest, “I didn’t,” she paused, “you wanna hand?”
Bette shook her head, “No thanks,” she threw Angie’s bag Lottie’s way and grabbed her keys again, “Let’s go,”
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“I think Bette’s planning a romantic dinner,” Lottie whispered, as she and Jo sat to the side, mere observers at the end of term party.
Jo smiled, “That’s nice …”
“Nice?” Lottie giggled, “don’t you think it’s great that after all the years they’ve been together they still want to surprise each other like that?”
Jo grinned at her, turning her head away from the crowd of screeching children and in to face Lottie so that their eyes were locked together, blocking out the sights and sounds around, “Yes, I suppose,”
Lottie sighed, wondering what Paris would be like with Jo there, excited because the thought of more romance overwhelmed her, she didn’t know if she was in love with Jo or simply infatuated with the way she made her feel,
The children ran around in circles high on sugar and soda, dancing to the music their quirky art teacher was mixing and collecting in hushed groups on opposing sides so the girls could talk about the boys and the boys could pretend not to talk about the girls,
Lottie nudged her nose in Angie’s direction, drawing Jo’s attention to Angie and Alfie dancing together on the edge of the dance floor,
“Don’t watch her,” Jo whispered, hushed, “you’ll embarrass her,”
“She’s my niece,” Lottie protested, “I’m allowed to embarrass her,”
Jo took a glance around the room and then seeing that there were plenty of other teachers there to keep watch, got up and pulled Lottie along with her, out into the courtyard beside the library at the back of the school,
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Please don’t stop, I totally adore your story! I love that the characters have challenges but ultimately love one another and want whats best. I was crackin’ up at Angie and then Lottie catching Bette and Tina. :) LMAO! Great job!
It weird to a child to catch your parents.thanks goodness Bette didnt undress completely. Don’t stop this to much is happenion to leave us hanging
”very keen to get something posted before next week, when I’m up in the spotlight ” …Nice!… (btw, Where is the ‘spotlight’? – I’m clueless – never participated in it before.) Date?/Link?
Hey Sofa, great chapter, please do not stop I love this story and as long as write I will read no matter how long it takes u to post. Plus I spend two days reading this story from start just a few months ago and so don’t let my reading go waste by not continuing the story:)PPS
I have been a silent reader on this site for some time but, I really, really like this story. So glad to see you posting and hope that you will be able to post often. jinjur
Don’t stop this story, LOL at the bette and tina for getting caught by angie… :)
Hey all, thanks, I’m not stopping, no way … don’t get me wrong, it’s just after chronic writers block I always get super edgy/anxious before posting again … anyway … for Nanc, the link to the spotlight on the main discussions board is http://discussion.l-word.com/viewforum.php?f=73 I hope that works, it starts new each week on a Sunday :-D, I’ll reply to comments properly next post … and it won’t be weeks and weeks I promise! Sofa x
Sofa, I’m really glad your back with this story, I’v really missed it. I love reading about how the whole family interacts and can’t wait for Lotties’ party. Thank you. Md
What a pleasant surprise to find this chapter tonight! I still love this story Sofa and I’ll keep reading if you keep writing! B&T caught out by Angie…LMAO!
You know that I love this story. I can never get enough of it. I can picture Bette and Tina enjoying a little time to themselves and relaxing after the little excersie session. I can also see Angie’s reaction after catching her moms in the relaxation mode after the exercise session.
great to have u back Sofa. Looking forward to lots and lots of CONSTANT updates. lol with TONS AND TONS OF NC17’S!!!! B & T THAT IS!!!
I love the way you weave together an emotional maturity, psychological insight and beautiful love making. This is my favorite paragraph.”Bette cleared the plates from the table, leaving Tina to sit and think, the summer time was like a role reversal for them, with Tina the one working the most hours and Bette mostly off during the day, it gave them time to switch roles and remember that sitting so firmly in ideas of who they were based on jobs and money was the thing that almost killed them in the first place.”
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the b-day bash!
*runs by yelling ‘sofa is a hottttie!’ whoowhoo!*
Please don’t stop. I like your story. I always wait for another chapter.
Yeah, don’t stop. I LOVE your story. It’s really great and I would love to hear how it’s going on with the girls…
oh plz u have to post the NEXT chapter soon!!!! That was seriously funny that Bette and Tina were caught at it!!!
hey baby, i told you liked this chapter, and you didn’t dissapoint with the rest:) hahahaha, tina and bette got caught…thats funny. i hope it never happens to me…well anyway, i’m just saying, locks are good! and thankx for being realistic about the one issue we’re all always avoiding–these people are parents and i know that i often write their kids ‘away at a babysitter’ which makes me laugh that no one ever calls me a fool for doing it. anyhoo, great chapter, i’m thrilled you posted, and yeah…hehe…you’re the cutest. xo
HAHAHA! Bette & Tina caught red-handed by their own daughter. Funny and embarrassing as hell! Welcome back, sofa!!! I’m glad you’ve come around that dreaded Writer’s Block. And I don’t see myself getting tired of reading updates on this story anytime soon. I hope you’ll get on a roll again but if not, don’t worry and pressure yourself. We’re patient, we’ll just wait for your next post whenever it comes. Thank you!!! ;>
So happy to see you back, sofa! Very glad to hear you’re not thinking of stopping ’cause this just gets better every chapter. Love Angie’s gross reaction and look forward to Lottie’s birthday bash. Enjoy the spotlight and I may drop by for that hot chocolate…mmmm.
That was great, love B&T so hot!