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Summer Vacation. Chapter 41
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Tina chuckled, “You two are funny, … right!” she clasped her hands together, “some of us have to get back to work,”
Lottie made to leave with her but Tina shook her head,
“Why don’t you stay?” Tina offered, knowing that she’d be back there to meet Bette in a short while anyway, she paused, eyeing the drooling labrador that was currently licking chocolate ice cream off Che’s face, “not that he’s not cute, but my clients don’t approve of saliva on their $500 jeans,”
Lottie nodded and sat back down, “Right,”
Tina left with Helena, both of them on their way back to work, Lara disappeared into the kitchen leaving Dana, Shane and Carmen still sitting with Lottie and Alice at the table,
“Lets go?” said Carmen dreamily, evidently still a little tired from the gig the night before, “I fancy a stroll through the park before a long afternoon nap?”
Shane grinned, gathering their things together hurriedly, “Sure …”
Dana groaned and rolled her eyes, missing the time when pregnancy hormones aside she might have been doing the same thing, “I’m gonna hit the gym,” she muttered, venting her frustrations another way,
Which left just two of them, Alice and Lottie, amidst the chaos of Banjo and Che who chased each other around the legs of the table leaving both a little unsure as to which was child and which was mutt,
“Are you okay?” Alice asked, “about Jo going away?”
Lottie nodded thoughtfully into the last dregs of her coffee, fully prepared to admit she was trying not to think about it, “Yeah … it’s fine,” she paused, “it’s just a month right,”
“A twelfth of a year …” Alice mumbled absentmindedly,
Lottie glared at her,
“Sorry,” Alice sat up, fiddling with her phone, “it won’t be so bad,” she offered, “if you think, half of that you could be in France with her then it’s really just a week either side,”
Lottie nodded grimly, “She said she loves me,” she whispered, after a pause,
Alice looked up grinning, “What …? When?”
“Yesterday,” Lottie chuckled, “after the play,”
Alice beamed, “And …?”
“And what?”
“What did ‘you’ say?”
Lottie dipped her eyes away, “Um …” she paused before looking up again, “nothing, I just smiled … I’ve never said it to anyone before,”
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Please don’t stop, I totally adore your story! I love that the characters have challenges but ultimately love one another and want whats best. I was crackin’ up at Angie and then Lottie catching Bette and Tina. :) LMAO! Great job!
It weird to a child to catch your parents.thanks goodness Bette didnt undress completely. Don’t stop this to much is happenion to leave us hanging
”very keen to get something posted before next week, when I’m up in the spotlight ” …Nice!… (btw, Where is the ‘spotlight’? – I’m clueless – never participated in it before.) Date?/Link?
Hey Sofa, great chapter, please do not stop I love this story and as long as write I will read no matter how long it takes u to post. Plus I spend two days reading this story from start just a few months ago and so don’t let my reading go waste by not continuing the story:)PPS
I have been a silent reader on this site for some time but, I really, really like this story. So glad to see you posting and hope that you will be able to post often. jinjur
Don’t stop this story, LOL at the bette and tina for getting caught by angie… :)
Hey all, thanks, I’m not stopping, no way … don’t get me wrong, it’s just after chronic writers block I always get super edgy/anxious before posting again … anyway … for Nanc, the link to the spotlight on the main discussions board is http://discussion.l-word.com/viewforum.php?f=73 I hope that works, it starts new each week on a Sunday :-D, I’ll reply to comments properly next post … and it won’t be weeks and weeks I promise! Sofa x
Sofa, I’m really glad your back with this story, I’v really missed it. I love reading about how the whole family interacts and can’t wait for Lotties’ party. Thank you. Md
What a pleasant surprise to find this chapter tonight! I still love this story Sofa and I’ll keep reading if you keep writing! B&T caught out by Angie…LMAO!
You know that I love this story. I can never get enough of it. I can picture Bette and Tina enjoying a little time to themselves and relaxing after the little excersie session. I can also see Angie’s reaction after catching her moms in the relaxation mode after the exercise session.
great to have u back Sofa. Looking forward to lots and lots of CONSTANT updates. lol with TONS AND TONS OF NC17’S!!!! B & T THAT IS!!!
I love the way you weave together an emotional maturity, psychological insight and beautiful love making. This is my favorite paragraph.”Bette cleared the plates from the table, leaving Tina to sit and think, the summer time was like a role reversal for them, with Tina the one working the most hours and Bette mostly off during the day, it gave them time to switch roles and remember that sitting so firmly in ideas of who they were based on jobs and money was the thing that almost killed them in the first place.”
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the b-day bash!
*runs by yelling ‘sofa is a hottttie!’ whoowhoo!*
Please don’t stop. I like your story. I always wait for another chapter.
Yeah, don’t stop. I LOVE your story. It’s really great and I would love to hear how it’s going on with the girls…
oh plz u have to post the NEXT chapter soon!!!! That was seriously funny that Bette and Tina were caught at it!!!
hey baby, i told you liked this chapter, and you didn’t dissapoint with the rest:) hahahaha, tina and bette got caught…thats funny. i hope it never happens to me…well anyway, i’m just saying, locks are good! and thankx for being realistic about the one issue we’re all always avoiding–these people are parents and i know that i often write their kids ‘away at a babysitter’ which makes me laugh that no one ever calls me a fool for doing it. anyhoo, great chapter, i’m thrilled you posted, and yeah…hehe…you’re the cutest. xo
HAHAHA! Bette & Tina caught red-handed by their own daughter. Funny and embarrassing as hell! Welcome back, sofa!!! I’m glad you’ve come around that dreaded Writer’s Block. And I don’t see myself getting tired of reading updates on this story anytime soon. I hope you’ll get on a roll again but if not, don’t worry and pressure yourself. We’re patient, we’ll just wait for your next post whenever it comes. Thank you!!! ;>
So happy to see you back, sofa! Very glad to hear you’re not thinking of stopping ’cause this just gets better every chapter. Love Angie’s gross reaction and look forward to Lottie’s birthday bash. Enjoy the spotlight and I may drop by for that hot chocolate…mmmm.
That was great, love B&T so hot!