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Summer Vacation. Chapter 6
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“I’m in Los Angeles Daddy,” Lottie continued, “please don’t be mad … I had to come find her” she sniffed, forcing back tears, remembering how emotions would win her no favours, “it’s my right Daddy … my right to find her.”
“Sometimes I forget” Bette continued, “that he was an old man even when I was a child” she said, taking Tina on the trip with her down memory lane. “we gave him some grief, Kit and I … Kit more so than me,” she laughed, “still he stuck with us always … for better or worse” she paused, “what about when I lose him T? … I’m scared … he’s the only parent I’ve ever had” she said quietly, emotion forming in her throat … “T … baby don’t cry … baby please don’t cry” she sobbed, tears rolling down her cheeks.
Lottie stared down at the well loved photograph in her left hand, struggling hard to reign in her emotions, “I love you Dad … really I do, but it doesn’t work anymore” she stopped as tears fell from her eyes. “no I won’t tell you … you can’t stop me anymore …”
she watched as the sun finally dipped out of sight, “goodbye Dad”
Chapter Six.
Lottie awoke to the sound of her cell phone ringing, she was still in her clothes from the night before lying exactly where she’d fallen asleep crying on top of the bedcovers. She groaned and turned over to reach for the phone sending a box of photographs and old papers flying onto the floor.
“Shit!” she said … “Hello?”
“What was that?” asked Tina
Lottie rubbed her head sleepily, pulling the phone away from her ear to catch a look at the time, “Sorry, I dropped a box of papers on the floor.”
“It’s 9.30,” said Tina, slightly concerned, “Is everything okay?”
“Yeah fine,” said Lottie, “I’m sorry, I overslept.”
Tina put down the phone with a frown, she may be intriguing, confusing even, but if there’s one thing Lottie most definitely wasn’t it was late. She turned slowly in her chair,
Ruby knocked on the door, poking her head through, “I have that folder you wanted Tina” she said.
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(39 votes, average: 3.85 out of 5)
I am really enjoying this story. I am anxioulsly awaiting the big reveal!
I made my comment on your last chapter and then I found out you posted another one. But I am still no closer to getting who Lottie is. Please don’t keep us haning too much longer on this. You are really good at giving us just enough info but not enough to figure it out. Thanks
Okay, you keep leaving us on the edge of the cliff. You are good not even a wee bit of infornmation on Lottie. PPS thanks
Charlotte Elizabeth…well someone must’ve been thinking of Bette in some capacity if not Bette herself. PPS!
Oh and the phone conversation about B&T’s first anniversary was HOT!
okay you teaser!tibette anniversary was STEAMIN!HOT! please post soon,and we need more info about lottie.i bet tina figures it out before too long.
i could just about strangle you now (lol) becuz i am desperate to find out who lotte’s mom is; i suspect that its Maxine and Mel’ granddaughter to their son/daughter; maybe Maxine was pregnant when she left Melvin and had a son/daughter and Lottie is this person’s child or Maxine had another relationship with an afro-american and this is their daughter/grandaughter but I am so hanging out to know so u betta post soon!!!
i think lottie is bette’s half sister…and i really hope bette will be home soon because they both are miserable without each other
this is so interesting story i am diying to know what is all the secret! post as soon as you can please
I still think that Lottie is Bette’s half sister but she could be Bette’s child. I do not think that Bette would have kept that quiet but you never know. Lottie is very mysterous. Can’t wait for Bette to get back and finish the job that she started with Tina.
So Lottie is Bettes daughter!
I’m with the others about that phone conversation, but then again, when it comes to B&T loving, I’m a bit biased… Still, that was both tender and so hot, and in that style of yours that I’m really starting to cherish! ;) Great story… Please have Bette come home soon!
I am so waiting for the B/T reunion. Will the real Lottie identify herself soon? Love the cliff hangers.
Was that really 3 pages? That went by quick…so Tina is becoming a regular Angela Lansbury huh? Please post soon so we can find out these mysteries…they are killing me!
your still killing me… i can’t wait to see how you tie them all together… and how long before bette comes home… and will tina be able to still walk… lol… please continue
I hope you tell us soon who Lottie is. Because this is starting to get to me. I just hope she is Bette and Kit’s half sister. Thanks PPS