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Superhero and some super senses (Valentine’s Day Special)
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She didn’t even notice her breath had become so ragged, her heart jumping loudly in her ears. She knew exactly what the card meant, and the thirst, the yearning returned. Reading it again, she found a little arrow pointing to her right, she turned the card around and there was nothing there, so she turned her head in attempt to find what the arrow was pointing to. On the kitchen wall, some heart-shaped stickers stood out from the white background. A post-it was there as well, it read: good, you found the first sense. She walked closer, and followed the stickers to the dining room, they clustered around a cabinet. She gingerly opened it, and found another gift.
This time it was a bottle of perfume, Armani Acgua di Gio. It was one of the classic brand that Bette loved. She put the bottle under her nose and inhaled deeply. The fragrance rushed into her nose, but it wasn’t too sharp or too strong. It just smelled like her lover.
Then she suddenly remembered to find another card. She searched the cabinet, and retrieved the piece of fragranced paper.
The smell: a string that connects the present to the memory. It surrounds you, like an invisible, but strong embrace. You imagine yourself leaning into it, and muffling your cries of ecstasy with it.
A little twitch in her core, Tina shook, found herself provoked by the scent all too familiar, associating it with the secretive pleasure she so enjoyed, and immersed in the memory.
This time, the arrow pointed down. She discovered a trail of little hearts on the floor, leading her to their study. On the door handle, a post-it was to greet her: congratulations, you’ve found two senses.
Carefully, she opened the door, and peeped inside. A gift was already lying on the desk. It was an old CD, with no title. She put it in the CD player and immediately recognized the tune. Bon Jovi’s Bed of Roses came up. It was the record Bette played when they made love for the very first time when they were teenagers. Tina didn’t know Bette still had it, or maybe it wasn’t the same one. But it certainly brought up memories of their youthful happiness.
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Happy Valentine’s Day ladies! As I promised some of you, here’s the one-off special. And supposedly it’s a little follow-up to Round n Round We Go, so if you can’t recall some particular events that I referred to in these one-offs, you’re welcome to go back and check out the old story… nah, I’m just trying to get some more views on it lol
I’m really sorry it’s been a while since I updated on Criminal, but college is really hectic up to this point, I’m taking max credits and working max hours, so probably won’t be able to write till spring break.
And SO to my twitter family and readers. I love you all.
Oh and TN1, I may never get to the point of publishing a book but I CAN dedicate a chapter to you. So there you go! Happy Valentine’s Day, lover ;)
Peace :)
Happy Valentine’s and thanks for this :)
Would love more from you but understand College taking precedence :)
Look forward to Spring Break :D
Peace :)
Did you mean to say this is a followup to Round and Round? Michelangelo is the son in that story.
I love how sentual you write. I heart so wrapped up in the descriptions. You are amazing.
Study hard.
Oh shoot yeah I meant that! Geesh I clearly wasn’t in the right mind lol
Thanks!
Very cool, thanks
Very nice story robyntibetter. The part with the painting brought tears to my eyes, very catchy. Thanks for this story and succes with college and such.
And………happy Valentine!
Wow! That was very beautiful.
Thank you
Good luck with school.
Happy Valentine’s. Day!
You’re a really special gift you have given us.
every word in this story has penetrated the depths of my soul.
love was so strongly felt between two, it was almost tangible.
thank you very much for this wonderful story. Happy Valentine’s Day, Robyn!
Roby know after reading I was without words
to set this of special Round in Redondo.
It is simply inspiring, is a perfect story
for this special day, “Valentine’s Day.” .
I’m re reading the second time because she is beautiful!
I know how the college is taking his time, not
should be easy, but as far as possible, continuity with
I find this story a wonderful masterpiece.
Happy Valentine’s Day.
All Stars *****
Happy Valentino day.
This was a very strong and poweful story. You are a very gifted writer.
I wish you good luck with your college.
Wow! What a Beautiful story! Thanks and post when you can! Be Blessed!
see this wow I can’t read your chapters right away because afterwards I spend the rest of the day crying. Robyn, darling, you write so beautifully and passionate. This was amazing and so sweet. What a way to surprise your wife huh? Good job my friend!
Robyn,
This story made my Valentine’s day a special one :) Thanks RT! You never really fail in making us fall in love over and over again with the B&T from your Round n Round We Go Book :)
May God bless you on your studies and work..
Aja!
XOXO
Scribe
Wow, more like SUPERHOT! Great writing, well done!
Thanks Robyn ! Thanks for another great chapter. Love your story…
Great story! And very nice to hear Criminal won’t be forgotten, that really is an amazing story. Good luck with your studies!
Wonderful writing and sweet update. I’m getting back to reading after a long hiatus an so glad it was this gem that I started with. Thank you, Robyn!!