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Superhero and some super senses (Valentine’s Day Special)
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For sure, there was a third card. The sound: a soft whisper with three little words in your ear. It comes just as gentle as a breeze, but its equally gentle strokes ripple the water. It doesn’t need much force, actually, because I know what it does to you.
“Awww, Bette.” Tina held the card to her chest. “I love you too.”
At this point, she was excited to find the direction to her next gift. But it wasn’t on the card. The arrow was on the CD player, pointing to the bookshelves.
Soon she spotted the novel object on the shelf, with the shape of a photo frame, still wrapped in present paper. Without hesitation, she unwrapped the gift and the content absolutely dazzled her.
It was a portrait of watercolor, and was lent a sense of realism, something Bette rarely did but was of course capable of. In the painting, two woman were intertwined together, one with a mop of brown curls and the other one had blindingly blonde hair. All the critical parts were covered by light silk, yet it felt a lot more sensual and provocative that way. The brunette woman’s back was revealed to the beholder. Each and every line of muscle was explored in detail, and the veins popped up because of the force were described in such a sexy way that Tina bit her lower lips to stop herself from whimpering. She could see the strength, the passion, the seeking, the giving, the cherish, the care, the lust, the love, everything in the painting. She tried to imagine the brunette painting this. Was it weird for her to paint herself? What would she be thinking? When did she do all this? There was no way Bette would reveal her secrets. The woman would always give her an incredulous smile and let the subject slip. So to find the answers, Tina turned the frame around, having no problem finding the signature and the date on the back of the painting. It momentarily took her aback.
It was during the time of their split up, after Bette hurt her on that particular Thanksgiving night, and flew to somewhere else. She felt a pinch in her heart, and tears rushed to her eyes. It must have killed Bette to paint something like this. Now that she knew, she looked at it again, and could literally see the regret and pain in every stroke of the brush. It also moved her so deeply, because even then, Bette loved her, she always had.
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Happy Valentine’s Day ladies! As I promised some of you, here’s the one-off special. And supposedly it’s a little follow-up to Round n Round We Go, so if you can’t recall some particular events that I referred to in these one-offs, you’re welcome to go back and check out the old story… nah, I’m just trying to get some more views on it lol
I’m really sorry it’s been a while since I updated on Criminal, but college is really hectic up to this point, I’m taking max credits and working max hours, so probably won’t be able to write till spring break.
And SO to my twitter family and readers. I love you all.
Oh and TN1, I may never get to the point of publishing a book but I CAN dedicate a chapter to you. So there you go! Happy Valentine’s Day, lover ;)
Peace :)
Happy Valentine’s and thanks for this :)
Would love more from you but understand College taking precedence :)
Look forward to Spring Break :D
Peace :)
Did you mean to say this is a followup to Round and Round? Michelangelo is the son in that story.
I love how sentual you write. I heart so wrapped up in the descriptions. You are amazing.
Study hard.
Oh shoot yeah I meant that! Geesh I clearly wasn’t in the right mind lol
Thanks!
Very cool, thanks
Very nice story robyntibetter. The part with the painting brought tears to my eyes, very catchy. Thanks for this story and succes with college and such.
And………happy Valentine!
Wow! That was very beautiful.
Thank you
Good luck with school.
Happy Valentine’s. Day!
You’re a really special gift you have given us.
every word in this story has penetrated the depths of my soul.
love was so strongly felt between two, it was almost tangible.
thank you very much for this wonderful story. Happy Valentine’s Day, Robyn!
Roby know after reading I was without words
to set this of special Round in Redondo.
It is simply inspiring, is a perfect story
for this special day, “Valentine’s Day.” .
I’m re reading the second time because she is beautiful!
I know how the college is taking his time, not
should be easy, but as far as possible, continuity with
I find this story a wonderful masterpiece.
Happy Valentine’s Day.
All Stars *****
Happy Valentino day.
This was a very strong and poweful story. You are a very gifted writer.
I wish you good luck with your college.
Wow! What a Beautiful story! Thanks and post when you can! Be Blessed!
see this wow I can’t read your chapters right away because afterwards I spend the rest of the day crying. Robyn, darling, you write so beautifully and passionate. This was amazing and so sweet. What a way to surprise your wife huh? Good job my friend!
Robyn,
This story made my Valentine’s day a special one :) Thanks RT! You never really fail in making us fall in love over and over again with the B&T from your Round n Round We Go Book :)
May God bless you on your studies and work..
Aja!
XOXO
Scribe
Wow, more like SUPERHOT! Great writing, well done!
Thanks Robyn ! Thanks for another great chapter. Love your story…
Great story! And very nice to hear Criminal won’t be forgotten, that really is an amazing story. Good luck with your studies!
Wonderful writing and sweet update. I’m getting back to reading after a long hiatus an so glad it was this gem that I started with. Thank you, Robyn!!