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Sweet Surrender 1
“Jesus you two stop it already!” Shane sneered at the two best friends. The two had been arguing ever since she sat on the table, about half an hour ago. Actually they had been arguing for months now, be it small matter or big matter. It was like they argued just about anything. She could feel the tension whenever the two were in the same room and could cut it with a knife. It was that terrible.
“She started it first. I don’t want to argue with her but she just got to my nerve sometimes no almost every time!” Alice yelled with her eyes glaring at Dana.
“Smooth Al, so now it was me who started this argument.” Dana put her hands up. “Great I am out of here.” She stood up ready to make the move.
“Wow what a surprise.” Alice said sarcastically.
Dana stopped her motion and turned around, her eyes glaring at her best friend. Alice smirked at her and crossed her arms. Shane looked at the two and rolled her eyes. Interpreting Alice’s statement as a challenge, she marched back to the table and seated on the chair opposite Alice which she left few seconds ago. She crossed her arms mimicking Alice.
“Ok, let’s just put the cards on the table. What is your problem Al?” Dana blurted out. Alice rolled her eyes. Shane diverted her gaze between them, ready to run for her life anytime if the fight got worst.
“I should be the one who ask that question. It was you who made the smart ass remark about me and my car half an hour ago remember?”
“I don’t see anything wrong with my remark.” Dana said sarcastically.
“What? By saying that I look just like my car? Small, slow and nothing but piece of chunk? Oh that’s so gracious of you Dane.”
“Why thank you.” Dana replied, not once tore her gaze away from Alice.
“Oh me too. I know I am right when I said your car just look like you. Nothing but a huge, mind you A HUGE piece of clumsy and stupid chunk.” Alice scrunched her nose. Dana uncrossed her arms and looked at the blonde as if she wanted to swallow her right away.
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(25 votes, average: 3.40 out of 5)
I can’t believe you left it there. This is a great story. You gotta love that blazing chemistry those two have. post soon
What? Don’t stop.. what is this stopping?! haha no I love this story I can’t wait for the next chapter
What a great idea for a story! And a great start so far. Love the gang at The Planet. And some good scheming to get the girls to the appointment and keep them there. Nice to see Dan Foxworthy finally being of some use – pointing out that can describe each other better than their exes. Can’t wait for more of this story and Dana’s response. Thanks, uhhuh!!
What, you stopped there. That’s cold. You need to continue. PPS
why do dana and alice exhibit 3rd grader romantic tendencies and it feels so sexy? seems contradictory but that chemistry is decidedly NOT grade school.
oh why couldn’t IC see it thru for these girls…they are just too cute sometimes.
You left us hanging :( this is super great. Love the Intense attraction between the girls hopefully Dan will get though to them and they’ll admitall. Thanks uhhuh PPS