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Sweet Surrender 1
Oh my god, Shane muttered. She looked at the entrance to look for help.
“Tina!” Shane shouted as soon as Tina walked in. She ducked her head when she realized she had the attention of all the customers in the Planet. Tina wished the floor would open up and swallowed her in. She tried to force a smile to the audience, thanks to Shane and walked towards the table. She saw Dana and Alice looked at each other angrily with Shane sandwich between them. Shane looked at her with her best adorable puppy eyes, just like the one she gave to the group while she was still under the evil hands of Jenny Schechter that control freak she dumped few weeks ago.
“Gosh, what is going on with you guys, you two look like want to take part in the oil wresting next week so that you could tear each other into pieces.” Tina said as she took the seat opposite to Shane.
“Why would I Tina? I am a civilised person and would not solve an argument with force. But I don’t know about the other person. She is an athlete remember? And of course athlete likes to use force!”
Alice made a disgusted look as she looked Dana up and down and shook her head. Oh god Alice what are you doing? She thought. Of course Dana would use force although she wasn’t that muscular compared to some athletes but wait till you see her smashes some tennis balls oh those veins popping out and oh not that I mind if she uses force on me ok stop it this is ridiculous, she berated herself.
“Yeah, we athlete would fight face to face bare handed not like those journalists who backstab people at night with their hidden weapon which is a pen oh that’s conventional should I say fingers now?” Dana head hung high as she saw Alice’s face boiling. Got cha! She announced to herself proudly. But when she looked at Alice’s smooth and beautiful fingers yummy I wonder how it feels when she touches me no no don’t even think about it Dana she is your best friend!
Tina and Shane eyes became wide when they saw Alice’s knuckles became white as Dana made some really irritating face at her. Both looked at each other and then to the entrance.
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(25 votes, average: 3.40 out of 5)
I can’t believe you left it there. This is a great story. You gotta love that blazing chemistry those two have. post soon
What? Don’t stop.. what is this stopping?! haha no I love this story I can’t wait for the next chapter
What a great idea for a story! And a great start so far. Love the gang at The Planet. And some good scheming to get the girls to the appointment and keep them there. Nice to see Dan Foxworthy finally being of some use – pointing out that can describe each other better than their exes. Can’t wait for more of this story and Dana’s response. Thanks, uhhuh!!
What, you stopped there. That’s cold. You need to continue. PPS
why do dana and alice exhibit 3rd grader romantic tendencies and it feels so sexy? seems contradictory but that chemistry is decidedly NOT grade school.
oh why couldn’t IC see it thru for these girls…they are just too cute sometimes.
You left us hanging :( this is super great. Love the Intense attraction between the girls hopefully Dan will get though to them and they’ll admitall. Thanks uhhuh PPS