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Sweet Surrender 1
“Bette!” Two of them screamed. Again they got the attention from all the customers there. Bette looked at them with her notable what the hell face. She walk towards them and pulled a chair to sit beside her wife.
“What’s going on?” Bette whispered to Tina.
“Not good.” Tina answered. Bette then looked at Shane. Shane looked at her as if she wanted to cry. Bette blinked her eyes twice to process the whole thing. Wow even yoda has no idea, shit I should have stayed in the bakery just now and teach the owner how to bake a cup cake, she thought.
Then they heard something, like a music..hmm, yeah it was a ringtone, and even better it was Alice’s ringtone! The three innocent women sighed in contentment.
“Hello? Oh shit ok I’ll arrive in ten minutes time.”Alice shut her cell and looked at her friends except Dana.
“Well ladies I am thru with this conversation with someone UNIMPORTANT therefore I’m gonna head out. Bye.” Before they could say anything Alice was already out of the premise. They diverted their gaze to Dana as Dana was answering her phone.
“Hey oh ok I am coming now.” Dana put her cell into her bag and stood up.
“Ok guys I am done with the silly talk and I am out of here. Bye.”The three opened their mouths as Dana made it to the door in record time. Shane made a mental note to ask Dana later how she managed to get out that fast she wanted to learn maybe next time when Dana and Alice fought she could walk out without them noticing.
After seated in silence for about few minutes time, they finally able to say what were in their minds.
“They are just too stubborn.” Shane declared. The other two looked at each other and nodded their heads.
“We need to do something.” Tina announced proudly.
Then Bette felt uneasy as the two women looked at her intently.
“What me again?” The other two nodded and looked at her with their best adorable puppies eyes.
“Arrghhh, not fair.” She muttered. But as the head of the clan she must at least came out with one idea to save face.
“Hmmm…aaaa…” Shit I can’t think when they look at me that way; she muttered and shifted her chair so that she was facing the bathroom now. Much better, she thought. Shane looked at Tina and mouthed ‘What? Bathroom?’ Tina shrugged her shoulders and continued to sip on her cup of coffee.
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(25 votes, average: 3.40 out of 5)
I can’t believe you left it there. This is a great story. You gotta love that blazing chemistry those two have. post soon
What? Don’t stop.. what is this stopping?! haha no I love this story I can’t wait for the next chapter
What a great idea for a story! And a great start so far. Love the gang at The Planet. And some good scheming to get the girls to the appointment and keep them there. Nice to see Dan Foxworthy finally being of some use – pointing out that can describe each other better than their exes. Can’t wait for more of this story and Dana’s response. Thanks, uhhuh!!
What, you stopped there. That’s cold. You need to continue. PPS
why do dana and alice exhibit 3rd grader romantic tendencies and it feels so sexy? seems contradictory but that chemistry is decidedly NOT grade school.
oh why couldn’t IC see it thru for these girls…they are just too cute sometimes.
You left us hanging :( this is super great. Love the Intense attraction between the girls hopefully Dan will get though to them and they’ll admitall. Thanks uhhuh PPS