Fan Fiction
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Sweet Surrender 1
“That’s very detail.” Dan said.
“Thanks.” Dana scratched her head and smiled shyly.
“Ok this question is open. How did you guys met?”
Alice answered first.
“Well I was a reporter of this sport magazine that time and Dana was an up and coming tennis player. So my editor gave me this assignment and one week later we were sitting face to face.” Alice smiled at the memory.
“Yeah I could still remember that day.” Dana said and looked at Alice affectionately.
“I was already nervous like hell as that was my first interview and then out of all the things you had to ask me whether I was gay. Of course I denied I was still in the closet sponsors weren’t clamouring to big old lezzy tennis player. I wonder how you found out as that was the first time you met me and we had talked like half and hour.”
Alice chuckled.
“You were so gay Dana when you checked me out it was so obvious.”
“Yeah I know.” Dana said. “I thought you have great tits.” She looked down and smiled shyly.
Alice was surprised. “You noticed my tits?”
“Yeah.”
Alice heart melted at the instant. She pursed her lips as she fidgeted her hands.
“I thought you were a hottie.” She said.
It was Dana’s turn to be surprised.
“Really?”
“Uh huh.” Alice nodded. “And I was glad you didn’t send your lawyer to my door like you said you would before you stormed out from the place.”
“I was scared Al so I just blurted out what I thought would stop you from printing it out.” Dana answered. “You know I would never do anything that will hurt you.” She continued.
“Me too.” Alice said.
Both looked at each other and looked away, smiles planted of each of their faces.
Dan looked at the two and smiled himself. He cleared his throat to get their attention.
“Tell me what you think of Alice.” He continued.
Dana smiled. “She’s beautiful, smart, loyal, witty and her smiles could light up the whole room.”
“Alice? What do you think about Dana?”
“She’s beautiful, strong, honest, a bit shy at times and her goofy grin could make your day even brighter when it’s already bright.”
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(25 votes, average: 3.40 out of 5)
I can’t believe you left it there. This is a great story. You gotta love that blazing chemistry those two have. post soon
What? Don’t stop.. what is this stopping?! haha no I love this story I can’t wait for the next chapter
What a great idea for a story! And a great start so far. Love the gang at The Planet. And some good scheming to get the girls to the appointment and keep them there. Nice to see Dan Foxworthy finally being of some use – pointing out that can describe each other better than their exes. Can’t wait for more of this story and Dana’s response. Thanks, uhhuh!!
What, you stopped there. That’s cold. You need to continue. PPS
why do dana and alice exhibit 3rd grader romantic tendencies and it feels so sexy? seems contradictory but that chemistry is decidedly NOT grade school.
oh why couldn’t IC see it thru for these girls…they are just too cute sometimes.
You left us hanging :( this is super great. Love the Intense attraction between the girls hopefully Dan will get though to them and they’ll admitall. Thanks uhhuh PPS