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Sweet Surrender 1
Dana looked at Alice and flashed the blonde with her goofy grin. The blonde bit her bottom lip and looked at the brunette affectionately. Both were in a staring contest before Dan cleared his throat. Both blushed and looked down to their laps when Dan snapped them out of their oh not so friendly thoughts on each other.
“Ok. Dana are you dating now?”
Both were taken aback with the question.
“No.”
“So who was the last woman you dated?”
“Lara.”
He glanced at Alice. The blonde shifted uncomfortably in her seat.
“Tell me what you think of her.”
The room was filled with silence for minutes before Dana finally knew the answer.
“Ermm, I think she’s nice.” Dana answered, but to Dan it was more like a question as if Dana was unsure herself. He noticed that the blonde wrinkled her face.
“Nice? That’s it?” He tilted his head.
“Yeah that’s it.” Dana smiled nervously. Shit is that all I could think of? He must think I am a bad lover, she berated herself.
Dan turned to Alice.
“So how about you?”
“Well my last date was Gabby.”
Dana rolled her eyes when she heard the name which didn’t go unnoticed by the therapist.
“What do you think of her?”
“She’s aaaaa.” Alice was deep in thought. Then out of nowhere she managed to say “I think she’s great.” Dana switched her gaze suddenly found the curtain to be interesting.
“Great as in?” Dan raised his eyebrows.
“Great as in you know great.” Alice berated herself for the shortcoming. I am a journalist for god’s sake, that’s all I can think of? She muttered.
“I see. I wonder why you two could answer right away when I asked about your best friend here but it took you guys few minutes for your exes and yet you two just came out with one word?”
Shit busted. Come out with something to deny it Fairbanks! Dana thought deeply.
Ok Pieszecki think of something hurry! Alice unconsciously bit her fingernail.
“I don’t see anything wrong with that.” Dana protested.
“Yeah we are best friends.” Alice jumped in.
“Best friend huh? Bette and Tina told me you guys have been arguing much lately. Is that true?”
Both just looked down to their laps, waiting for the other to answer. Seeing no reaction he continued to dig.
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(25 votes, average: 3.40 out of 5)
I can’t believe you left it there. This is a great story. You gotta love that blazing chemistry those two have. post soon
What? Don’t stop.. what is this stopping?! haha no I love this story I can’t wait for the next chapter
What a great idea for a story! And a great start so far. Love the gang at The Planet. And some good scheming to get the girls to the appointment and keep them there. Nice to see Dan Foxworthy finally being of some use – pointing out that can describe each other better than their exes. Can’t wait for more of this story and Dana’s response. Thanks, uhhuh!!
What, you stopped there. That’s cold. You need to continue. PPS
why do dana and alice exhibit 3rd grader romantic tendencies and it feels so sexy? seems contradictory but that chemistry is decidedly NOT grade school.
oh why couldn’t IC see it thru for these girls…they are just too cute sometimes.
You left us hanging :( this is super great. Love the Intense attraction between the girls hopefully Dan will get though to them and they’ll admitall. Thanks uhhuh PPS