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Sweet Surrender 2/2
“Hi Al.”
Alice was stunned.
“Hi Dane.” Alice could barely whisper her words.
Dana smiled at her and handed her the flowers. “Here Al I hope you like this.”
Alice looked at the flowers and reached out her hand shakily to accept the flower. Calm down Alice it’s just lilies, well maybe very beautiful lilies but it’s not a big deal, right?
“Thanks Dane.”
Dana smiled and she took the seat beside her blonde. Alice had to breathe she was basically out of breath. Then all of the sudden she felt Dana’s lips pressed against her own. Alice didn’t know how long they had kiss but she swore it was more than an hour before Dana pulled away.
“Babe as much as I want to hang out with you now I have to go for training. I’ll pick you up at seven for dinner. Wear something cute. See you.” Alice was still registering what Dana said when the brunette leaned in for another kiss.
Dana stood up and looked at her friends.
“Bye guys see you all later.” She walked out from the Planet confidently.
When Dana got to her car she had to lean against it for support as her knees had turned into jello. She had to catch up with breathing she had forgot how long she held her breath. Probably right after she saw the blonde? No idea. She thanked to god that she didn’t pass out during the special moment she had practised for hours to make sure that she would not stumble walking in and out the Planet for that flower thing. She wiped out a virtual sweat away from her forehead. Wow, I did it at last, she smiled her goofy grin and get into her car looking forward for the date tonight.
Alice was still in shock. How the hell her goofy lover suddenly became so confident and straight forward in one day? She brought her gaze to her friends about to ask them what happened but she refrained when she saw their mouths were still opened agape, luckily there was no fly around.
“Guys?” Alice raised her voice a bit to wake her friends up.
They shook their heads furiously trying to clear the cobwebs.
“Hmm Alice are you and Dana together now?” Tina leaned onto the table, excited.
“Well after what you saw just now isn’t it obvious?” Alice said actually she was convincing herself too.
“Wow I am happy for you Alice. And what did you do to Dana? She’s like another person now.” Bette asked.
“Yes did you whip her last night?” Shane wiggled her eyebrows trying to suppress her laughter.
Alice blushed to the roots of her hairs. “Ok guys enough I also have no idea. I have to go now I got meeting to attend. Bye.”
With that Alice walked out from the Planet with her lilies looking forward for the date tonight.
Shane left right after Alice. Bette and Tina looked at each other and smiled.
“It works.” Bette said.
“Yes it does.” Tina answered.
They looked at each other again. Both smiled evilly and grabbed their cell phones at the same time.
Five days later at Dan Foxworthy’s office
“Bette Tina I am going to kill both of you!” Shane muttered under her breath as she looked at the therapist who was wiggling his eyebrows at her. And the person mumbling beside her was Carmen.
The end.
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(36 votes, average: 3.50 out of 5)
that was great I loved every bit of it thanks but please post a new story soon
Great story uhhuh. Glad they came to their senses and admitted their feelings. Loved the ending also.
Excellent ending, uhhuh!! So Danish with the avoiding each other and miscommunication. Love Dana going after Alice and taking the initiative – and she used a little trickery, too. Also love Aggressive!Dana and her bringing flowers for Alice. The gals in WeHo are certainly keeping Dan Foxworthy in business – the ending was too funny. Thanks so much for the great story!!
hahaha this is so funny! loved it! thanks
so funny! I love it. Thank you!
hahahahhaha .. it’s soooooo funny. I love all of your danish stories, uhhuh. They’re so cute and funny together. Thank you for excellent job.