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    Technology – The End or is it? Part 2 of 2

    Henry: that’s very good, I wasn’t expecting you to get up and walk so soon seeing that you been off your feet for a long time. If you would just take a seat back down on the bed there I will go get you a wheelchair seeing that my office is a good walked from here and I don’t want you to overdo it.

    Henry helped Elizabeth back down and walked out to get a wheelchair. Elizabeth looked around the room and saw only glass, on one side of the glass she saw three chairs and a lot of machines, wires, and different kinds of technology gadgets along with a microphone, which she figure was used to communicate to their patients on the inside of the lab bedroom. Inside the room she saw monitors and what looked to be a lot of medical cabinets, the room was no different than a hospital room except there wasn’t one wall near, the whole room was surrounded by glass only, and it was very cold that she couldn’t help but to start shivering.

    Henry walked back and saw Elizabeth holding herself and went around to one of the cabinets and pulled out a thin cotton blanket.

    Henry: Here you go, I’m sorry about the coldness, as you know we need it like this to kill the germs.

    Elizabeth: Thank you doctor and I will be fine.

    Henry: if you don’t mind I’m just going to help you in this chair and wheel you to my office were we can talk.

    Henry helped her get settled then he slowly start pushing her to his office which was a pretty good walk around the corner, she was thankful for Henry’s concerns he seem to be a very polite and gentle doctor.

    Meanwhile…

    Josh knocked on Nurse Christina door and waited patiently for permission to enter.

    Christina: come in

    Josh peeked his head through the door first not sure on whether to enter right away.

    Josh: Hey

    Christina: Hey what’s up, how’s the patient?

    That was the first thing that came to Christina’s mind, she couldn’t help but to think about the beautiful woman, she’s been waiting for what seem like forever to meet Elizabeth Porter. When she was hire on duty Elizabeth was already into study, Christina was only taking over for Nurse Brenda who had to pull out from the study due to a family crisis so Doctor Henry called the next best nurse he could think of which was Christina Kennard, when he first laid eyes on her again he remember just how beautiful she was back from when they use to date years ago, but now friendship and colleagues only describe their relationship these days but Josh had something else in mind. Josh wanted to be with the nurse he fancied her the moment she walked through the building.

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    1. Wow! It was very interesting. and very exciting.
      (but Henry and Josh?) oh, girl! :D (I had to do so much banter) ;)
      I really loved every minute of this story.
      the end just blew me away.
      Thank you for sharing this with us. and I really hope that you come back with another great story soon!

    2. Two thumbs up for your wondeful story. Dreams interpretation huh ! Very creative. I am sure you are going to write more.. I promise to be your loyal reader. Continue to enjoy what you do best… Cheers !

      • hahahhaha first let me say how thankful I am that you actually read it……now im gonna express my sadness that you haven’t updated Lover in the Dark…AAAARRRGGGGHHHHH LOL Now do you see how I feel lol

        please Phacey quit keeping us waiting you exactly what im talking about.

        Always a pleasure my friend and thanks for the compliment ;-)

    3. Freud was one of the researchers on dreams (logical at that time did not have the technology we have today, continuing) and explained a very important concept: when you sleep your subconscious mind awakens. And when we wake up, wake up the conscious mind and the subconscious falls asleep. Freud also found that during the dream all our frustrated desires, emotions, thoughts that were not released during the day are released by our unconscious mind. So are our dreams, according to Freud.
      You are very talented and creative.
      This story goes to my favorites list.
      Loved this order.
      Well that could have more !!!
      10 stars !!

    4. Just finished up this story and I have to tell you I did not foresee the twist here at the last. What a great idea, and you carried it off so wonderfully!

      I laughed through much of the chapters and loved your author-asides…those were hilarious and I could even see your face as you made them and hear your voice. No, TN1, I don’t have you under surveillance :), but your “voice” and personality along with your Twitter pict really come through your writing.

      On a serious note, I think Kit had it partially right a few chapters ago when she said technology would destroy us. In a way it might, but not because the technology itself isn’t good or useful, but that our own humanity often gets left behind because of it. I think about how often people are able to be cruel and judgmental via the internet because they can remain anonymous.

      Anyway, I liked this story a bunch and am glad you are writing so prolifically. Dang, I wish I could write as fast and as much as you! I’ll check out your other offerings, but first I need to go back and catch up on some other writers.

      • Sorry for responding late but I had to go to the hospital because when I seen that you commented on my story, I fainted!lol…gosh I admire you sooo much and to have you read anything of mines or following me on twitter is just the greatest thing in the world to me, like no kidding…thanks for taking the time out to read I know you are a busy person and I appreciate it from the bottom of my heart!

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