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Technology – The End or is it? Part 2 of 2
Henry saw the pale look on Elizabeth face and he knew she was contemplating on what was real and what wasn’t.
Henry: Are you ok?
Elizabeth: I’m not sure.
Henry: here let me get you some water.
Henry walked over to the water dispenser he had set up in the corner to give her some water.
Henry: I know your mouth must be very dry, here drink this.
He handed her the drink and walked back over to his seat.
Elizabeth then thought about something personal but didn’t know how to bring the subject up.
Elizabeth: Um doctor…well I was wondering…you know me being sleep in all for so long…well I had to have baths and things…you know as a woman…
Henry cut Elizabeth off raising his hands up, not really comfortable with this topic but wanted Elizabeth to know she was very take care of in that department.
Henry: Ms. Porter, nurse Christina took care of all those details, trust me she’s use to things like that on a daily basis so I’m sure you were properly handle and very well taken care of. We have all the tools here needed as a hospital would have to take care of patients who have to kept.
Elizabeth couldn’t help but blushed at the thought of Christina taking care of her…but wait she have seen me naked, shit how can I look at her in the eyes again now…Bette thought quietly to herself. Henry saw Elizabeth was in thought and decided to change subjects quickly.
Henry: Well as I was saying you volunteer for this study, I have the waiver for you to look at and make sure that it is your signature.
Henry handed her the waiver she signed and Elizabeth recognize that it was her signature but what made her sign up for this. Then it all started coming back to her, she remember only a few days before coming here her father Melvin Porter had just died from cancer, then she saw the posting Seeking Volunteer For New Study on Dreams on a billboard at the University of California where she was doing one of her famous lectures on Art History. Elizabeth didn’t really want to do the lecture, she had to prepare for her father’s memorial but then again she needed any kinds of distraction to get of mind off things. The students and staff all seem to be memorized by her knowledge on Art and the way she spoke with such passion. After the lectures while exiting the school she saw the brochure again and not only did she pick up one but she decided to contact the number listed. She was drowning and pain and guilt over losing her father, he was a very tough but brilliant man and even though he never acknowledge her sexuality she respected him, after all Melvin gave her a life with everything she ever wanted or needed, well besides emotional support. Her mother left when she was only 5 and with help of her older sister Kit, Melvin raised her single parent. She felt guilty after his death because the last time he tried to call her, she was too busy with a meeting and told James to take a message, once done with her meeting she call him back but got no answer, later she learned he had died due to complications of Cancer. So that day she talked to doctor Henry, he explained to her exactly what they would be doing and she thought maybe this was the only time she will be able to see her father again and apologize for being a workaholic who couldn’t take time out to talk to her own father, maybe she would see him in her dreams and he would give her his forgiveness, but little did she know he would never show up in the form she knew him as but different in ways, and also someone else would appear too that would impact her life in ways stronger than Melvin.
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Well done TibNat1, good first effort with a different ending!
Look forward to more.
TibNat1 really? SG come on now…I never heard that one before hahahaaha but thanks!
Wow! It was very interesting. and very exciting.
(but Henry and Josh?) oh, girl! :D (I had to do so much banter) ;)
I really loved every minute of this story.
the end just blew me away.
Thank you for sharing this with us. and I really hope that you come back with another great story soon!
sorry about the josh and henry thing lol
Glad you thought it was interesting and thanks for following the story and me, appreciate it
Too bad you’ve ended this story. I see a sequel to this story :) I’m just saying…
maybe im just saying ;-)
Two thumbs up for your wondeful story. Dreams interpretation huh ! Very creative. I am sure you are going to write more.. I promise to be your loyal reader. Continue to enjoy what you do best… Cheers !
that promise I hope you keep ;-) and thank you for reading every chapter and continue to support me.
That was for sure something i didn’t expected!
Wonderful story. I hope that you are gonna tell another story soon!
Thanks for sharing this one with us.
I don’t know I hope I can get another story out but if not I had fun with this one, thanks for being loyal!
Thanks for the very entertaining story. Loved it.
;-) Im happy you enjoyed it and thank you again for keeping up with the story
Thanks! Sorry to see it end!
yeah me to Cell. but always glad you read and like it
This can’t be the ending right? Thanks for sharing this adorable story but i hope this is not the last time we are going to see you flexing those writing muscles (-;
hahahhaha first let me say how thankful I am that you actually read it……now im gonna express my sadness that you haven’t updated Lover in the Dark…AAAARRRGGGGHHHHH LOL Now do you see how I feel lol
please Phacey quit keeping us waiting you exactly what im talking about.
Always a pleasure my friend and thanks for the compliment ;-)
Freud was one of the researchers on dreams (logical at that time did not have the technology we have today, continuing) and explained a very important concept: when you sleep your subconscious mind awakens. And when we wake up, wake up the conscious mind and the subconscious falls asleep. Freud also found that during the dream all our frustrated desires, emotions, thoughts that were not released during the day are released by our unconscious mind. So are our dreams, according to Freud.
You are very talented and creative.
This story goes to my favorites list.
Loved this order.
Well that could have more !!!
10 stars !!
10 stars wow! thanks for that and on your favorite list…yayyyyy :-)
Mscully you are always a loyal reader thank you for that!
I am one of the million silent readers but I can not help myself but to tell you, this story was so amazing. I hope to read more from you ….soon lol
OMG how I love silent readers, glad you came out ;-)
Thanks for taking the time out to read
OMG how I love silent readers, glad you came out ;-)
Thanks for taking the time out to read
Thanks for sharing this interesting and different story. Good job first time out. Please post a new story soon.
your welcome and thanks for reading ;-)
Just finished up this story and I have to tell you I did not foresee the twist here at the last. What a great idea, and you carried it off so wonderfully!
I laughed through much of the chapters and loved your author-asides…those were hilarious and I could even see your face as you made them and hear your voice. No, TN1, I don’t have you under surveillance :), but your “voice” and personality along with your Twitter pict really come through your writing.
On a serious note, I think Kit had it partially right a few chapters ago when she said technology would destroy us. In a way it might, but not because the technology itself isn’t good or useful, but that our own humanity often gets left behind because of it. I think about how often people are able to be cruel and judgmental via the internet because they can remain anonymous.
Anyway, I liked this story a bunch and am glad you are writing so prolifically. Dang, I wish I could write as fast and as much as you! I’ll check out your other offerings, but first I need to go back and catch up on some other writers.
Sorry for responding late but I had to go to the hospital because when I seen that you commented on my story, I fainted!lol…gosh I admire you sooo much and to have you read anything of mines or following me on twitter is just the greatest thing in the world to me, like no kidding…thanks for taking the time out to read I know you are a busy person and I appreciate it from the bottom of my heart!