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Tell Me Again – Chapter 17
Tina took a deep breath and opened the door.
Susan: Are you girls coming downstairs?
Tina: Yeah, I justBette wanted to take a shower. I had to give her a towel.
Susan: Ok. Well could you do me a favor and take out the trash and move my car in the garage? Your brothers coming over and I gotta get lunch ready.
Tina: Yeah sure
Susan headed back downstairs as Tina grabbed her cell phone off the night stand. She opened her phone seeing she had a text message from Jen.
Alice and I went out 4 brkfast. Was gonna ask u 2 join but u sounded busy. Be back soon -Jen
Tina closed her phone and threw it onto the bed and headed downstairs. She did what her mother asked and gathered all the trash and headed outside.
Tina threw of the bags of garbage in the garbage can and was about to turn back towards the house when she head a familiar but unwanted voice call her name from behind.
*There it was again, the panic. I prayed it was just my mind playing a sick cruel joke on me. I didnt want to turn around, but I did.*
Heather: Hey
*This day was officially the craziest day of my life. I stood there staring at my ex, who of course always had impeccable timing. What the ***** was she doing here? Why is this happening to me?*
Tina: What the ***** are you doing here?
Heather: Nice to see you too. She dropped her head, not really knowing what to say next.
Tina: Im sorry. Seriously, what are you doing here?
Heather: I ran into Mrs. Fry at the store and she said you were home.
Tina: And?
Heather: I wanted to see you she took a step closer.
Tina: Of course you would. I havent seen you in whatlike three years?
Heather: Yeah, its been a while. She replied softly.
They stood there silently for a moment. Heather was gazing at Tina like a long lost puppy which didnt go unnoticed by Tina.
Tina: I gotta go she shook her head and turned to walk away.
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(49 votes, average: 3.45 out of 5)
My feelings are so hurt lol I always comment you have to continue i love this story
BVHALL Dont stop I promise to comment if anly to say Thank you. I so darn busy, I do good to read all the chapter that are now up. But Thank you
I am horrible at commenting, but I have been enjoying this story from the start. I hope you change your mind, and don’t end it yet.
The dialogue rocks. Perfect pace and touch of humor. Fishing for compliments, heh?
Geez, I feel like a loser! I’m too lazy to comment sometimes…I guess I better get off my ass and start talkin’ fast or I’ll lose one of my favorite stories! LOL! Please don’t stop writing this story it is really good and I love it! I think I’m not the only one either so you can’t leave us hangin’! I hope you are going to post another chapter soon and then post another….and another…Hell, just finish the damn thing, OK?! Start another one though, ’cause I like your writing!
Hey no no no, you can’t stop, i might never left a comment before, but i’ve been reading every single chapter, and this story really kicks ass, Tina is damn kewl and fun.. i enjoy every bit of this story..
Megga- WHAT ARE YOU THINKING? Don’t stop this story! Some people just don’t know how to. . .uhhh. . .write! So there you have it! This story is fun, PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! You’ve got the stars on your side!
I’ve been enjoying this story. I hope you continue.
Please don’t stop.You have to finish.
i like it… i also like cathy… so is heather going to be trouble… please post soon…
Yeah, it’s a cool story dont stop.
No, you can’t stop writing this story, it’s awesome! I promise to be a better reader and comment more. :)
Sorry I do not leave comments that often, but I do love this story so please do not stop writing. Ohh yeah this was a great chapter more soon please.
Please, please, please do not stop this story! It is one of my favs. I will comment from now on scouts honor!
I am with every one else please don’t stop i look foward to more.
Please don’t stop your story! I usually don’t comment ’cause after I hit the 5 star it goes back to the 1st page and creates many steps that my lazy ass won’t take but I love all your stories! Please keep this one up. It’s great!
Oh shit drama coming, like Tina’s aunt!
No, no, no, no….don’t stop this story…it’s one of my favorites. I’ll comment from now on, I promise!
The plot thickens…
How about if I comment twice? Will that change your mind?
Please don’t stop, love this story/
PLease don’t stop, I love this story. Great chapter. Please post again soon
this is lookin quite interesting
please don’t stop…this is a great story!
Oh no don’t stop this story it is very good and getting better by the chapter. The drama is awesome and the two of them coming together as a couple should be very interesting. Please don’t stop writing now when I (we) are already hooked.
I really like your story please keep on writing. I will be a good girl and comment I promise.
K
Wonderful as always. Please don’t stop, it is one of my favs. I just love it.
I really like this story, please don’t end it.
Sorry for not making at comment before… Please don´t stop your story is soooo good…please :-)
Pirate don’t stop the story. Not sure if I’ve commented but when the new system came into effect I was getting such a headache trying to post my comments I stopped for a bit and then as we all know, sometimes life gets in the way! I’m sure this has happened to A LOT of us. But girl, don’t stop the story now…especially as Tina’s ex is hangin’ around. I promise to comment more often if you promise to see this series out to it’s natural end. OK? Pinky swear! (I heard those are the best b/c no one breaks them!) :)
I agree with everyone else Please Dont Stop!! THis is an interesting story.
Great story-love your sardonic sense of humor tinged with Murphy’s Law where Tina is concerned.
And the plots thickens *Dum! Dum!* Brilliant as ever. Please don’t stop wirting this story, I eagerly anticipate every new chapter.
Hey, don’t do that. it’s one of my fav stories. maybe I don’t comment every chapter but hey, let me do that in Polish and I will;) always read and like it very much.
GODDAMMIT P what the hell is wrong with you to thinking of stopping tihs story, it kicks ass!!! Tina and Jen remind me of me and my best friend katie, who there’s nothing like having back up when the family is around. “whatever you do Don’t look her in the eye” I told katie that when my grandma invited her to a dinner at there house.