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Tell Me Again – Chapter 17
Tina sat for a moment, not saying anything.
Jen: Spit it out, I have to pee!
Tina: Heather is in there!
Tina sat back and waited for a reply, or a plan, something, anything to help this situation.
Jen: Shes in there? she whispered
Tina: Yes
Jen: We have to go. Now.
Jen started the car and put it in reverse.
Jen: Sure we can, shes strong. She can find a way out.
Tina: No,
Jen and Tina nodded at each other and looked at
Jen: Whatever you do, dont look her in the eye.
–MeanwhileInside Casa de Momzilla-
Bette had made her way downstairs and into the kitchen. She saw a small blonde haired woman sitting quietly reading the news paper.
Cathy: They really need to do something about his ozone layer she smiled and looked up at Bette.
Bette: Oh, absolutely. She smiled.
Cathy: Hi, im Cathy. Tinas aunt.
Bette: Hi. Im Bette. Tinas friend.
Cathy: Right she smiled.
Bette: Do you know where she is?
Cathy: Yeah, shes outside
Bette was about to walk outside when Susan and Heather came walking through the door.
Susan: Oh, Good morning Bette.
Bette: Good morning.
Bette flashed a smile at Susan then looked over at Heather.
Susan: Oh, where are my manners. Bette this is Tinas old friend from high school, Heather, this is Bette. Tinas new friend fromcollege?
Bette: Yeah, something like that.
Heather: Nice to meet you.
Bette: Likewise
Heather knew something was up right away. Bette wasnt just a friend from college. She was wearing Tinas lucky track pants. Heather always thought it was stupid to have lucky things. She specifically remembered those pants, she tried to wear them once and Tina almost had a conniption. She said they wouldnt be lucky if someone else wore them. Heather was determined to find out the truth.
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(49 votes, average: 3.45 out of 5)
My feelings are so hurt lol I always comment you have to continue i love this story
BVHALL Dont stop I promise to comment if anly to say Thank you. I so darn busy, I do good to read all the chapter that are now up. But Thank you
I am horrible at commenting, but I have been enjoying this story from the start. I hope you change your mind, and don’t end it yet.
The dialogue rocks. Perfect pace and touch of humor. Fishing for compliments, heh?
Geez, I feel like a loser! I’m too lazy to comment sometimes…I guess I better get off my ass and start talkin’ fast or I’ll lose one of my favorite stories! LOL! Please don’t stop writing this story it is really good and I love it! I think I’m not the only one either so you can’t leave us hangin’! I hope you are going to post another chapter soon and then post another….and another…Hell, just finish the damn thing, OK?! Start another one though, ’cause I like your writing!
Hey no no no, you can’t stop, i might never left a comment before, but i’ve been reading every single chapter, and this story really kicks ass, Tina is damn kewl and fun.. i enjoy every bit of this story..
Megga- WHAT ARE YOU THINKING? Don’t stop this story! Some people just don’t know how to. . .uhhh. . .write! So there you have it! This story is fun, PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! You’ve got the stars on your side!
I’ve been enjoying this story. I hope you continue.
Please don’t stop.You have to finish.
i like it… i also like cathy… so is heather going to be trouble… please post soon…
Yeah, it’s a cool story dont stop.
No, you can’t stop writing this story, it’s awesome! I promise to be a better reader and comment more. :)
Sorry I do not leave comments that often, but I do love this story so please do not stop writing. Ohh yeah this was a great chapter more soon please.
Please, please, please do not stop this story! It is one of my favs. I will comment from now on scouts honor!
I am with every one else please don’t stop i look foward to more.
Please don’t stop your story! I usually don’t comment ’cause after I hit the 5 star it goes back to the 1st page and creates many steps that my lazy ass won’t take but I love all your stories! Please keep this one up. It’s great!
Oh shit drama coming, like Tina’s aunt!
No, no, no, no….don’t stop this story…it’s one of my favorites. I’ll comment from now on, I promise!
The plot thickens…
How about if I comment twice? Will that change your mind?
Please don’t stop, love this story/
PLease don’t stop, I love this story. Great chapter. Please post again soon
this is lookin quite interesting
please don’t stop…this is a great story!
Oh no don’t stop this story it is very good and getting better by the chapter. The drama is awesome and the two of them coming together as a couple should be very interesting. Please don’t stop writing now when I (we) are already hooked.
I really like your story please keep on writing. I will be a good girl and comment I promise.
K
Wonderful as always. Please don’t stop, it is one of my favs. I just love it.
I really like this story, please don’t end it.
Sorry for not making at comment before… Please don´t stop your story is soooo good…please :-)
Pirate don’t stop the story. Not sure if I’ve commented but when the new system came into effect I was getting such a headache trying to post my comments I stopped for a bit and then as we all know, sometimes life gets in the way! I’m sure this has happened to A LOT of us. But girl, don’t stop the story now…especially as Tina’s ex is hangin’ around. I promise to comment more often if you promise to see this series out to it’s natural end. OK? Pinky swear! (I heard those are the best b/c no one breaks them!) :)
I agree with everyone else Please Dont Stop!! THis is an interesting story.
Great story-love your sardonic sense of humor tinged with Murphy’s Law where Tina is concerned.
And the plots thickens *Dum! Dum!* Brilliant as ever. Please don’t stop wirting this story, I eagerly anticipate every new chapter.
Hey, don’t do that. it’s one of my fav stories. maybe I don’t comment every chapter but hey, let me do that in Polish and I will;) always read and like it very much.
GODDAMMIT P what the hell is wrong with you to thinking of stopping tihs story, it kicks ass!!! Tina and Jen remind me of me and my best friend katie, who there’s nothing like having back up when the family is around. “whatever you do Don’t look her in the eye” I told katie that when my grandma invited her to a dinner at there house.