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    Tell Me Again – Chapter 17

     

    Tina sat for a moment, not saying anything.

     

    Jen:  Spit it out, I have to pee!

     

    Tina:  Heather is in there! 

     

    Tina sat back and waited for a reply, or a plan, something, anything to help this situation.

     

    Jen:  Shes in there? she whispered

     

    Tina:  Yes

     

    Alice:  Who is Heather?

     

    Jen:  We have to go.  Now.

     

    Jen started the car and put it in reverse.

     

    Alice:  We cant leave Bette

     

    Jen:  Sure we can, shes strong.  She can find a way out.

     

    Tina:  No, Alice is right, we cant leave her.  We have to go back in.  We have to save her.

     

    Alice:  You guys are starting to scare me.  Who is this Heather person?

     

    Jen and Tina nodded at each other and looked at Alice. 

     

    Jen:  Whatever you do, dont look her in the eye.

     

    –MeanwhileInside Casa de Momzilla-

     

    Bette had made her way downstairs and into the kitchen.  She saw a small blonde haired woman sitting quietly reading the news paper.

     

    Cathy:  They really need to do something about his ozone layer she smiled and looked up at Bette.

     

    Bette:  Oh, absolutely. She smiled.

     

    Cathy:  Hi, im Cathy.  Tinas aunt.

     

    Bette:  Hi.  Im Bette.  Tinas friend.

     

    Cathy:  Right she smiled.

     

    Bette:  Do you know where she is?

     

    Cathy:  Yeah, shes outside

     

    Bette was about to walk outside when Susan and Heather came walking through the door.

     

    Susan:  Oh, Good morning Bette.

     

    Bette:  Good morning.

     

    Bette flashed a smile at Susan then looked over at Heather. 

     

    Susan:  Oh, where are my manners.  Bette this is Tinas old friend from high school, Heather, this is Bette.  Tinas new friend fromcollege?

     

    Bette:  Yeah, something like that.

     

    Heather:  Nice to meet you.

     

    Bette:  Likewise

     

    Heather knew something was up right away.  Bette wasnt just a friend from college.  She was wearing Tinas lucky track pants.  Heather always thought it was stupid to have lucky things.  She specifically remembered those pants, she tried to wear them once and Tina almost had a conniption.  She said they wouldnt be lucky if someone else wore them.  Heather was determined to find out the truth. 

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    Comments

    1. BVHALL Dont stop I promise to comment if anly to say Thank you. I so darn busy, I do good to read all the chapter that are now up. But Thank you

    2. Geez, I feel like a loser! I’m too lazy to comment sometimes…I guess I better get off my ass and start talkin’ fast or I’ll lose one of my favorite stories! LOL! Please don’t stop writing this story it is really good and I love it! I think I’m not the only one either so you can’t leave us hangin’! I hope you are going to post another chapter soon and then post another….and another…Hell, just finish the damn thing, OK?! Start another one though, ’cause I like your writing!

    3. Hey no no no, you can’t stop, i might never left a comment before, but i’ve been reading every single chapter, and this story really kicks ass, Tina is damn kewl and fun.. i enjoy every bit of this story..

    4. Megga- WHAT ARE YOU THINKING? Don’t stop this story! Some people just don’t know how to. . .uhhh. . .write! So there you have it! This story is fun, PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! You’ve got the stars on your side!

    5. Please don’t stop your story! I usually don’t comment ’cause after I hit the 5 star it goes back to the 1st page and creates many steps that my lazy ass won’t take but I love all your stories! Please keep this one up. It’s great!

    6. Oh no don’t stop this story it is very good and getting better by the chapter. The drama is awesome and the two of them coming together as a couple should be very interesting. Please don’t stop writing now when I (we) are already hooked.

    7. Pirate don’t stop the story. Not sure if I’ve commented but when the new system came into effect I was getting such a headache trying to post my comments I stopped for a bit and then as we all know, sometimes life gets in the way! I’m sure this has happened to A LOT of us. But girl, don’t stop the story now…especially as Tina’s ex is hangin’ around. I promise to comment more often if you promise to see this series out to it’s natural end. OK? Pinky swear! (I heard those are the best b/c no one breaks them!) :)

    8. Hey, don’t do that. it’s one of my fav stories. maybe I don’t comment every chapter but hey, let me do that in Polish and I will;) always read and like it very much.

    9. GODDAMMIT P what the hell is wrong with you to thinking of stopping tihs story, it kicks ass!!! Tina and Jen remind me of me and my best friend katie, who there’s nothing like having back up when the family is around. “whatever you do Don’t look her in the eye” I told katie that when my grandma invited her to a dinner at there house.

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