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    Tell Me Again – Chapter 17

     

    Susan:  Did you get lost? she asked blindly turning the corner.

     

    Susans face went from concern to a smile the moment she saw Heather standing in the driveway.

     

    *Wow, it certainly couldnt get any more insane than this.  I know exactly what shes gonna do next.  Shes going to invite the temptress in.  She always did know how to woo my mother.*

     

    Susan:  Heather!  So nice to see you.

     

    *Here it comes*

     

    Susan:  Are you gonna stay for lunch?

     

    *And there it is.  My world, slowly crumbling, all around me.  Where the ***** are Jen and Alice?*

     

    Heather:  Uh, yeah sure she smiled and followed Susan up the stairs.

     

    *Of course she would say yes and take the opportunity to destroy my life.  What did she expect to gain from staying for lunch, really?*

     

    Susan:  Tina?  Are you coming?

     

    Tina:  Just gonna put the car in the garage

     

    Tina watched her nemesis and her mother happily walk inside. 

     

    *This was becoming too much, I couldnt handle this.  All I wanted to do was run away, but I couldnt, Bette was still upstairs.  *****!  Bettes upstairs.  She has to be done in the shower by now.  What the ***** am I gonna do?*

     

    Just as Tina was about to lose it Jen pulled into the driveway.  Without hesitation Tina ran over to the car and jumped in the back seat.

     

    Jen:  What the ***** are you doing?

     

    Tina:  What time is it where you live?  When does lunch take three hours?

     

    Jen:  First of all, we werent gone for three hours.  I suggest you get a watch.  Second of all what are you doing?

     

    Tina:  We cant go in there.

     

    Alice:  Why?  Wheres Bette?

     

    Tina:  My aunts here.

     

    Jen:  Ohh theyre back.  I love your aunt.

     

    Tina:  She knows!

     

    Alice:  Knows what?

     

    Tina:  About me and Bette

     

    Jen:  Did you tell her?

     

    Tina:  No, I didnt tell hershe just knew 

     

    Tinas words were now laced with panic.

     

    Jen:  Well im sure everythings fine, your aunts awesome, shes not going to say anything.

     

    Tina:  Thats not all

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    Comments

    1. BVHALL Dont stop I promise to comment if anly to say Thank you. I so darn busy, I do good to read all the chapter that are now up. But Thank you

    2. Geez, I feel like a loser! I’m too lazy to comment sometimes…I guess I better get off my ass and start talkin’ fast or I’ll lose one of my favorite stories! LOL! Please don’t stop writing this story it is really good and I love it! I think I’m not the only one either so you can’t leave us hangin’! I hope you are going to post another chapter soon and then post another….and another…Hell, just finish the damn thing, OK?! Start another one though, ’cause I like your writing!

    3. Hey no no no, you can’t stop, i might never left a comment before, but i’ve been reading every single chapter, and this story really kicks ass, Tina is damn kewl and fun.. i enjoy every bit of this story..

    4. Megga- WHAT ARE YOU THINKING? Don’t stop this story! Some people just don’t know how to. . .uhhh. . .write! So there you have it! This story is fun, PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! You’ve got the stars on your side!

    5. Please don’t stop your story! I usually don’t comment ’cause after I hit the 5 star it goes back to the 1st page and creates many steps that my lazy ass won’t take but I love all your stories! Please keep this one up. It’s great!

    6. Oh no don’t stop this story it is very good and getting better by the chapter. The drama is awesome and the two of them coming together as a couple should be very interesting. Please don’t stop writing now when I (we) are already hooked.

    7. Pirate don’t stop the story. Not sure if I’ve commented but when the new system came into effect I was getting such a headache trying to post my comments I stopped for a bit and then as we all know, sometimes life gets in the way! I’m sure this has happened to A LOT of us. But girl, don’t stop the story now…especially as Tina’s ex is hangin’ around. I promise to comment more often if you promise to see this series out to it’s natural end. OK? Pinky swear! (I heard those are the best b/c no one breaks them!) :)

    8. Hey, don’t do that. it’s one of my fav stories. maybe I don’t comment every chapter but hey, let me do that in Polish and I will;) always read and like it very much.

    9. GODDAMMIT P what the hell is wrong with you to thinking of stopping tihs story, it kicks ass!!! Tina and Jen remind me of me and my best friend katie, who there’s nothing like having back up when the family is around. “whatever you do Don’t look her in the eye” I told katie that when my grandma invited her to a dinner at there house.

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