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Tell Me Again – Chapter 21
Tina: What, are you afraid?
Jen: No I am not afraid; I just dont like lakes, there just sostagnant
Tina: You are so weird she laughed Its a good thing you grew up in the city
Jen: Youre telling me.
They sat on the dock for a while chatting until Jerry called for dinner. Tina lifted her legs out of the water and porously splashed Jen.
Jen: Ew bacteria water! she shrieked as she ran up the dock.
The rest of the evening went smoothly and Tina was happy her last night in
Jerry: Oh Tina, before you go I wanted to give you something. He walked onto the house and retrieved the gift. Its a yoga mat. I know its nothing spectacular but trust me; its the best way to relieve stress. Just try it out he smiled genuinely.
Tina thanked her dad and proceeded to her car.
Jerry: You still have this thing?
Tina: Its not a thing dad, its my car.
Jerry: You still have more stuff to fit in here? he asked, peering into the back seat filled with boxes.
Tina: Yeah, I dont know how im going to fit it all in there
Jerry studied his daughters 1987 Honda Accord, question filling is his eyes.
Jerry: Why dont you take the pathfinder, its got more room
Before Tina could protest, Jerry was already clearing his things out of the SUV.
Jerry: Its safer and more reliable. Ill just use the Lexus he smiled
*He was right, I have had my car for quite some time and I knew this day would come. I loved my car, but it was just time to say good bye, plus he goes though cars like water, there was no reason for me to feel guilty for taking it*
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(34 votes, average: 3.71 out of 5)
Great chapter…glad you continued the story. I liked the difference between Tina’s parents, it was definitely as I thought it would be.
You stayed up late to post and I don’t even get to read it until today. Damn, work..it just gets in the way. Great chapter and you love to leave us hanging… ; )
Tina and Jen are funny!
Way to go dad! I like Jerry Kennard, he takes care of business! Are he and Frank lovers?
Hey, no pitstop in the Bay Area? I know you wanted to just get Tina back to L.A., but a detailed roadtrip at another time would be fun!
I love the youthful exhuberance of this story! There’s a carefree aspect to youth that gets lost as one gets absorbed in the duties and responsibilities of life. Thanks for the lift!
I can’t wait to see what Tina is going to get into next!
Love Tinas dad PBF. cant wait until B&T are together.
Hahah, you’re so evil…well, who did she see? This story’s great, please continue!
glad they got there fast… i also like tina’s dad… and i bet she sees bette… please continue
K
Wonderful chapter. SO glad she is back. You have to post again soon, like today. I am going to San Antonio tomorrow and won’t be back til Sun. lol So I need you to post today. :) Love it as always.
The stress o meter now at 12 because of the cliff hanger i need less stress!!!! post soon calm my nerves
Great job, as usual! I feel like I’m always sayin’ the same-old-same-old, ’cause your writing is so consistently wonderful! Hey, I’m going to make a guess on who it is at the planet–Alice? OK, I lied…I’m going to make another guess, just in case…Kit? Oh hell! I don’t know! I want to say Bette but I’m thinking that would be too quick. I hope it is Bette, but…I should shut up, shouldn’t I? Thanks.
OK. I officially want Tina’s dad as my fairy godfather. Looking forward to the things getting started in LA.
thank you for the kitty stamp maybe i should be first more often. the stories coming along great i love the cliffhangers. kepp them coming!