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    Tell Me Again – Chapter 21

     

    They loaded everything from Tinas car into her fathers Pathfinder.

     

    Jerry:  See, look how much more room you have.

     

    Tina thanked her dad once again and said goodbye.

     

     

    –Tinas Apartment-

     

    Tina woke up early the next morning completely energized.  It was a beautiful morning, the sun was just coming up and there was barely a cloud in the sky.  Tina threw the last few items lying around the apartment into a box then headed off to the shower.

     

    An hour later she had finished packing the car and was taking one last look around.

     

    *This was it.  I was really leaving, again.  The thought of change always intrigued me but the chance of change actually happening was always slim.  Im proud of myself for taking the right initiative for once.  As I walked down the steps of my apartment my excitement grew.  I really couldnt wait to see Dana and the boys again, maybe even someone else.  I forgot how much I really loved LA.*

     

     

    –Jens House-

     

    Tina pulled into Jens driveway and quietly stepped inside.  She walked through the breezeway and into the kitchen where she walked right into Jens bags, all five of them.  Tina quietly cursed out her friend and rubbed her shin.  She could hear the shower still running so she took it upon herself to load her friends bags into the car, trying to hurry the situation as much as possible.

     

    Tina finished loading the bags into the car and smoked a cigarette before walking back into the house. 

     

    Tina looked over at the clock on the microwave, it was six thirty five.  They were already five minutes behind schedule, Tina wasnt pleased.  She was about to run upstairs to retrieve her friend but just as she was turning the corner Jen came running downstairs.

     

    Jen:  Im sorry, my alarm didnt go off.

     

    Tina:  Mm hmm.  You ready?

     

    Jen:  Yes

     

    Jen walked over to the fridge and grabbed a couple of apples before following Tina outside.

     

     

    –On the Road-

     

    They climbed in the car and minutes later were cruising at a steady speed on I-5.  The first eight hours of the trip went smooth.  There was no traffic and only one state trooper sighting.  Jen had passed out a couple of times but Tina was still completely awake, still running on excitement. 

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    Comments

    1. You stayed up late to post and I don’t even get to read it until today. Damn, work..it just gets in the way. Great chapter and you love to leave us hanging… ; )

    2. Way to go dad! I like Jerry Kennard, he takes care of business! Are he and Frank lovers?

      Hey, no pitstop in the Bay Area? I know you wanted to just get Tina back to L.A., but a detailed roadtrip at another time would be fun!

      I love the youthful exhuberance of this story! There’s a carefree aspect to youth that gets lost as one gets absorbed in the duties and responsibilities of life. Thanks for the lift!
      I can’t wait to see what Tina is going to get into next!

    3. K
      Wonderful chapter. SO glad she is back. You have to post again soon, like today. I am going to San Antonio tomorrow and won’t be back til Sun. lol So I need you to post today. :) Love it as always.

    4. Great job, as usual! I feel like I’m always sayin’ the same-old-same-old, ’cause your writing is so consistently wonderful! Hey, I’m going to make a guess on who it is at the planet–Alice? OK, I lied…I’m going to make another guess, just in case…Kit? Oh hell! I don’t know! I want to say Bette but I’m thinking that would be too quick. I hope it is Bette, but…I should shut up, shouldn’t I? Thanks.

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